Date: 03/02/14 05:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Really enjoyed this, different to what I read normally and refreshing! Awesome job! :)
Author's Response: Aww thank you. Always good to see a new reader. Hope you check out my other work too :)
Date: 07/03/12 07:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Great job on this story if I didn't have my fingers occupied holding my iPod I woulda bit what little nails I have off. You did a great job with the suspense and the twists. Valerie and Kristen got what they deserved. Crazy bitches!!! Is it bad I kept imagining video girl in this lol...
Date: 07/03/12 07:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Holy shit!! The bestie was in on it the whole time :0 damn it AJ he shoulda popped her one. Those two little horny bitches are crazy!!!
Author's Response: Everybody was so surprised about Kristen. Thanks for the review, Erika!
Date: 07/03/12 07:35 am Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
It's coming to an end...wow that was fast. Ugh I can't believe that crazy bitch was going to rape Nick, the nerve! No means...NO! Guys hurry up and find poor Nick I think he's dying.
Author's Response: Crazy doesn't even halfway cover how insane Valerie is. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/03/12 07:26 am Title: Chapter Twenty Six
No wonder they heard that scream! Run boys run...or drive.
Author's Response: Hurry boys, hurry! Thanks for the review, Erika!
Date: 07/03/12 07:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty Five
Funny how AJ is down, but once there he's a scared! Haha! Hmmm is it bad Im Leary about Howie!
Author's Response: AJ is a big ole scaredy cat. Haha. And why are you leery of Howie? Howard is innocent O:) thanks for reading Erika!
Date: 07/03/12 07:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Oh these two are too much! Damn allergies giving them Up. I'm glad it was Kristen and not crazy Valerie. So there goes thinking she was in her own house. Hmmm...where the heck does she have Nicky?!? Hurry up guys!
Author's Response: Brian's always the one who blows their cover lmao. Valerie knows exactly what She's doing ;) thanks for reviewing Erika.
Date: 07/03/12 07:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three
It cracks me up at how we all tend to write AJ as a chicken! lol. Hahaha at the mention of fan fiction hmmm zombies I wonder what story that might be lol. Snap who is there! Eeek!
Author's Response: I think AJ is secretly a big chicken in real life as well. I thought it would be fun to have Valerie be a fanfic writer, it gave a new spin on her obsession. Thanks for reading, Erika!
Date: 07/03/12 07:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty Two
Oh crap!! I thought Nicky was gone for a quick second.
Author's Response: Yep this is where I was actually going to kill him off originally.
:( poor thing. Thanks Erika!
Date: 07/03/12 06:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty One
Great job on the guys personalities and their bickering. Love it!! Now Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson need to crack this case and fast!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that's a very nice compliment to hear that I've gotten the boys personalities. Sometimes I worry I don't write them as themselves. I really appreciate it!
Date: 07/03/12 06:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Ugh!!! I could feel freedom!! Poor Nick it's so crazy how this woman hurts him so much...crazy bitch I hope he at least gets to pop her one.
Author's Response: Nick could feel freedom for just a slight second :( poor guy. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 07/03/12 06:41 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Well hot damn this woman thought Nick would give sex for cheeseburgers...well then again when you hungry! j/k I'm glad he's makin it very difficult for that bitch! *taking deep breath*
Author's Response: LOL yeah well when you're hungry you will do anything for food. Nick's smart to let her think She's getting some for a bite to eat. He needs to build his strength up. Thanks for the review, Erika!
Date: 07/03/12 06:35 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
lmao @ AJ and Howie!! How they pick on my Mr. Perfect Kevy Kev. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to reply, sometimes I get behind. I love how they pick on Kevin as well, those two crack me up. Thanks for the review, Erika!
Date: 07/03/12 06:32 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh damn this girl has lost it! She's so in-love she kicking his ass! *smh* you shoulda listened Nick.
Author's Response: Nick's REALLY regretting it now. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/03/12 06:22 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Although the guys were getting bad news...this chapter cracked me up...you just gotta love AJ and his comments.
Author's Response: Oh now I remember which chapter you're on. I've actually been going back to reread it when you review. The part with AJ in this cracked me up too. I love him in this story. Thanks for the review :)
