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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 03:08 am Title: Chapter 34

Lol. Candy poker sounds fun! I think I'd be less angry losing candy, than losing money - lol. I HATE to lose!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. Words of wisdom? Me? *shocked look* I dunno why, but that makes me feel a lil' old - lol.

Author's Response: I hate to lose too! I don't like casinos for that very reason. :)

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 03:00 am Title: Chapter 34

Lol on Shel still calling Nick bob. I have to say this took a slight different turn to what i had thought But its good. I keep checking for updates often. :) can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: Hey, if it was predictable I would get tired of writing it : Glad you're still enjoying!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 02:58 am Title: Chapter 34

I bet Shelby ends up winning the pot. Landon sounds adorable.

Author's Response: Addy wins the pot...Addy should do the World Series of Poker. Series. :) Landon does sound adorable...of course he's a Carter, and I'm SO partial to Carters. :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 01:46 am Title: Chapter 34

I so totally thought of you and this story at work. I had a newborn named Shelby (the first Shelby I've ever had). And about 5 doors down I had a newborn named Mason. I couldn't stop thinking about it. LOL

Great updates I really feel for them. It sucks being very young and having this happen but add on the added pressure of living a few states away, man. Make them happy already. Ha ha! No, never-mind. Because that means it would be finished. :-p

Author's Response: Aw that is so uber cute. A little Mason and Shelby! :) I love the name Shelby, but my friend already beat me to it. LoL yeah, I had initially intended for this story not to be so long but it's got a mind of it's own. All I can say is it will be over when it's over!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 12:30 am Title: Chapter 34

Lol they're gonna make great parents! I could picture Shelby and Landon on the sofa with Mason sitting on the floor by them, it was such a cute image! I know I'm gonna cry right along with Shel when Mas leaves, they belong together not seperated by several states.

Author's Response: I'm going to make it easy on everyone and skip ahead a little bit. Otherwise this story is going to be longer than BATB which well, would be crazy. So you can just assume that there were lots of tears and save those Kleenex til later!

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 34

nicky bob... ha ha ha

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 34

Naw Shel holding Landon (wtf? Landon? More surprises?! lmao!) was just too cute. She's going to do well. She might be worried now, but once the baby's born and she'll hold him/her in her arms, she won't. At least, that's what I heard, the feeling women get when holding their newborn baby. I'm too young to experience pregnancy already LOL!

*crosses fingers for Shel to win the poker game... or Mason*

Author's Response: Yup, I couldn't wait to introduce Landon vicariously through Shelby's story! LoL. :) And the poker game's all in good fun...BUT I can tell you that Addy wins. She's a scary poker player. Don't mess with her and cards! The next chappy is skipping a little. I'm thinking Thanksgiving. I enjoy holiday chapters. :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 34

''Noah was a gentlemen.
Or a flirt.
Or both.
Probably both.'' He's such a Carter!
I was missing so much the Carters and the guys together.. well still miss Howie and Bri.
And Liv's so right to say that, her kids are screwed by Carter's gene! ahahhah
Mas will be missed.... poor Kevin is still having a thing. Don't blame him. I think he will be the one that will care most about the baby when he or she be born.
About the blog thing..... I miss those blogs!!

Author's Response: I miss those blogs too! They cracked me up to write the tour blogs from Nick's POV. :)

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 34

I agree with one of the other comments that Liv be gr8 person to talk to, I know this is a Shelby story but i missed Liv n Nick. Really look forward for Brooke story to to see what going though her mind esp other what happen to her it and really happy that she still daddies girl (singing my little girl) b/c I was worried there. me think that Noah likes Kayleigh yep I agree with Shelby diff both with Noah just like his dad

But she gonna make gr8 mom :)

Author's Response: Yeah Liv's a great person in general. Go Nick for marrying her! LoL. Yeah I miss their daily lives but after awhile probably the most exciting thing is laundry day. But not where Brooke's story is concerned. And very good job on the Noah observation. :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 34

Aw, I really liked this chapter. :) Thanks for the ages of all the kids. lol This means that Shelby will be 20 when Brooke's 16 and around that age with Kayleigh and she'll be around 23 (wow!) with Peyton's story and 21 with Ally.

But you forgot two kids: What about James and Stefania?lol Great chapter. :)

Author's Response: James would be fifteen...if not fifteen like fourteen and 3/4, haha. Stefania would be ten and a half. :) Shelby will reappear in Ally's story, never fear. :) You'll get a nice glimpse into the future FUTURE.

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 34

It's so nice to read about the other familys, especially the Carter clan ;) I can't wait to read Brook's story. Are you going to start on writting that one after you finish this one or.....?

Anyways..loved the updates. I see Shelby warming up to the idea of having a baby herself ;)

Oh and lol at the īBobī īnickīname hahaha.

Author's Response: Brooke's will be started BEFORE the end of Shelby's. I'm gonig to try to get the first couple chapters done this week actually.

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 34

I LOVE that she still calls Nick Bob...lmao!!! Nicky Bob!!

Author's Response: Oh, Nicky Bob...it's funny that his dad's name is Bob too. LoL Shelby cracks me up.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 34

Grrr...I forgot something! I hate when I do that. I just wanna say that I loved the mention of Brookes hair previously. I just can't wait to read her story. And I think you're genius the way you throw these comments in and tie everything together so well. You must take really really good notes! Lol

Author's Response: I take good notes...all in my head most of the times. But I do refer back to what I've written. That helps me as well. I try to include little tiny clues sometimes that allude to something that will happen in the future - i.e. Nick's ginger comment, the hair, etc.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 34

Aw, how fun! I would love to play poker with the BSB :) lol at Molly usually winning the pot. I love that Shelby still calls Nick "Bob." It's hilarious. This was a great chap, very relaxing and seems like the good ole days when they were all together. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I needed a fun chapter. Too much drama can clog a persons arteries! :)

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 34

haha your in luck, cos im at home now = internet and free reviewing time haha!!

I think Liv might become someone Shelby will seek advice from. It will probably hurt Molly, but i think Shelby will benefit from that. Getting advice from someone who she's not related too will not only have her listening, but she won't feel like she's being told what to do, which we all know thats how AJ and Molly have been.

and i LOVED when Liv was all like when Brooke gets old enough she'll be on the pill! HAH Addy may be smart, but Shelby's right, both her and Mason's parents are deffo stuck in the stone age.

I was so sure that Brooke and Kayleigh were going to ask Shelby about the baby. Maybe they don't know yet, but i just had that feeling.

I LOVE Ally. She's going to be a perfect Aunt for sure. I can't wait to read her story, especially as Shelby and Mason's baby will be a kid by then. (that is, of course, if they keep it. Which i think they will haha)

I can't wait to read the other girls stories. Especially Brooke's Reading about how she delt with the whole kidnapping and everything. Just by the fact she hadn't cut her hair since proves its something that plays on her mind still.

and i love days off! Mine isn't till the weekend. I swear AC has become the site i visit the most. Im addicted haha! Between reading your stories and updating my own... i really have no life HAHA

Author's Response: I have no life either. But it's seriously okay right now. Fanfic is going to get me through a bad semester. I can feel it. :) As you know I'm uber sentimental where Liv is concerned so you might be on to something there. And, I'm going to chalk up Brooke and Kay's lack of questions because there were SO many people in one house! Egads that was hard to write. I kept forgetting someone and going back and tagging in an action. That's what happens when I make these boys multiple like this. :) Also, got to give you more kudos for noting the whole hair thing with Brooke. Good eye, my friend!