Date: 09/09/10 05:41 am Title: Chapter 50
aw, what a beautiful way to end this story, so awesome!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 09/09/10 05:38 am Title: Chapter 49
Aw, i KNEW AJ & Kevin would both cry! such softies
hehehe "Aunt Ally, coming through!"
Yeah, hospitals do spoil new mothers, hahaha "spazz out if they hiccup." I could so see Shel freaking out over the hiccups.
Oh, dang, postpartum... i knew it wouldn't all be smooth sailing.... but at least they fixed the problem
Author's Response: LoL I can see Shelby freaking out...she does that quite easily. But I also can see a little red headed baby hiccuping and that image is just so cute!
Date: 09/09/10 05:29 am Title: Chapter 48
I luv Joe! "here, you can carry this" as he hands her a pillow.
Have i mentioned how much i luv joe..."HEY! SHELBY'S GONNA POP UP HERE!" omg, tff!
Mason "oh my god, oh my god, oh my god" such a guy!
OMG! i effin' luv Ally- "You can squeeze if you need to. I've got tough fingers," she said with a smile.
And rotflmao @ Ally's bitch-fit! (i'd prolly do the same thing in her shoes!)
Aw... another lil red-head :)
I'm glad Mason got to 'catch' Brenna. (if i have the choice, i want my husband/boyfriend to be the first to touch my baby)
Author's Response: LoL yeah Joe is one of my favorite dudes. I <3 him. My hubby says he will not catch anything....he's a wimp...but I have a feeling he actually will. :)
Date: 09/09/10 04:23 am Title: Chapter 50
awww amazing job, i dont want it to end. amazing writing. i want more hehe
Date: 09/09/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 50
AHHHH!!! i love love love loved it! so good, you are so talented! cant wait to keep reading brookes story! thank you so much!
Author's Response: I can't wait to keep writing Brooke's story! Glad you enjoyed Shelby's little fictional piece of the futuristic world of BSB kids :)
Date: 09/09/10 03:38 am Title: Chapter 50
OMG!
I'M CRYING! IT'S OVER!!!!! BEAUTIFUL. BEAUTIFUL!
"Hey McLean, you're hogging all the grandpa time.
"Then he took off. I think he had reached the limit of sweetness for his lifetime.''
''Brenna's whole existence might have been the result of one second of carelessness, but you would never define her that way by looking at my family now.''
AAAAWWWWWWWWWW
She've became a mother. Fact!
BEAUTIFUL END!
''Because, for soul mates, there was only forever.''
Author's Response: :) I think that might be my favorite 'last line' of a story so far....
Date: 09/09/10 03:23 am Title: Chapter 49
WOWO! SOOOO many so many things at this chapter and it's almost over.. I'll cry! Oka.... her Fam is BIG, LOVING and CRAZY! Bar/Bren is a lucky lil girl. Lots of ppl that loves and cares about her. Kevin... I knew you would die for her... alex, well, Alex is a lover. And show that moms can suffer from Postpartum Depression was really good, because you can have the love and help, but it's a quimical issue and you NEED the right help to get better.
Author's Response: Well we already knew AJ was going to be a big softie but Kevin needed to be introduced to the world of sweet little girls right? :)
Date: 09/09/10 02:47 am Title: Chapter 50
Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Such a sweet ending! I'm a little sad to see it end though (like with all your fics-lol). *sighs heavily*
*puts away my pointy sticks once more* I better have use for these in American Honey!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: We don't want those sticks to get dusty do we? :)
Date: 09/09/10 02:43 am Title: Chapter 49
I figured she had PPD. Lovely, ain't it?
*snickers* I can't totally see Kevin NOT wanting to pass Breanna to anyone! That's *MY* Kevy!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Yeah on top of everything she was my only prego girl to get socked w/ PPD. Oh anyone mad at Kev HAD to love him when they read that. :)
Date: 09/09/10 02:40 am Title: Chapter 50
Great way to end it and what an awesome chapter. And all of the aww moments with the grand parents and Joe how adorable,love it. Sad it's over but have the other stories you have to continue reading. I can't wait to read more of them. Great Story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think we all realize it won't be a piece of ake for Mas and Shel but those two can work through anythig together. Now onto Am. Honey and a little later...Wild Angel!
Date: 09/09/10 02:31 am Title: Chapter 50
I guess that'll suffice. lol, now I'm anxious about Ally's story! But seriously if you ever get the urge to write about Brenna I don't think anyone will object. Just saying. :)
Date: 09/09/10 01:59 am Title: Chapter 50
Awww, I love the grandpas and Brenna! It's sooo cute!
And Joe knows he loves her, I'm glad he finally said it.
The ice cream tradition will live on!! :)
Because, for soul mates, there was only forever. AWWWWW!
Btw, can we please have a oneshot of an older Brenna? Pretty please? Like for Christmas?
Author's Response: I wanted another grandpa moment before the end...and for Joe to express a SOFT emotion, lol. As for your 'btw,' if it helps you'll get a shot of four/five year old Brenna during Ally's story. Will that be cute enough? haha You're just going to have to wait a few months unti I get there...
Date: 09/09/10 01:49 am Title: Chapter 50
Aw. :) What a great ending. I hope we get to see Mason fufilling his dream of being a doctor in some way during the other girl's spin-offs. Great story, amazing job. Loved it. :D
Author's Response: We'll see what happens! Glad you liked the ending. It just felt right.
Date: 09/09/10 01:47 am Title: Chapter 50
Another one of your amazing stories have come to an end.
Kevin and AJ are perfect grandpa's. Of course Ally is the best Aunt. Joe's moment was sweet.
Mason and Shelby are soulmate not everyone finds that at 5 they were lucky.
Author's Response: I don't know ANYONE that finds that at 5. Total chance of fate right there. Kevin's got to adore his little ginger grandbaby :) Nick predicted it, right? Thanks for following along. I love finishing a story. I wish I had a little handful of confetti each time I marked a story complete.
