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Reviewer: Poster_Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 05:20 am Title: Chapter 39

I can see Nick and Aj getting kicked out of Chuck E Cheese. Those 2 are just insane enough.

Author's Response: LoL well it already happened in Babies and the Band...fast forward ten years or so and I'm sure they could have a repeat performance :)

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 39

She gonna be gr8 mommy b/c u know what they want when they start to cry. I When we learn more about Peyton im gonna love her. The little twins they are little cutie but dont act that way. It good to see Ally and Brooke she needs some only neally her age :). Joe they just no words for him lol mini Nick n AJ together means trouble lol

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 39

Lol. I figured they'd get stuck baby-sitting. Disney on Ice is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Well at least they got alone time! Even if it was with a baby and Shelby was freaking out. :) I so want to go to Disney on Ice sometime. It never comes around here.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 39

Oh Shelby and Mason this was easy. You get to give him back. When yours gets here you are stuck. I however think they will do fine. Please update soon I can't wait to see how this all turns out.
Marguerite

Author's Response: You're right...it's always okay baby-sitting because you know there's an end to it. Parenting...not so much. :)

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 39

Aww i might be going to Disney on ice in October HAHA!!

Poor Shel. She's really feeling scared right now. Mason's confidence is definitely affecting her. Still, it should be some comfort knowing if she can't handle it then he might.

But then again she has alot on her shoulders. Everyone expects the mom to be able to handle everything. But what people don't see behind doors is the fact that moms don't always handle everything. I think she's really lucky to have Mason, who's seems so ready for this.

Author's Response: That's so cool! I love Disney on Ice. :) Mason's being strong for both of them, which is another reason he makes THE perfect boyfriend!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 39

Hehe poor Shelby. She will be an amazing mom when she has the baby. Awesome chapter can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Whiny Shelby is fun to write, lol

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 39

Oh yes sweetie... baby thing IS a hard work! But the 'suck suck suck' sound is just heaven!
Lovely moments and Mas is a Carter two? lol
LOVELY!

Author's Response: Ah, Mason does kind of remind me of Nick...except way less ADHD. :) And I love the 'paci' sound!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 39

Aw, a little preview to the family life for Shel and Mas. This is too cute
Btw, the leashes for Tristan and Bryaden were good ideas, I think they'd terrorize the poor Disney characters.

Author's Response: Yeah, just a sneak preview. Of course Landon's probably the easiest Carter baby of them all. Anything would be easy compared to Brooke! Annnnd...All I can see is Mickey Mouse's ear being snapped off...seriously, I wouldn't put it past them!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 39

"I sniffled. Ice cream did sound good. I mean, if I was going to be a lousy mother I might as well just drown my sorrows in creamy goodness, right?" - LMAO and the lines about her being a fat cow and whatnot were great too. :D

I had to smile at Mason laying on the couch with Landon on his chest, it reminds me of a similar scene... ;) Great job, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I loved Shelby's hormonal lines. It's always so fun to whine. Hmm, I have no idea what similar scene you could POSSBILY be thinking about. :) Yeah, I know I was having that same little flashback when I wrote that. Ah, how fast time flies!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 39

I think Joe is my favorite McLean kid...I swear, he's just AJ reincarnet..they are sooooo in for it!

Shelby will be just fine when her baby is born. It's always different with other ppls kids. And Mason seems like a natural. Yeah, they are gonna be just fine.

Author's Response: Well, I do love rowdy children and Joe is really pushing that limit. It's going to be fun once Ally's story comes around. I've already made notes about good old Jonah. :)