Date: 06/28/12 06:42 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Well the nerve of that crazy woman. Haha I love how you write the suspense...
Author's Response: I really enjoy writing the suspense and just how far I can take Valerie's character, glad you're enjoying it! Thank you :)
Date: 06/28/12 05:20 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
:( oh that sucks! I actually feel so bad for Lauren. I wonder if he will call the guys for some help. Poor Nick. That last note is freakin creepy as he'll!
Author's Response: Poor Lauren indeed. I felt horrible writing it because I would never wish that on her but it was good for the story purposes. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/28/12 05:15 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh shit! It didnt cross my mind she would hurt her. But duuuh that's his true love so she's in the way. Crap!!
Author's Response: Poor Lauren had to take a fall. Well what else do you expect from the crazy girl? Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/28/12 05:11 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh yeah Nicky likes to play with fire. I'm glad that Brians words kept taunting him. Lucy really knows how to play the game she's playing. lol. Sneaky woman. Lauren?!?
Author's Response: He sure does. I loved writing this scene as well with Brian's advice taunting Nick...thanks again for reading and reviewing Erika!
Date: 06/28/12 05:07 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I'm glad Nick decided to confide in Brian, although by the looks of it he's not going to listen. He's too intrigued by Lucy.
Author's Response: Nick's thinking with both heads again and it is gonna backfire. Lucy is on his mind. You'd think he would listen to Brian, but if he did there wouldn't be a story. Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 06/28/12 04:59 am Title: Chapter Ten
Uh oh... They found her mother...I wonder how she will cover that up, especially not wanting to go back home. I also wonder if Kristen will try and find her before the police. So many questions eeeek!!
Author's Response: You know that her mother was gonna be found eventually. As for Kristen...we will see her again ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/28/12 04:46 am Title: Chapter Nine
Nick is thinking with both heads. lol. Nick and AJ bickering over a condom is hilarious..especially AJ saying "private time" lmao.
Author's Response: The argument about the condoms was one of my favorite scenes. I'm glad you liked it, thanks Erika!
Date: 06/28/12 04:40 am Title: Chapter Eight
Poor Kevy...if he was there he'd be all over Nick about his actions. That is so creepy finding a note like that at your door. That would be my first thought too, if they are still watching me.
Author's Response: You know Kevin would be harassing Nick about that girl. The notes are meant to creep you out as a reader along with freaking Nick out, so I'm glad it came across for you. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/28/12 01:29 am Title: Chapter Seven
I like that although your chapters are short they are informative and have good dialogue. As for Valerie she's so trying to charm Nick with blonde hair. lol.
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot to me. I get told often about my "short" chapters, but I'm happy they have enough information in them to keep you interested :)
As for Valerie....well you will see why she dyed her hair. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 06/28/12 01:21 am Title: Chapter Six
Oh hell no! Although I'm glad that Kristenhas the feelin that her friend is not ok.
Author's Response: Kristen isn't stupid, she knows what's up. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Date: 06/28/12 01:16 am Title: Chapter Five
That would definitly be scary if something like that happened. He's proly thinking she's just another obsessed fan, little does he know she's beyond that. lol @ Nick feeling drafty!
Author's Response: Yeah Nick has no idea what he's getting into here ;) thanks for the review,
Date: 05/26/12 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh nick! What have you done.
Author's Response: Nick has made a boo boo. Haha! Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 05/26/12 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Three
I can see Lauren tripping out on Nick like that. I feel bad for both of them though I think she's not taking his feeling in consideration. Ugh. Love is complicated!
Author's Response: Totally agree, I can see it too, which is why I wrote that scene the way I did. I think she should have done that as well, because she's not seeing his point of view. Thanks for reviewing, Erika!
Date: 05/26/12 10:14 pm Title: Chapter Two
Ok valerie is definitely nuts for killing her mother over posters, although back in the day I would have been livid too. To think there are crazies like that still out there. Nice work. Very different.
Author's Response: Thank you! I honestly think there are some really insane people out there, and it is really scary. Thanks for reviewing Erika!
Date: 05/26/12 10:11 pm Title: Prologue
Wow! She sounds obsessed! (I can tell this is an oldie of yours...cause of the spacing!)
Author's Response: Yeah but it won't be like that for long lol sorry about that. I keep meaning to go back and fix it... Thanks for the review, Erika!
