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Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 31

She is a good role model. With the kind of family she has normal is way out the window. I just hope they keep it and raise it together. She will have a lot of family support except for Kevin. Please keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Oh you never know...Kevin just may come around after all ::smile::

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 31

Mason is such a sweetie, not a lot of guys would be that supportive at their age. Hell not at a lot of ages.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 31

Hey, everybody makes mistakes. Nobody's perfect.

(Nobody's perfect, I gotta work it. Again, & again until I get it right. You live & you learn it, even if I mess it up sometimes. Nobody's perfect)

Well, maybe Brian is......sort of.....lol. ;)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. Why wouldn't I love Mason? He's sweet as pie! Lol.

Author's Response: Brian is close to perfect. I've got to admit that. :) And awww...Mason's swet as pie. I LIKE that!

Reviewer: nickslilmami Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 31

So Mason wants to marry her? Aww how sweet that he's even thinking about that kind of future with her. I'm kinda hoping that she'll keep it and they'll raise the child together, they may be young but they both have a good head on their shoulders. They'll make it through I know they will.

Any chance for another chapter today or are you gonna keep us hanging? lol. I'm not good with waiting!

Author's Response: Ah, Mason is the kind of guy you want to snag fast. Also, I have to LoL because you're not the first person to ask about a third update (greedy people!). I have another chapter finished and ready to post so, yes, I am going to spoil ya'all with another chapter. Look for it in about three hours. :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 31

And YES, Alex and Molls screwed at this. They have a dark past, they KNOW all these things and STILL.. nothing. I think that they suffer still with that, and take the 'I don't see a thing' road is easier than face their past.
Not the smart thing to do. Now they WILL have to face this... it hurts the most with your kids.

Author's Response: Yup they are going to face the music...but Shel and Mason are suffering for it. :S

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 31

Jesus.... Mas is such a great young man, they screwed but Kevin did a great job with his character. "Hey, you're not dead!" Joe..... that kid... I think She's thinking if her baby be that way... hahhah..
Oh Lord, this is serious.... poor Molls, I knew she had this past. Alex is an amazing man!!
Now we know about the musician thing, THAT was the thing!
Now they must face the reality, say it in loud voice. Oh Ally....
Jesus....

Author's Response: Mas is a great guy. I love his character. :) And Joe...there are no words :)

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 31

I feel so bad for them, this is not a choice 16 year olds are ready for =/ AJ and Molly should have been more open with Shelby.. Or they should have taken my moms example, give the kid (aka me) a evil look, say that you don't approve, but if you're gonna do it anyway, play safe :)

Author's Response: Which is what Kristin did...unfortunately she wasn't in the picture for all this otherwise I think things would have turned out differently. It all totally, in the words of Shelby AND Mason...SUCKS.

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 31

Ok so im all caught up!

Poor Poor Shelby. To have a partial misscarriage at 16.. well thats alot for someone so young to take on, and then ontop of that realise she still is pregnant. I'm glad she's gonna go through with the pregnancy, and a biiig part of me wants her and Mason to keep the baby too. I think she would be a good mom!

And as for Molly and AJ... im disapointed in them. I mean they knew that Mason and Shelby were trying to sleep together, and even though they banned Shelby from talking to Mason Molly still could of taken Shelby to get birth control. Especially is Molly had been exactly the same. Major fail there.

And i have a feeling that even though Shelby thinks she's going to be a bad role model for Ally, i actually think this will be a positive for Ally. I mean the kid seems so much mature that her brother (which is normal anyways) but by Ally watching her big sister go through pregnancy and birth thats enough to put a young girl off doing anything silly.

then again i would hope Aj and Molly see sense and put Ally on birth control as soon as she gets a boyfriend.

Aaaaanyways thats the end of my review haha. Any chance of another update today? :::cheeses, batts eyelids and anything remotely stupid that might make you post more::: haha

Author's Response: Did I mention I love in depth reviews? Because I do. :) No, I can't even imagine going through what she's going through at only sixteen years old. As I told someone else in a response, Molly and AJ just totally screwed up. You can't even sugar coat it. Molly had a similar experience and she put on blinders and didn't get Shelby what she needed. As for Ally...you might be on to something there :) And, last but not least, there WILL be a third update today! I do enjoy remotely stupid things, btw. LoL

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 31

I knew this was going to happen! But for some reason I was still stunned when it did happen. Poor Shel. :( Now I have to think of MTV's 16 And Pregnant or something. Lol, the second programme of MTV I'm thinking of in this story. I wonder how Ally and Joe are going to react. I think Joe will soften and won't make an annoying comment. (: Of course, I still love Ally. She's so sweet!

Author's Response: LoL yeah I was thinking about that show too! You're not alone. I've written the next chapter and don't do an indepth play by play of how they react but I do mention it. Joe's just born to be annoying so don't think any good streak will last TOO long! And I love Ally too. I almost don't want to grow her up. She's such a sweet eleven year old. :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 31

Wow, I hope that they keep the baby because they obviously both have the resources (financial and otherwise) to raise it, but they're also 16 and scared out of their ever-loving minds. What a twist. Update soon.

Author's Response: I agree that the resources are there. And that they ARE completely scared / freaked out / in shock. I'm a big fan of my twists, lol. :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 31

Poor Shelby. I hope it will get easier for her soon no sixteen year old should go through this. Can't wait for more. You are doing such an amazing job.

Author's Response: I agree with you completely. And thanks. :)

Reviewer: Sevily Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 31

I'm one of those horrible readers that reads but doesn't review. But I feel I have to after this chapter. This hits so close to home for me. I know what Shelby is going through. Kudos to making your characters real and super relate-able (in all your stories. See I told I was horrible). :)

Author's Response: Ah I'm glad you came out of hiding though. :) This is a tough subject but one that there's no denying happens. Even to the 'good' kids. I knew going into this that if I was going to go through with this plotline that the raw emotions of it happening to a teenager were not going to be easy to write. I'm glad I'm on the right track. :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 31

wow... i don't even know what to say, really... just... awesome chapter.... so glad both sets of parentals are being at least semi okay about it....