Date: 10/10/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 50
Poor brooke. Amazing job can't wait for more
Author's Response: I feel so bad for my little Brookey. She's like the reverse of Shelby. She's popular but doesn't have the guy. Shel was unpopular but SO totally got the guy. lol
Date: 10/10/10 11:54 am Title: Chapter 49
lol Brooke and Noah so funny, yeh that is Gross Noah
Got I really bad feeling for Trevor either something happend someone else trying to get hold of her to tell her by using his phone or his dad using it to call her out
Author's Response: NoNo and BooBoo...typical siblings. And Noah might be a gentleman and amazing but he's still a slob (boys!)
Date: 10/10/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 49
"She won't," mom assured me. "You know, Mason helped save her life as far as her body goes, but by telling us about everything else, you're helping to save her life by giving her a chance to work through her demons."
--- Livvy`s a wonderful mom… I think she`s THE Backstreet Mom… just saying. Kay had to do what she had to do.
"At that second I saw Landon run by. He was wearing a big hotel towel around his shoulders and I swore he was carrying a plastic ice cream scoop."
"I'm Captain Split!" he said. But, to someone who didn't live with him, it seriously sounded like he was saying 'I'm Captain Shit!'
---Oh Boy.. thanks for Landon and Bree!
"Probably because my older sister tried to kill me when I was little!"
"When you turned four you tried to run me over with your pink Malibu Barbie Jeep."
"You were in my way!"
"And when I was five you tried to run my hand through the Play-Doh maker!"
"You shoved my purple Play-doh up your nose!"
-- and what to say about the brotherly love…. awwww
"If you want to have any chance with Kay in the future, you better clean up. She doesn't like slobs," I said. I took a little pleasure in watching his eyes widen.
---He needs to ne less of a Carter and more of a Livvy…
"The only way I was going to know was to call him back."
---Trevor have issues… let's wait.
Author's Response: Livvy's amazing...especially dealing with Captain Split over there. LoL. I love NoNo and BooBoo. They argue but at the end of the day they're there for each other.
Date: 10/09/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 49
Oye vey in a half shell. I still say his asshole Dad forced him back home & that if he didn't come, his siblings were gonna get beaten.
UPDATE!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Oh Lenni I hear you loud and clear. You'll find out tomorrow!
Date: 10/09/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 49
poor kids this must be so hard on them cant wait for more amazing job.
Date: 10/09/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 49
Oh i can't wait for tomorrowa update! I love how they made up real best friends forgive eachother! I can't wait to see what happens between Trevor and Brooke.
Author's Response: I couldn't break up Brooke and Kay! Even though Kay's taken a lot of flack from BooBoo lately. I think Brooke won't be so hard on her anymore though. She's learned her lesson.
Date: 10/09/10 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 49
Oh, of course you have to leave it there...I wonder what Trevor (or it could be his dad calling her, scary :s ) wants or has to tell her. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Of course I had to leave it there. It's my job to annoy my readers lol
Date: 10/09/10 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 49
At least they are at peace now And Kay can start to heal. It will take a lot of time. I want to know what Trevor wanted that made him call 3 times in a row. I hope it's to say he was sorry for leaving. Please update soon and keep up the amazing work.
MArguerite
Author's Response: You're right. It's going to take time for Kay to heal. We'll find out if you're assumption about Trevor is right in the next chapter. :)
Date: 10/08/10 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
We’re Carters. We don’t need practice runs,” he said. I laughed. We lapsed into silence
OH NICK!!! TO FUNNY!!!!!
Thank you for making "the talk" available Jen~
Author's Response: Well, it didn't belong in Brooke's story. It didn't belong in Kay's story. But there it is for you guys. Not my best piece of work but enough to satisfy the masses, eh? LoL
Date: 10/08/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 48
Oye vey in a half shell. I'm glad she's relatively going to be okay!
And I bet Trevor's asshole of a Dad found out & ordered him home for a beating. Oye vey.
UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL relatively is an, erm...relative term. Okay that sucks. I'm getting worse at review response, haha.
Date: 10/08/10 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 48
“It was like a very sick, very wrong version of Romeo and Juliet. It was cruel that someone in such a state should look so damn beautiful.”
---Oh boy….
“Mason brushed past me. He knelt down next to the firefighter.
I knew he was studying to be a doctor, but he was way too young to have gotten very far yet. Even so, he surveyed the situation with an eagle eye.”
---I knew this Richardson would end up just like Kevin. I could see he turning the doctor vibe on… oh LORD!
"Brooke, Kay just tried to commit suicide. If she can't help herself, as her best friend, you can help her."
I sighed. I had already totally ruined her life. I knew that telling what I knew couldn't make it any worse. It was pretty rock bottom.
"Kay was raped like a year ago," I said quietly. "Uncle Bri and Aunt LeighLeigh have been so busy with the wedding that she hasn't felt like anyone cares. She's been drinking and...and...having sex with random guys to make her feel better."
---And now the truet IS out there… ohhh Kay…..
"DUH! Papa J and I eats ice cream in the night time!" Brenna declared happily. She glanced around. AJ, Howie, and Kevin were huddled around talking. They must have sent the rest of their families back to the hotels.
"I WANT ICE CREAM!"
As it turned out, AJ and Kevin took Brenna and Landon for ice cream. Shelby had gone with Mason so that he could wash off all the blood. Howie told mom he was going back to his hotel, but made her promise that dad would call him when we knew more.”
---thanks for these two, I`m so sad and crying that some smiles won`t hurt! Papa Mclean NEEDS end with these ice creams visit Land…. Just saying…. Well, they are imunte by now to all these hyperactivity…
"He didn't say sweetheart. He was on his cellphone and told me that he got a ticket change. He thanked me for having him and left."
"What a jerk," Noah muttered.
In my mind, I tried to give him the benefit of the doubt. This whole evening had ended up being crazy. Maybe he just couldn't handle that.
Maybe...
He couldn't handle me.”
--OR Trevor is too young and lost by all his inside issues and for what he said to Kay, so far he wouldn`t be able to face Kay… OR he IS a jerk. Period.
“I headed back to bed. I wasn't sure how much sleep I would get. I was thankful that Kay was going to be okay. But okay was a really wide open term. In this case, okay meant alive. But there was more to being alive that breathing.
I hoped she would finally open up. That was the only way she was going to truly heal.
And for the second time in months, I hoped she could forgive me for all of the horrible things I said.
I needed my best friend back.”
----Oh Boy….. poor Littrells.. Leigh is under medication, isn`t she?
Oh Jen, you are.....
Author's Response: AJ will never stop feeding little ones sugar. I think he LIKES hyperactivity :) I love that Mason rushed in and took care of business. Total Richardson in control moment...just like Papa Kev. :) Leigh's GOING to need meds after this!
Date: 10/08/10 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 48
Wow really happy that she ok, I feel bad both of the girls in different ways. Brooke did the right thing about telling someone about what happend to Kay.
Wonder the reason why Trevor either something happend with his family or this to close to home to him or he feels bad about want he said to her.
oh sweet Landon and Brenna are just to cute. Pey is also just a sweetheart and she one smart girl :)
Author's Response: I feel bad for them both too. Brooke needed to tell Nick. Keeping things a secret any longer wouldn't be good. Trevor is a whole nother story...you'll learn more once she gets to see Kay. Peyton is smart. She's like my mini Liv but with Nick's spunk and adventureism.
Date: 10/08/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 48
I bet Nick misses the days where a flushed dolly was the kids biggest worry..
Love that both Brooke and Noah have such an open relationship with their parents.. And the Landon/Brenna moments makes this chapter so much easier to read :) Great job..!
Author's Response: I think he would gladly stomp on a dolly's head a million times over (Brian too) if they didn't have to deal with this stuff. Nick and Liv have done a pretty good job with Noah and Brooke. And Peyton and Landon for that moment. And little Landon...oh I love him!
Date: 10/08/10 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 48
Oooooooooohhhhh...... :'(
Date: 10/08/10 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 48
brooke did the right thing in telling nick what happen to kay. i think in time she will forgive her. amazing job cant wait for more maybe later ;) loved it.
Author's Response: She did do the right thing. It had gone on too long as it was.
Author's Response: She did do the right thing. It had gone on too long as it was.
