Date: 09/01/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 33
And why a new Carter doesn't surprise moi.... Welcome to the Team Landon!!!
Oh the sweet reality... love THIS Party at Casa de Carters!
Date: 09/01/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 33
Great chap. I have to say that I was not expecting for the grandpas to be to just blurt out the news like that. Lol. And I'm kind of sad that Kevin didn't know that Nick and Liv had another baby. Do they not keep in touch? Lol. And I love the name Landon. I love reading about Nicks family...they're a lot of fun. It was great to "see" the other families in this chap.
And I love how you ended it. Thanks for another update.
Author's Response: Kevin doesn't keep in touch as much as the other guys. I mean AJ and Nick keep in touch because they live so close. And Brooke's best friends with Kayleigh. And with all the 'Mason/Shelby' drama of the summer I'm sure AJ didn't sit around and talk to Kev a lot about the Carters. And then there's Howie who will reappear once I get to Brooke's story. He's MIA right now, lol.
Date: 09/01/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 33
Review tiime! I actually read this update on my break in work, but alas... stupid phone won't let me sign in, and i kinda forgot what i wanted to review back then :( Buuut I still have more to say HAHA
One thing that stuck in my mind... well several actually.. One was how Nick and Brooke were with each other. A father who absolutely dotes on his daughter, and a daughter who idolises her father. I know you didn't write much interaction with them, but i kinda read between the lines.
And another.. How everyone took Shelby and Mason's news. Nick was speechless. probably because he thought he had foot in mouth syndrome with bringing the ginger babies up, and he's probably imagining what it would be like if it was Brooke pregnant at 16. And Liv's reaction... pretty much sums up how anyone who knows them would probably feel.
It's pretty much hit home for Shelby and Mason now, the fact she will have a tiny baby of her own. It probably sounds real easy to them, having a kid... but she only held Landon for a few moments before freaking. Landon's obviously only crying because he's picked up on her nervous state, but i can already tell Shelby's going to think its because she's not going to be a good mom.
So yea i still cant remember what i was originally going to write. I'll probably review again when i do haha!
Any more updates for today?
Author's Response: Ooh I really love psychological analysis of my writing...especially when it's SO dead on. So let's see...I'm all alone here at work so I will pick this up bit by bit. I'm SO glad you caught the whole Nick/Brooke thing. He thinks Peyton's cute as a button but there's still that bond between Nick and Brooke. I get warm fuzzies. :) Nick def. had foot in the mouth syndrome and Liv totally echoes everyone's sentiments. I actually continued Liv's line of thought in chapter 34 (as you will see). Shelby and Mason are going to have a lot of those 'brick wall' moments before this story is all done. And you're right, Shel's got a horrible fear that she's going to be a big screw up...but it was just Landon picking up on the stress. You'll see a better side of that, again, in chapter 34. So, in conclusion, I hope you get another break at work because I just posted another update! Probably going to be the last one today...I had school all morning and I work until 10 tonight. But I have tomorrow off so maybe I'll be uber lazy between homework assignments and go on a writing spree!
Date: 09/01/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 33
nick is awesome. babies are overwhelming. sorry this comment isnt better.
Author's Response: Haha Nick is awesome. I miss writing about him all the time. Any crazy thing I can think of I can write through him and it can be believable. :)
Date: 09/01/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 33
Another great chapter. How old would all the kids be in this one, I'm curious. lol And yet another Carter baby! Landon! How cute! I liked the end of this, having Shelby hold him. Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Oh no...my math sucks. Okay here we go. If Shelby's sixteen that would make Brooke twelve. Kayleigh is right behind her. Noah's eleven. Peyton would be nine. Landon of course is two weeks old. Joe and Ally are about a year older than Dan...so eleven and ten respectively. I think that's everyone! :)
Date: 09/01/10 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 33
She needs to get used to it now. I think she will be a good mother because she has great role models. And I knew Nick and Liv would have more kids. I really want everything to work out for them. keep up thew wonderful work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Nick and Liv are guinea pigs...lol, just saying. Even though if they had kept going like they started out they would have like fifteen kids by then. So I've got to give them kudos for just four. :)
Date: 09/01/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 33
I know I comment rarely, but I decided to comment now :). This story is so good! I can't believe Shelby's pregnant.. Weirdddd..!
I just have to say I've missed Nick and Liv! I l really loved the stories with them! Please tell me you're gonna write new ones????
Anyway, you're a really good writer!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks for commenting! You'll be seeing more of Nick and Liv in Brooke's story. I wouldn't have it any other way. The Carter clan will be making a spectacular re-emergence. It's just it will be from Brooke's POV. :)
Date: 09/01/10 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 33
Lol @ Shelby still calling Nick "Mr. Bob". I know Shelby and Mason are scared but things will fall in place eventually.
Author's Response: :) I love how there's three or four comments about Bob. We all love Nick so much!
Date: 09/01/10 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 33
awwwwww sory for the not review the last time but I am still flashed by the whole situation o.O i mean it's sooooo wow and they keep the lil one *sigh* ohhh and what will nick say ...... and baby no 4 wow carter and his supersperm lol
loooooove it can't wait for more
Author's Response: LoL Nick's supersperm will love on forever in Coaster infamy. :) Glad to see you've reappeared!
Date: 09/01/10 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 33
Dang Carter! Slow your roll, as if three little Nicks weren't enough now there's Landon! I love how everyone's growing up though, I can't wait to hear more about Brooke and Kay. They seem like a trip. I also love that Shelby still calls Nick Mr. Bob, it just seems right. :)
Author's Response: LoL well Peyton is ::thinks about it:: 9 in this story. So the roll was slowed at least for awhile. :) The Halloween saga will be continued in the next chapter. And yay for Mr. Bob!
Date: 09/01/10 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 33
good prep course for parenthood
Date: 09/01/10 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 33
nice chapter oh Carter no four so sweet. lol love it she still call him Mr bob that kind of sweet.
Author's Response: LoL Yup always and forever Mr. (Sponge)bob
Date: 09/01/10 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 33
He's crying because he senses your tension Shel. RELAX!!!!!!! Jeez! Everyone knows babies are kinda like dogs - they sense EVERYTHING!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Y'know it's so TRUE yet funny about the babies to dog analogy. Ah, I love getting off school and readin your words of wisdom!
Date: 09/01/10 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 33
I love coming home from putting my son on the bus and seeing a update. 1 time of the day i can read in the peace!
Wow baby 4? I cant image Nick and Aj with the most kids lol.Cool I wonder how the other bsb families are doing.
Nick speechless is just as rare as making AJ speechless.
Best get use to it Shel if your going to be stressed so is baby.
Author's Response: Ah, you got the first lesson right about stress...they're sensitive little creatures. :) Yeah it would be weird to see Nick and AJ have the 'litters' haha. But it's kind of cute because they're both such kid at heart. So happy you enjoyed today's 'bus stop' installment!
Date: 09/01/10 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 33
I love this chapter but poor shelby needs to chill out.I know this is a scary thing but I think she will be fine and I love the way babies smell too lol.Oh and I can totally picture Noah and Nick and its too funny lol.
Author's Response: LoL chilling out is easier said than done...but we'll see :)