Date: 09/08/10 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 48
I figured she'd go into labour. And I don't blame ally for throwing a fit. She'd a right to be there, as Shelby's sister! She was the one who convinced her to stay & she was the only SANE one when they realized she was indeed in labour. Jeez!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LOL Team Ally all the way! Parentals get pointy sticks for keeping Ally at home. :p
Date: 09/08/10 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 48
Yay baby is here :) Shel did a amazing job. Mine was 6 and 1hr. I cant image 14 or longer lol She will feel tried soon thats for sure.
I love Ally even more every chapter!
Cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I can't imagine 14 or longer either. Ugh that would be horrendous. :)
Date: 09/08/10 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 48
Great chapter! Awww shelby is a mom now! I'm sad that ally had to miss the action. She's such a mature kid.
Author's Response: Ally rocks. Of course the mature kid had to stay home with the three mature kids until grandma got there. :)
Date: 09/08/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 48
"HEY! SHELBY'S GONNA POP UP HERE!" lol Joe he diff a AJ kid
so Nick was right then lol
Author's Response: LoL I know I can just picture him hanging off the railing bellowing down and Kevin and AJ having a heart attack. Poor AJ's sexy leg lamp, lol
Date: 09/08/10 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 48
So I've been slacking with reviews the past 24 hours. So sorry about that... but..
OMG I SO KNEW SHE WAS GONNA HAVE BRENNA TODAY!!!
:::clears throat::: i just had that feeling! She had a real straight forward birth. Sure she was in labour for a while and had to have a little help, but to me thats like a perfect birth. She handled it so well as well.
Awwww im so proud of our Shelby HAHA!
Author's Response: Yeah I agree...she did have a perfect delivery. Long, but perfect. Just wait until next chapter. Someone else is totally proud of Shelby too :) Get the Kleenex ready!
Date: 09/08/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 48
Yayyy she's there! Oh man fourteen hours, the poor thing. And red hair! Welcome to the club! (: (Yes, I'm a redhead myself too lol) She might not be tired now but she will be soon! And for a long time!
Funny thing, I was looking for my previous review to see if you responded yet but I couldn't find it on the first page. So I got all confused 'cause I still remembered what I had reviewed. Then I switched to the 2nd page. I was actually staring with mouth wide open LOL! The reviews are rushing in girl!
Author's Response: My hubby's a redhead so I'm kind of partial to the club, myself. Which is funny because I made Liv's ex-hubby Hunter a redder. :) I'm so busy responding today that I haven't written the next chapter of Only in My Dreams. But that's okay, I'm sure everyone will forgive me. :) Once the adrenaline fades Shelby will feel it...that and when the epideral goes away. :)
Date: 09/08/10 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 48
Yeaaah..the baby is born after fourteen hours of labor, omg...heavy.
Thanks for the updates!
Author's Response: I don't think Shelby will be wanting to do THAT again anytime soon, right? :)
Date: 09/08/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
beautiful!!!! What a great chapter!
Date: 09/08/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 48
Awww...what a great chapter! I can totally see aj flipping out when she went into labor. We all know he's such a drama queen! Lol. The labor was described very well. A lot like mine :) But mine was 16 hrs...ugh.Can't wait to see what'll happen next. I'm so glad she had everyone around her but I'm sad Ally wasnt there.
Author's Response: Yeah I can picture AJ and Kev like over in a corner. Kev would be calm and collected, arms crossed and AJ would be hands in pockets, hands on face, hands rolling the bottom of his shirt...you get the picture, lol. And of course to top it all off she had a long labor. But at least it was worth it. :)
Date: 09/08/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 47
Awesome chapter, luv the baby shower.
{I just wanna point out one thing... in the beginning of the chapter, you said "Liv had brought Tristan and they were gushing over him" but then alittle bit later, you switched it to Landon... just thought you might wanna correct that ;)}
Author's Response: Ah thanks. So many little boys to keep track of. I'll go back and change that now. Thanks for catching it!
Date: 09/08/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 48
Aw, little Brenna Ann Richardson is here! :) What's the birth date? Great job writing this whole chapter, can't wait to read more about the new parents!
Author's Response: May 21 since it was past midnight. This was a fun chapter to write. :)
Date: 09/08/10 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 48
aww yay finally! red hair oooh so cute!
Author's Response: Got to keep the red head girl tradition alive!
Date: 09/08/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 48
Awwwww fourteen hours of hard work and lill red Brenna is there! Awwww she will be soooooooooooooo loved!!!
Awwwwwwwwww what a crazy but lovable Fam!!!!
Of course Ally is a Mclean! =D
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Author's Response: LoL I was looking forward to an Ally blowup. I figured not being able to come to the hospital was a fitting reason for her to do that.
Date: 09/08/10 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 48
Awwwwwww amazing job. Way to go Shelby and mason. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Shelby did all the work! LoL naw, it's a good wtg for both
Date: 09/08/10 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 47
Aw, what a fun baby shower. :) Poor Shel being all miserable and in pain. I can't wait for Mason to move either. On to the next chapter...
Author's Response: Yeah big as a house and in pain ... what a lovely day! :)
