Date: 10/31/10 02:43 am Title: Chapter Ten
Mwahaha... can't wait for the real games to begin! Hehe. Loving this, Tracy - keep the updates coming! :)
Author's Response: Oh she has something worked up...thanks so much for the reviews it makes me happy!
Date: 10/31/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter Nine
Wow, she is all over the place! Pay attention to those red flags, Nick! Silly Nick. Great chapter!
Date: 10/30/10 11:58 am Title: Chapter Ten
aww I call AJ the tattoed freak as well lol just kidding. Sorry AJ. ;O) SO, Val and Lucy are the same person? Interesting. She must have really disguised herself well so NIck wouldn't recognize her, although it 'is' Nick lol She could probably have aname tag saying i'm a psycho and if she was hot enough he would go for it! Great update! I am scared for him and am looking forward to what you're planning next.
Author's Response: LMAO! Yeah Valerie doesn't really like AJ. Nick is well...he's Nick. Not much explanation needed there! He he as for what's next, you will see. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/26/10 07:20 am Title: Chapter Nine
well we know who the freaky stalker fan is but Nicky's being blonde by not letting his friends in on his 'troubles'. Great update Girl! Looking forward to more soon!
Author's Response: Nicky is such a blonde lol. New chapter is posted, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/25/10 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Dun Dun Dun...that's what needed to be at the very end of your chapter. LOL Something bad is coming. And LOL at AJ and Nick arguing over a condom. Great chapter. Thanks for the update! :O)
Author's Response: Yeah this chapter needed theme music! Something definitely is coming to a head soon....and I think AJ and Nick would fight over a condom in real life too, silly boys. Sorry I responded so late :P thanks for the review!
Date: 10/25/10 10:41 am Title: Chapter Nine
Yay, great update! Loved how he was conflicted over Lucy. Wonder what would've hapened if AJ hadn't knocked though? Is she the stalker, hmmm...
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Not telling anything he he ;) Nick is so indecisive lol. I bet they would have gone further if AJ had not shown up. Thanks for the review Steph!
Date: 10/13/10 02:53 am Title: Chapter Eight
"I'm coming for you..." CREEPY!!! Don't ignore that bad vibe, Nick! Run! Run like hell! LOL Ahh, this is frustrating, but I'm loving it, Tracy! Thanks for updating - I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Bahaha. Poor Nick never listens to his first instinct....thanks for the review!
Date: 10/13/10 02:25 am Title: Chapter Eight
uh oh lol why do I think Psycho chick threatened Lucy to lure Nick in. Scary stuff. Hopefully Nick will start thinking with his upstairs brain. Good update! Glad you made your decision on which chapter to use.
Author's Response:
Love the "upstairs brain" remark! All will be revealed I promise *evil laugh*
Date: 10/13/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter Eight
Nick was hilarious in this chapter! That whole part in the club where he falls on top of Brian and then he makes fun of Howie for acting like Kevin was excellent. The card at the end was creepy! Something about how it was all pretty and had his name in glitter made it even creepier. I really liked the part at the end, I could really feel his paranoia growing. I'd be paranoid too! Great chapter, Tracy! I know you'd said on twitter you had a couple versions, I think this one fit very nicely.
Author's Response:
LOL I am glad you liked the chapter and found it entertaining, I had fun writing it! Thanks for the detailed review, love your feedback! I had trouble because I almost made this a Valerie chapter. I might hold off on her for a while, but you will see! Thanks again!
Date: 10/12/10 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Why do I get the feeling there's somebody in the room? Love it! Looking forward to the next chapter girl!
Author's Response:
Ohhh not telling! He he thanks for the review
Date: 10/12/10 01:29 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Yay, good to see an update! That card at the end gave me the shivers, can't wait to see if she gets him.
Author's Response:
The card is only the beginning....sorry it creeped you out...but Nick has no idea what is coming! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 10/10/10 01:46 am Title: Chapter Seven
Hmm, would the blonde be... Valerie? Anxious to see what's going to happen next. More soon, I hope! Great update, Tracy!
Author's Response: Not telling ;) hopefully I will have a new chapter soon! Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/09/10 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I just saw that you updated this. Wondering how this blonde is tying in to the psycho.
Author's Response: You will see! Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/05/10 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Poor Nick, so sad over Lauren leaving. Of course the afterparty would make him feel better lol.. too bad there's a crazy stalker chick! I like that Howie is sort of becoming like the new Kevin. I tend to write him that way as well nowadays. Still enjoying this! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you still enjoy the story! I usually have trouble writing Howie...I don't know much about him honestly. However, I really think he is taking on Kevin's role in the group now, so I tried to portray that. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 10/05/10 01:16 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Her name is Trouble! Great update, looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
LOL! Not telling ;) you shall see! Thanks for the review!
