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Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 29

Oh I bet she is pregnant and had a miscarriage. Shit this will devastate her and Mason. I hope she is ok. Keep up thew excellent work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 03:10 am Title: Chapter 29

OMG!!!! You're killing me. And I see that this is the last update of the night. Boooo. What a crazy good chapter. I'm dying to know what's going on. I'm assuming she's miscarrying, had an ectopic pregnancy, or maybe just having complications?? Either way, I'm dying.

Oh and LOL at Joe and "Mom, Shelby's dead!"

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 01:34 am Title: Chapter 29

Oye vey in a half shell!!!! I bet she had a miscarriage!!!! God, that's just HORRIBLE!!!!!!!! I'd be crying too if I didn't know wtf was going on & saw all that blood! Jeez!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. Screw homework! You're killing us here! Lol.

Author's Response: Ugh this is going to be a rough semester. I got back on to check reviews. I'm alternating between answering homework questions and working on ch. 30. Even so you all ain't getting it 'til tomorrow morning. :) You won't be disappointed!

Reviewer: MadisonAve Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 29

Oh my gosh!! Did she miscarry? It's so suspenseful.

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 12:07 am Title: Chapter 29

OMG!! Noo, no, no! Can't she have one good thing happen to her?!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 29

Did she miscarry? UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!!!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 29

I hope everything is ok with Shelby.

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 29

Dude and I just realized, at the rate you're going Love Story is going to surpass With the Band in reviews. :-o Awesome.

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 29

Wow, I wonder if its a miscarriage. I didn't see that coming if it was.

Great job and thanks for that cliffy. Now everybody is going to bug you to update today. LOL I hate that summer is ending. Fan fic updating is going to slow down. Sniff.

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 29

Poor Shelby! I would have been soooo scared if I woke up with a lot of blood on clothes and bed.

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 29

HAHA im replying to your response... i think you should mark half the papers, write the rest of the chappy, post for your adoring fans (is that what we are? LMFAO) then mark the rest and come back to hundred of reviews.

cos you know we're all dying here right? AHHAHA

Author's Response: Oh I know you're all dying...wait, what am I doing on here? I have to start my homework!

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 29

oh no.... i have a bad feeling but dont wanna say anything.

Reviewer: SCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 29

they didn't use a condom and she was pregnant and now..... omg poor shelby and manson isn't by her side *sigh* get well soon shelby *sigh*

Author's Response: Oh you guys are making me so want to post another update tonight...because I know what happens and you don't! (wow, I just kind of rubbed that in right there--lol)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 29

WHOA, what the...? MORE MORE MORE! OMG!

Author's Response: I knew I was going to cause a ruckus by making this my last update of the day. While you guys aren't amused I so TOTALLY am!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 29

omg u cant leave it there, so cant wait for more. u need to update again today hehe.

Author's Response: sorry I have 150 pages of textbooks to get through before wednesday! I'm squeezing in writing time wherever I can but no more today. :(