Date: 08/21/10 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Aw, I'm so glad he went back to Mally's. I hope she convinces him and helps him get to Brian. I'm sure he would understand...and he'd be more than happy to just see Nick. I really really hope this ends well for all of the guys.
Date: 08/21/10 08:15 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Somehow I missed this chapter!! BAD JEN!! lol. God...poor Brian. Nickis just too damn stubborn for his own good. I'm sure things will get better once he contacts them again....I just KNOW its gonna happen! Mally will MAKE it happen!
Date: 08/21/10 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I'm so happy he went back to Mally's!! Maybe SHE can get thru his stubborness and get him to reconnect. *waits for more....
Date: 08/21/10 06:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Well, THAT was certainly a gut wrentching chapter to read. My God, so much hatred..I'm hoping the guys can come together by the end of this! Great chapter once again!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Date: 08/21/10 06:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
This is so heartbreaking for all of them :(
Author's Response: It's heartbreaking to write it!!!
Date: 08/21/10 06:05 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
And that's why I'm glad we have the NHS here!
Date: 08/21/10 05:57 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Oh god, poor Howie! And AJ's face and Brian's arm :(
Date: 08/21/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Seven
OMG he drank from the toilet? I suppose if you're that desperate you would though! So, she knows who he is now, I wonder what he'll tell her.
Date: 08/21/10 05:03 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Damn. Let me just take the time to tell you that you are such a great writer. Not only do you have thes awesome plots that you come up with but you write the stories so well. This is gut wrenching sad. Every chapter makes me tear up and leaves me wanting more.
As for this chap, I'm sad that AJ is so angry with Nick and that he thinks he's "fine." I'm not saying it's easy to get over, but being mad and blaming Nick isn't going to make it easier. Although unfortunately, I know AJ's mind is clouded with grief. Thanks for another great chap!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review/compliment :) It means a lot to me that you're enjoying the writing and the story. The grief that AJ's feeling is really hard to write, especially seeing him take out his frustration/anger out on Nick, who's feeling so guilty already. But the breakdown had to happen someway...
Date: 08/21/10 06:13 am Title: Chapter Twelve
hi, well I have to say I am liking this story and its so sad... I am hooked you have awesome writing skills and of course a great mind. Can't wait for more.
Date: 08/21/10 05:43 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Again, your mind has created yet another story that just sucks up readers like a sponge. Leaves us craving for each new update. Poor Nick..that guilt that he carries. And I'd really love to think that there really is caring people like Mally left in this world. I hope she stays in his life and helps him FINALLY begin to heal since it seems like he never really has. I hope AJ sees him and is able to forgive him. I hope Brian finds out how he's living and is able to help. I can't wait to see where you take this and how it all turns out. GREAT job once again!!!
And I'm soooo excited to see that Fix is gonna be a series!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great review! :) This is one of the few stories that I've actually got the whole thing planned out, which is why I'm plowing through it so quickly. It is going to be a shorter story than some of my other ones. I mean there's a lot of chapters already, but they're all relatively small, and I'm planning to keep it under 30 total. As for Fix being a series -- I'm excited to get it there, the second story is going to be called "Rebuild" and I already have a banner and tentative story line for it. ;)
Date: 08/21/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Poor Nick. And that's very sweet of Brian. Seems like Nick was just stubborn and let things slip away without asking for help. I wonder now if he just kind of lost his house and became homeless without telling the guys...
Date: 08/21/10 05:05 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Omg! I want AJ to notice Nick... Maybe he can help. Although I'm not sure what happened after the accident and Nick waking up between the guys. You gotta tell me!! Hope you update soon. Damn I'm a needy reader, I know. Lol
Author's Response: LOL It's okay. It's coming, no worries. I'm already working on the next chapter. :)
Date: 08/21/10 05:00 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I don't know if I can read this lol. It's too sad and breaks my heart. Nearly ever chp had made me tear up and this last one is just devestating. You do a beautiful job of writing it though, but the subject is just so heartbreaking.
Author's Response: It is! But I promise, the story's purpose is going to be worth it all! ;)
