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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 28

Serves that asshole right!

And I've the sinking suspicion that Shelby is pregnant! Oye vey in a half shell. I bet Mason never got a chance to tell her what he needed to tell her either - prolly 'cause of Kevin & the McLean - blast it all to Hell!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I'd rather do other things to the Boys too - hehe. ;)

Author's Response: Perfect timing! I posted the next chapter right when I saw you reviewed. :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 28

I actually really liked this chapter, it was sort of "normal" for Shelby and whatnot. That sucks about her sketchbook getting taken but it as awesome that she threw up on that jock! Take that asshole! :D

Author's Response: LoL yeah once summer is over Shelby gets more of a 'normal' teen thing going on. :)

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 28

another gr8 chapter :)

I found this one of the show http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cLis7QC-khE

Author's Response: I will SO have to watch that when I get home! I found tons of videos on YouTube this morning :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 28

Awwww Jen, God bless you!! Send my greetings!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 28

Oh gosh I knew as soon as they got into the shower she was going to end up pregnant but I really hope she is just sick. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 28

Awww poor girl can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 28

Okay....... Alex is a WAY cooler dad than Kevin.. just saying. Oh and the ice creams, love those.
"I GOT HER UP!" he announced. I sooo can see this here at home, believe me.... AWFUL!
Morning sickness..... NO WAY, JEN!
Molls will get crazy with all these kids.... DRAMA!
NEXT!!!

Author's Response: I thought of you today Gabby. One of my professors (well, she's actually teaching two of my communication courses) is from Brazil. :)

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 28

uh oh... was that.. MORNING SICKNESS?

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 28

Oh wow so glad you are back and had a good time at the concert! Though i have to say at least in a public school Shelby might find someone like her at least at a good chance and a teacher who understands her art. I do also love how kevin and AJ are coming to their sences please keep up the good work right now your story is getting me throuhg my first trimester lol

Author's Response: Well I'm glad I'm here to get you through! I agree, a public school has all walks of life. I think she probably WOULD like it more. But I won't say anything else right now. :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 28

Sigh. I really hope she is sick and not pregnant. She needs to live her life before having that huge responsibility on her shoulders. But it's not just her fault or Mason's. The parents are too blame for not recognizing the fact that she was planning to be sexually active. There is birth control people. Ugh, sorry this is a real sore subject for me especially when you live with it in real life. I don't think 16 is too young but there are ways to prevent this from happening.

Great job. I can't wait for what else you have planned. :-)

Author's Response: I agree with EVERYTHING you said. :)

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 28

Poor Shelby. She'll never live that down, time to move to Kentucky! lol Btw, if you find the youtube video of Nick on Brian please give me the link. lol I love me some Frick-n-Frack action. :)

Author's Response: I would never be able to live that down! They've begun to post videos of the Cincy concert. I'm going to upload them tonight and see if SOMEONE caught the piggy back ride. It happened on my side of the stage :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 28

Oh lord I think she is pregnant. Now that will really go over well. I hope she is ok. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 28

Aw poor Shelby! I have to say that I e xected AJ to act a lot worse when catching them. I guess he figured that the further away he kept them, the more rules they would break. Makes sense. I'm glad they're allowed to talk again. And damn, I smell a pregnancy scare coming for sure!

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 28

Uh ohhh... i smell morning sickness!

And those kids on the bus... totally deserved her barfing up on them! Ugh i so dont miss school days!

Author's Response: I don't miss school either...AT all. been there, done that!