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Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 32

At least they are talking and not yelling. I think she will be a wonderful mom. It just takes time. I really want her and Mason to work it out and stay together. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 05:20 am Title: Chapter 32

wow! cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 01:42 am Title: Chapter 32

You'll learn patience Shel. Once you look into those little eyes, you'll be madly in love with a baby, Trust me. Only in my case, it's everyone else's babies! Lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: LoL I am SUCH a sucker for babies...I know exactly what you mean!

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 32

Now you see it Molly, AJ and Kevin. After the fact. Oh well what's done is done. I can't wait to see what happens with all this.

Coming home from work (with newborns no less lol) and seeing all these chapters makes me forget the long day at work. Thanks. :-)

Author's Response: Aw Rachel your welcome :) I'm highly enjoying my work on this story.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 32

Amazing job can't wait to see how it all will play out. Loved it.

Author's Response: I can't wait to see how it plays out either! haha just kidding. :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 32

I just looooooooove you Shameless plugs.... btw!
Man... *sighs* Mas got guts! He haven't fear of die!
Well, Santa was gracious about the house thing. Wow.. he thought about it all... if I were Shel I would freak out with all that.....
BREATH!
School, pregnant, live in Kentucky, marriage.... JESUS! LORD!
Hey.. the Party at Carters!!! And K!!! YAY!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, way too much stuff was thrown at her with that little bedroom conversation. Poor girl, her head's spinning. :S

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 32

Man, this is all happening so fast and there's so many decisions to be made. This is nuts. lol Great job and thanks for another chapter.

Author's Response: Nuts sums it up really well!

Reviewer: SweetDsPixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 32

Its been a while since i reviewed!
Wow this story been amazing. you are so good at capturing those emotions.
I feel for Shel poor girl. But i know she can do it.
Mas seems overly postive for a 16year but am sure on the inside he is going crazy.

Author's Response: Yeah I think he's trying to keep like twelve paces ahead because the actual moment is too scary. Does that sound like a good psychological diagnosis? :)

Reviewer: nickslilmami Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 32

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Have I mentioned how awesome you are? :-p

Three udates in one day gotta love that. As for Only In My Dreams lots of Carter action you say? YES! Sorry...teenybopper moment. lol.

Mason is so grown up he's already thinking ahead. If only all guys could be like him. I really hope things work out and I know they'll make great parents that definitely won't be a problem. And did Kevin admit he handled it wrong? Go Addy!

Your stories are just awesome and ai'm always checking for updates even at work. That's how hooked I am and if I get in trouble I'm blaming you. (just kidding) :-p

Author's Response: Addy had nothing to do with Kevin's apology...that goes to the ex-Mrs. Richardson. :) LoL trust me if I get in trouble at work I'm going to blame all you guys. I've been sneaking in a lot of writing. LoL.

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 32

Kevin finally came to his senses!! Dang Mas, we're getting a little ahead of ourselves here aren't we? The baby's not even born yet! But it's uber sweet. :)

Author's Response: LoL yup I daresay that Kristin ripped Kevin a new one over the phone. And yeah, Mason's getting WAY carried away. (but, psst, it is kinda sweet, lol)

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 32

Awww now i want to scoop Shelby up like a little puppy and cuddle her. She's so confused, and dare i say a little intimidated by Mason's future plans.

I kinda see myself in Shelby with her "taking things day by day" attitude. She had no idea whats gonna happen the next day, let alone when she leaves school, yet now she's second guessing it all because she's pregnant and Mason's got all these plans. It's almost like she wishes she had plans for her future.

And I'm glad Kevin admitted they had treated them wrong initially. Although... poooooor attempt at a apology. It's one word... SORRY. LOL

And why do i picture toddler Nick when she pictures a mini version of him? Damn Kev and Kris having a Nick spawn. HAHA

And for shelby's fears about her patience... i think she will realise when he babies born that having patience for siblings,and then patience for your own child is completely different.
All else fails... call Aunt Liv. She had the patience of a saint after caring for baby brooke when she was a screamer, HAHA.

I'm wondering now if this review is longer than my last... and hoping its indepth enough for you :) haha

Author's Response: LoL oh wow I'm about ready to scoop up your review and hug it like a puppy, haha. No, I really do feel sorry for Shelby. She's getting complicated to write because the whole situation is so complication. I mean, Mason's like six months younger than her and he sounds like he has it together. Either that or he's just a BIG dreamer. Kevin HATES to say sorry...i think that's the only apology they're going to get, lol. I picture a little Nick when Shelby pictured a mini-Mason. I have to admit that he is such a darn cute toddler. You also get kudos for your analogy about your own child vs. siblings. Haha about Aunt Liv. You're actually going to see her and the whole Carter clan next chapter. :)

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 32

HUGE question!