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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 38

Roflmao! I knew Mason would punch that asshole! good riddance!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: I'm sure Mason would have bashed him in if the security mall cop dudes hadn't showed up! If he needed backup I'm sure you would have supplied a pointy stick (or two)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 38

Aw, go Mason! Be her knight in shining armor! Yay about the promise ring and the baby's first movements! LMAO at Jonah's one line, I love him! :D

Author's Response: LoL I love him too. I saw a gorgeous garnet ring at the jewelers a couple days ago and loved it even though its not my birthstone. So, that's what she got for christmas!

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 38

"What does he have to promise? He's kind of stuck with you now that you're pregos," Joe said."
That line had me laughing so hard, nothing are more annoying than little brothers :) Shel and Mas are so cute together, and i'm so happy that he didn't propose.. It's way to soon for them to get married.. They should just focus on getting ready for when the baby comes, and maybe read a book or two about how to handle a newborn (even if I can't stand those books, nobody wrote a book on YOUR baby) =p

Author's Response: LoL that is my FAVORITE line. Seriously. Joe's like the replacement Shelby in the smart-aleck kid department. And I agree...every baby is different!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 38

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MASON!!! *pumps fist in the air* Give that little prick a beatdown!! YES!!!

Author's Response: LoL he got what he deserved for sure!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 38

Oh yes I was waiting for this. Frank sounds like he could have been dangerous. Now however Mason gave him something to think about. I knew AJ would react that way. Just a dad thing. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I think Frank was just an a-hole. But Mason's got Shelby's back and won brownie points with poppa McLean, so it's all good!

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 38

My double review coming right up HAHA
Love Jonah. He's a right character. Kinda makes me think thats how AJ was when he was a kid. With the sarcastic comments and everything.

Ally is a sweetheart as well. I love hers and Shelbys relationship. You can just tell theres a sisterly bond there.

And yay... Mas came from christmas. I loved how Shel thought he was asking to feel the baby clothes, and not her actual tummy.

So glad it was a promise ring and not an engagement ring. Sure they have a baby on the way but they have a loooooong time before they should get engaged. They may have known each other for most of their life, but they have only been together as a couple not that long.

Gooo Mason!! He kicked butt and that Frank deserved it. Freaking tool! If Mas hadn't of kicked Franks butt i was going to suggest writing me in and getting me to kick his butt haha!

And awwwwwwwwww at her feeling the baby move. It's getting more and more real for her as time gets on. Even though its overwhelming her i still believe she will be fully prepared when the baby comes.

Little Bean. Best nickname ever for her baby.

Cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Yeah I'm writing Joe thinking about just how AJ could have been as a kid - it's really fun actually. :) And I know people were freaking out about the engagement ring but I so didn't want to go there yet. If I had, Shelby was going to say no. You're right; they HAVEN'T been together as a couple that long and they have a big enough challenge coming up. LoL Frank getting beat up was great. I was going to make it into a long drawn out thing but then I thought - no, Mason would so clean house quickly. Also totally agree on the 'little bean' nickname. I love it, haha.

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 38

I'm kinda glad it was just a promise ring, an engagement ring is a HUGE step. Sure she's pregnant but still.
Mason and the breast pump was hilarious, poor Mas.
And when Frank walked up I was just waiting for Mason to kick his ass! Richardson men don't play around when it comes to thier girls!!
P.S.- Thank you for the early update. :) I was thinking about it so much I dreamt that I was Shelby.

Author's Response: Yeah I totally agree. Mason is sixteen and that's an enormous commitment. So I have to say Kevin was right in putting his foot down there. And I've been dying to match up Frank and Mason since I put him in the story. As for your P.S. - you are so totally welcome :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 38

Aw, I thought it was going to follow the song. Marry me Juliet, you'll never have to be alone.. LOL But that's good for me. They don't need to do everything at once. Good for Mason for beating up the jerk. It scored some brownie points with AJ too. Ha ha. Great update.

Author's Response: I SO want to comment on those lyrics but I'm not going to right now. :) Brownie points with AJ is ALWAYS a good thing!

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 38

- The corners of dad's mouth twitched.
"Good." -
I reaaally like AJ more now!

I wish I had a guy like Mason lol, he really is the perfect boyfriend. (:

Frank's an a-hole.

Author's Response: I thought people would enjoy AJ's reaction! :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 38

Awwww amazing job can't wait for more. Way to go mas. Hehe.

Reviewer: nickslilmami Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 38

Shoot me down why don't ya? lol. I thought for sure he was proposing and little Ally she's more excited than Shel.

But a promise ring is just as good. And I'm seeing that AJ is starting to get along with Mason, I mean he did just kick some guys butt for his daughter. Major brownie poimts with dad for that one Mas!

Author's Response: LoL sorry to disappoint! I know Ally was freaking out wasn't she? I think I'll add the label - hopeless romantic - to her resume. :) And you're right, AJ's warming up to Mason. I mean, who couldn't? He seriously is doing everything he can to be there for her and beating up Frank was just the cherry on top. :)