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Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 23

Oh Shel, you are brilliant! Sooooo sneaky and smart... you REALLy think.. mmm... now let's see.
And Joe.. hahah such a daddy's son!
hahah
It IS complicated Al!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 23

Haha, nice acting job by both Shelby and Ally, sneaky little things...on to the next chapter...

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 23

I hope they can see each other soon. Can't wait for for more.

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 23

Aww yay she got to talk to Mas. Although i do have a feeling that will backfire on her at some point. Like someone else said in a review... Aj and Molly must pay the bill so they might see Ally has been calling long distance.

And the more Ally appears in this, the more i can't wait to read her story when she's 16!

Author's Response: That was the good part of Shelby's story...you get a sneak peek at Ally. :) Well, I think we're moving on to the next chapter!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 23

She should've asked if A.J. gets the bill for this - lol. I mean, I am sure it's gonna show they called long distance & Ally's gonna end up losing her phone 'cause of you Shel.

I think they should run away together. Mason can drive so far in his truck, Shel can take a bus or something, & then when she meets up with Mason, they hop a plane off to somewhere. But somehow, they hafta do all this undetected - lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: LoL I love how you are plotting two 16-year-olds escapes. very sneaky Lenni! And I agree--she should have asked if AJ got the bill but that would have made the lady suspicious and you know how evil those salesladies can get!

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 23

hello, just letting you know I am still reading this and OMG! Poor shel and Mason... I hope she can really pull the cell phone stint without AJ finding out. I am constantly checking for an update... love this.

Author's Response: Aw thanks :) I already wrote the next chapte and it took me a moment ro remember you guys haven't read it yet! LoL so I'll keep quiet for now :)

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 23

This is going to get her into even more trouble right? Allys the best but i feel like the parents will not be pleased that she got dragged into this mess. Love it though cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Ah trouble....the girl's the poster child. :)

Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 23

Hmmmm..I wonder if Shelby ever thought to google her dad? That would give her plenty of background info on just how hypocritical he can be. ;o) Still waiting on Molly to speak up though! I just hope this phone thing doesn't come back to bite her in the butt (which is probably will, cuz it always does)! God bless Ally. What a sweetie.

Author's Response: Oh Google can be a dangerous place :) But you're right...there's TONS of dirt!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 23

Oh Shelby I feel your pain. And Ally you must really love your sister to risk the wrath of AJ. I wonder when Shelby will snap & point out how many woman her dad had in the past and give him hell. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Ally loves everyone...she's too sweet for her own good. Which will cause trouble later on...MUCH later on.

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 23

Aw, they are too sweet. Shelby is devious, going behind AJ and Molly's backs like that.

Author's Response: Shelby's desperate....a desperate Shelby is NEVER good.

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 23

Awwwwww, I hope things blow over and they can be together. You know i wonder if Shelby will go down for Ice Cream anymore with AJ, i doubt it though. I love Ally i wish i had a sister like her, here in the states i am officiailly an only child but in Cuba i have two half brother i have never seen before. But you have me on the edge of my seat. I swear I keep checking for updates at about every 5 minutes lol.

Author's Response: I'm an only child too but I would LOVE to have a sister like Ally. :) Actually, the ice cream tradition will come up again. Trust me :)

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 23

So I was just checking out Youtube, I wanted to play Katy Perry's song: Teenage Dream (check it out)....and all of a sudden I thought, wow this song fits perfectly with Love Story. So I wanted to tell you that but to my surprise I saw you already posted a new update! Awesome. Shelby finally talked to Mason, yay.

Author's Response: LoL my husband is obsessed with that song, so yes I've heard it. I agree it is fitting! :) Actually I used Taylor Swift's 'Love Story' as the model for this story. Loosely, of course.