Date: 08/28/10 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 22
Poor Shelby :( The ending of this chap was cute! I like the relationship between them too.
Date: 08/27/10 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 22
A cellphone....owh yeah! Go Ally!
Date: 08/27/10 06:12 am Title: Chapter 22
so sad :(
i think mason has something up his sleeve as well. cant wait to see what happens!
Date: 08/27/10 02:53 am Title: Chapter 22
Awww! Ally is so sweet! Glad I'm not Shelby right now cuz I would have given my parents the silent treatment for a looooooong time! She'll n Mason need to put a plan togeter so they can see each other without parents.
Author's Response: I would have given them the silent treatment too! Of course, that's kind of what she's doing. I think she's pretty much only talking to Ally---and yelling at all the boys. :)
Date: 08/27/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 22
Oh I love Ally. Sneaky like her dad used to be. I just wonder why all of the parents are being such assholes? They did the same thing when they were young especially AJ & Kevin. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I love Ally too :) I guess AJ's thinking that a more stringent parenting style will be effective...he's SO delusional :)
Date: 08/27/10 12:20 am Title: Chapter 22
I love Ally now, yay for sweet little sisters. And Brayden and Tristan are little versions of Shelby. Oh lord, the things they'll do one day.
Date: 08/26/10 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 22
HOORAY FOR ALLY!! She reminds me a lot of my own sister, the only difference is that my own sister is Shelby's age lol. ;)
And I got tears in my eyes when they said goodbye. I was listening to 'Lionel Richie - Pastime' while reading it. I don't know if you like Lionel Richie but you should look up the song. I think the lyrics suit Shel's feelings for Mason (and viceversa).
One more thing, if Shel wouldn't have Ally, I think she'd just sneak out and do anything to go back to Kentucky even if that is taking another plane back LOL!
Author's Response: I love Lionel Rchie...that IS the perfect song :) I adore Ally...it's kind of laying the groundwork for her own story. :) I think Ally's the only thing saving AJ's butt right now!
Date: 08/26/10 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 22
Omg so can't wait to see what happens amazing job
Date: 08/26/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
I honestly cried reading the airport thing!
Author's Response: :( yeah it bummed me out to write it!
Date: 08/26/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 22
But dude, Mom & Dad PAY the cell phone bill & will prolly notice the long distance calls to Kentucky! Lol. Oh, Shelby. They are gonna screw you over big time.
But somehow, I had a feeling that Ally would help her out in the Mason department - lol. Yay for Ally!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. I absolutely LOVED the ninja comment!!!!!! It made me smile! :)
Author's Response: Gleem for ninjas! :) And gleem for Ally!
Date: 08/26/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 22
:( Poor Shelby and Mason. But Ally's got a great idea... ;) I wonder how long it will take for Shelby to get caught...
Author's Response: Shelby? Get caught? Never!
Date: 08/26/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 22
"Dan's complaints about noisy night squirrels on the roof." Oh now I remembered AJ's Teenage Wildlife video... ohhh yes! "ME WANT BANANA! ME WANT BANANA!" What's up with the Mclean's and monkeys? Anyways... Ally with a cellphone.. mm.. and they NEVER thought that Shel's tiny lill soldier (loved that!) wouldn't be there for her? Their friendship is so beautiful! Poor Mason.... NEXT!
Author's Response: Too bad they weren't noisy night squirrels :) LoL I know McLeans have a thing for monkeys, haha. :)
Date: 08/26/10 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 22
YES I build an ALLEY AND SHELBY FANCLUB :)
Date: 08/26/10 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 22
They weren't even going to let Mason go. Asshats. Keeping pushing them, they're going to push back harder.
I teared up. What a great little sister.
Author's Response: I love it! Asshats! :) Ally roxs
Date: 08/26/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 22
GO ALLY! I really wish Molly and AJ would lighten up and actually consider Shelby's feelings. I really do things work out in the end, you have me Hooked on this story i'm practically checking every five minutes for an update lol.
Author's Response: You'll find out why Molly's being such a ...***** but not until later. AJ is just, well, being a dad but not the 'cool' dad by far!
