Date: 08/19/10 04:56 am Title: Chapter One
I read your first chapter shortly after you posted it, but didn't want to leave a review because I wasn't sure if I was going to commit to reading it and I don't like to review and then disappear. You know how I am about female characters/leads/ sexual plotlines etc... but the first chapter intrigued me enough to tell everyone else about it and then want to read the second. You've got a great beginning to your story. I know you mentioned you haven't written anything like this before, You should. It seems like a very natural fit for you. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. :O) I will admit I might skip some of the sex scenes or sexual type things though if and when they happen, but the actual storyline is nice and refreshing! Yay to you!
Author's Response: OMG my eyes just about bugged out of my head when I saw you review. I am so happy you like this.....I have been getting a lot of positive feedback so far, so I will hopefully do another chapter soon! Thank you so much for your review! I don't like graphic sexual things either, so don't worry about that at all. I hope not to disappoint!
Date: 08/18/10 01:07 pm Title: Chapter One
I'm intrigued...this shall be interesting
Date: 08/18/10 01:05 pm Title: Prologue
Damn, what a opening. I can feel it all happening
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much. I am glad you like it
Date: 08/18/10 09:07 am Title: Chapter One
Oooh.... is Valerie gonna be our psycho? Dude there are SO many real life fans that could fit her description! LOL. I love fans gone bad...
Author's Response: I agree with that statement lol. Many of them can be found on twitter LOL
Date: 08/18/10 08:56 am Title: Chapter One
Ooh... is Valerie our budding psycho? Mwahaha! I love that this seems like a fan-gone-wrong kind of story... there are so many crazy fans in real life, it's not too far off the mark! LOL I'm really enjoying this!
Author's Response:
Oh god, I know. There are some crazies! But you shall see with her....hehehe you shall see.
Date: 08/18/10 07:22 am Title: Prologue
Well! You've got my attention :) lol. Interesting start.
Author's Response:
Ha ha when you and Julie reviewed I literally squealed. Like I have said, I am nervous about this story cause its out of the norm for me. But I hope you guys will enjoy this! Thanks so much!
Date: 08/18/10 07:12 am Title: Prologue
Oooh... what a way to start a story!! You got my attention right away LOL. I'm intrigued! This seems like it's gonna be cool; I love the dark and twisted stuff, hehe.
Author's Response:
Awwww my favorite authors are reviewing. This is something I don't normally write, so I hope I live up to the excitement. Its an idea I have had for a few years but haven't had the nerve to post til now. Glad you like it
Date: 08/18/10 06:29 am Title: Prologue
oooo creepy... backstory naaa00ooo!! (incase you arent a icanhazcheezburgers fan that means now LOL)
Author's Response: LOL. I knew what ya meant. Thanks for reading, more will come soon! :D
Date: 08/18/10 06:13 am Title: Prologue
i like it keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Your feedback means a lot!
Date: 08/18/10 03:06 am Title: Prologue
sounds good... cant wait to read more....
Author's Response: YAY you're my first review! THANK YOU! I'm so glad you like it :D
