Date: 09/03/10 04:47 am Title: Chapter 36
Okay, how can the Principal NOT care that their basketball star was harassing her!?!? What a fat-ass Prick!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: see you said the magic word -- STAR. Frustrating isn't it?
Date: 09/02/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 36
Don't mess with hormonal Shelby!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL at AJ being the peanut gallery, but I guess I can't really blame him. And pizza sounds so good right now, I'm so hungry!! Another great update.
Author's Response: LoL yeah hormones had a little bit to do with the whole 'ape-shit' thing. I love AJ as the peanut gallery. Lots of warm fuzzies right there!
Date: 09/02/10 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 36
That's not even fair! I could ace every class if we got to talk about the guys! I bet nobody else in your class feels as excited as you do though.
Author's Response: I'm going to let everyone else figure out next week's topic for themselves. My husband had a few choice words too, haha
Date: 09/02/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 36
Dude, I would've beat the shit outta him too! And that girl who opened her mouth! You all need to leave Shelby alone! The principal was a jerk too, I wish she would've said something.
*goes to store where they sell pointy sticks like Lenni's and stocks up* My girl needs protection!
Author's Response: LoL dude if I ever see a pointy stick in a store I am SO buying it. Just saying! Y'know I was looking at my syllabus for my Gender and Communication class I'm taking and next week we are talking about the Backstreet Boys. They are a topic. I am hopping around my living room going crazy. I should get an A next week. Maybe I can write fanfic as part of my grade! ::rotflmao::
Date: 09/02/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 36
Love u story so much :) is just the four oldest girls or r u doing story for Peyton (we hav not meet her yet bc she was baby in BATB, she was like 4 in 7D of couse we did not see her much)
Author's Response: Well Peyton had a little cameo in the Halloween eppy. I think I gave her one whole line! You'll get to learn more about her in Brooke's story and THEN...she's going to get her own story!
Date: 09/02/10 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 36
Just got home from work to TWO updates! Love that haha! So this review will be mega long probably haha!
Loved the thanksgiving chapter. With the hustle and bustle of getting the food ready (or getting it made for them) to Denise coming with the Turkey. You can tell Denise counts Shelby as her granddaughter just as much as she does the other kids, thats real sweet. And the way she asked her if she was ok and didn't use the whole pityful way of asking. Thats good.
And LMFAO at the questions the kids were asking her about the baby. I was cracking up haha.
I feel for Shelby. That douche was being a total crapbag and she gets reprimanded for it. just cos she is pregnant doesn't mean she's a bad person. He deserved her beating, and the principle... well you would of thought he would of questioned both of them. I'm so glad my school days are long gone. Well they were long gone like 9 years ago but they still haunt me, ugh. I bet Shelby can't wait to leave and be away from them punks.
The last line from this had me thinking.., about Shelby saying that maybe slow was good. I think she knew that back then, but it was the going behind parentals backs and being adventerous that got them into the trouble they were (and are) in. It probably only made it more tempting when the parents went crazy on them.
Anymore updates today? haha
Author's Response: LoL I loved the baby questions too. And Denise DOES consider her a granddaughter just as much as the other kids. And star basketball players wouldn't DARE be reprimanded. ::rolls eyes:: I hated high school too, lol. And lastly, you're right. Shelby and Mason KNEW slow was good, but the parents just egged them on even though they were trying to do the opposite. Good job parentals! Oh, and there's going to be one more update today! I've actually got the first chapter of American Honey done too, but because of the 'two stories at a time' thing I have to decide whether to post THAT or another update to Only in My Dreams. Oh, decisions decisions. I might just post the third chapter of Love Story and the 1st of Amerian Honey. And post OIMD late late tonight.
Date: 09/02/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 36
That fucking principle needs to defend her and do something about that assface that talks to her like that. Or she should have Mason go to school with her. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: All I can do is smile right now because otherwise...well...I'll be quiet. Haha but thanks for the review!
Date: 09/02/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 36
That Frank guy is such a prick. But go Shel for giving him what he deserves! lol.
I've done that before myself only it wasn't a bookbag it was a three inch binder filled with BSB pictures. I know I was such a sork in high school.:-p
I really hope Molly and AJ lets her move down to Kentucky to be closer to Mason.
And I'm still reading just not reviewing as much, it takes some time to type this on my cell since my computer is basically dead.:(
Author's Response: Oh man, reading on your cellphone can be hard...reviewing harder. :S LoL I hit someone with my BSB binder too...don't worry, I was a dork in high school too!
Date: 09/02/10 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 36
That kid got off lucky getting slugged with her bag........she should have used her feet to connect with his "soft spot".......although I did love the Pillsberry dough boy description! Have so many thoughts running thru my head about your story, can't wait for an update!!!!! I know, we are so demanding aren't we? LOL Great Job Jen!
Author's Response: You're lucky it's my day off. Already got chapter three done too. :) And I'm working on my Brian fic. And I've not even opened a textbook. haha. I think she so would have kicked him in the gonads if the huge bus seats weren't seperating them. Got to love a 'little' Shelby flashback with the Pillsbury Doughboy description!
Date: 09/02/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 36
Oh my dear shel: "Maybe dad's advice about driving wasn't too far off. I just wish I had gotten it sooner.
If I had, maybe I would have realized that slow was good." But you are one of those that needs to suffer to get it.... *sighs* You dad's AMAZING!
And the 'God Bless you' comment was brilliant! ahhaha Joe you are.. I love you!
Author's Response: LoL I thought you'd enjoy Joe's comment!
Date: 09/02/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 36
glad i skipped drivers ed
