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Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 27

That was nice of Kevin and AJ to give back their phone and computer time. I hope Mason tells her soon about what happen in the shower.

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 27

Aw, yay for a decent ending. Hopefully things will be looking up for awhile. On to the next one...

Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 27

Yay! AJ finally removed the needle from up his butt. Now, about that "pull out" slip up.....

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 27

YAHOO! She told him off but with respect. I never expected him to give in even a little bit. I guess he is human after all. I can see why he was like that. He doesn't want her to make the same mistakes he did. Now for her to remember that Mason came without a condom. Uh oh. I see trouble ahead. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: LoL yeah well AJ has that problem of trying to please everyone and so that gets him into trouble. And your right...he doesn't want her to turn into Shelby-No-Name or anything :)

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 27

Oh I'm so glad they realized they were overreacting on Shel and Mason! At least they can call and she got her laptop back. I'm glad AJ and Shel are eating ice cream again. I like him more now. (:

Glad they're over that drama. But I guess there's more drama to come. ;)

Author's Response: I like AJ more now too :)

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 27

I couldn't have been more shocked if Nick would pounced out of my computer screen naked at AJ's reaction. I just sat here with my mouth hanging open and staring...lol!! Glad that he saw the flaw in his punishment tho. Nice job!

Author's Response: Mason was >< this close to being plungered! lmao

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 27

At least neither one is dead, yet. Thank goodness AJ is starting to get it, the same can't be said for Kevin though.

Author's Response: Kevin's a tougher cookie to crack :S

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 27

great recovery.... i was starting to think... oh yeah aj just happened to forget something. but this... shelby and mason getting to talk.... that just made my day! GO TEAM SHELBY!

Author's Response: Yup! Got to love ice cream talks too :)

Reviewer: Basilia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 27

i really like the story so far, im glad that kevin and aj are starting to realize that the more they keep shelby and mason apar the more their gonna want to be with eachother....but shelby really does need to start listening.....cant wait till the next chapter!!! Keep up the good work!!!
P.s.- aslo cant wait till the other girls get their stories going!!!

Author's Response: Glad you're reading along! I'm excited about Brooke's and I THINK I might start her story sometime this weekend. :) Right now Shelby's keeping me busy!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 27

God, can they just let Mason say what he hasta tell her already!? Or is he gonna tell her via phone and/or email??? I bet anything he wasn't wearing a condom & let his load off in her when A.J. spooked them - lol.

I'm glad Kevin & A.J. are backing off just a little. They were stressing ME out with all the pointy stick pacing/guarding I was having to do. I do NOT like to go all Ninja Turtle on ANY of my Boys.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. YAY FOR ICE CREAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: LoL AJ's backing off more than Kev. But still it's better than before. I didn't want to have to keep you up all night protecting Shelby and Mason. :) And yeah I wouldn't want to go 'turtle' on the guys either. I would SO have other plans. LoL

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 27

Amazing job. I sure. Hope she doesn't get pregnant. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: nickslilmami Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 27

That girl still isn't listening but I think we'll have a pregnancy scare very soon. Keep those chapters coming, I can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 27

Shelby has no idea huh? Mason tried to tell her but no,,,she's clueless now but oh boy in a couple of weeks/months, who knows? ;)

I'm glad 'the parents' from both sides are handeling the drama a bit better now.

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 27

Omg so much to comment on.... lol.

first of all.. LOVE your concert pictures! I love that show so much.

Second... the chapter before this.. wowzer! My heart was in my throat when AJ barrelled into the house like a mad man. I was so sure he would of ripped Mason's head off (or heads... muahaha)

And thirdly.. i LOVE how AJ handled it this time. he actually listened to Shelby and thats definitely a start.
But poor Mason... trying to apologise for doing the dirty unprotected... honey pulling out still doesn't stop you getting someone pregnant LOL

So now i'm wondering if in a month or so time (in the story that it) if Shelby will be missing a period or too.

Drama! i love it!!!

Author's Response: LoL that was a lot to comment on! But I 'loves' it :) I was going to have AJ kill Mason (well, not literally) but then I decided that Mr. Crazy needed to calm down a little bit. This is AJ after all. Anyone that can dance on stage in THOSE orange undies can't be that strict of a parent. I mean Seriously. LoL. And drama is my middle name! (well, not literally). -- Off to write some more!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 27

aww... i am so glad they both got their phone ond computer privleges back!
Man, i was holding my breath there for a minute, i was so sure Shel was gonna pull the "not my dad" card... sooooo glad i was wrong
LMAO @ AJ coming @ Mas with a plunger? PRICELESS! And also "So stop acting like an irrational douchebag and listen to me."
:) so can't wait for more
:::taps foot impatiently:::

Author's Response: LoL oh no there's impatience! haha I can only hope that my professors don't feel like doing much today. I'm crossing my fingers to get a lot of typing done between classes to get some chapters stored up for ya'all once homework DOES hit! And yeah, I absolutely love the mental image of AJ with a plunger. :)