Date: 10/08/10 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 48
--Brian was the first one to scream when he saw her.-- omg, i can hear his scream... bone-chilling...
--I had no idea where Trevor was; I was just thankful for my dad-- Where the Hell is Trevor? And thank god for a daddy's arms...
--I'm pretty sure he would have taken our toddler drama over our teenage drama anyday.-- yeah, i'm pretty sure I'd rather deal with childish things, than teenage drama any day
--"I didn't know there was a one o'clock at NIGHT!" Landon said.-- OMG, i was literally in tears until i read this line.
--"DUH! Papa J and I eats ice cream in the night time!" Brenna declared happily.-- oh, how sweet ... the Ice Cream Tradition continues
--Okay, i think i might need to have a lil *talk* with young Mr. trevor... (don't worry... i'll leave him alive... maybe)
--Peyton gave me a tiny smile. "Your life is like a soap opera, do you know that?" she teased.-- totally sums it up, right there :)
Author's Response: lol yup the chapter started off totally horrific and then to save my sanity I had to give a little Landon and Brenna...and then of course Peyton just sums up Brooke's how story with that line, haha
Date: 10/08/10 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 48
Sorry for posting again, wanted to review your post from live journal! I love it! and i really can't wait for the next chapters right now i'm reading BATB over again lol
Author's Response: I didn't know if anyone saw my livejournal post. Whenever I have a new AH update I'll be sure to mentioned it. :) lol I'm taking the afternoon off to go enjoy myself after my crappy week at work. And I'm back at work tomorrow. So we'll see when my next update pops up!
Date: 10/08/10 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 48
Can you remind me again how old Peyton would be now?
And wow, what an intense chapter. It was so good. The truth finally came out! It's not Brooke's fault by any means, but I can totally understand feeling guilty in that position. I can imagine seeing my bcc like that. And I can believe Noah told Nick about sleeping with Kay. Damn, I can't wait to read more. On a different note, it makes me so happy that Brenna and Papa J have the ice cream ritual :)
Author's Response: About one month shy of fourteen because her birthday's in September if I remember correctly. And yeah I love that AJ spoils Brenna with ice cream too! :) I love that Noah just manned up.
Date: 10/08/10 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 48
In a way I think this was a good thing. Now that everyone knows she can get help & start to heal. Excellent update. And what happened to Trevor.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Trevor flew home...that's all we know right now. :S
Date: 10/08/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 47
After chapter 47, I was like..Brooke how low of you! Why would you call out your best friend and brother..but now after chapter 48 I see she's regretting it already.
I'm kind of curious to hear what Nick has to say to Noah about all this ;)
Author's Response: Of course she is. She was regretting it even before she knew what Kay had done. Oh Nick and Noah...I'm actually going to do a special one-shot that I'm going to post on my LiveJournal for that.
Date: 10/08/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 48
:( This is so horrible, Kay...I don't know what to make of Trevor leaving. I wonder how Nick and Noah's talk is going to go? I wonder how Brooke is going to apologize and if Kay will finally open up about everything. Going to read from her point -of-view now.
Author's Response: That was my main goal with their stories. I wanted that back and forth. Two different POVs from the same subject. This is Brooke's story, but Kay is so much a part of her life, and visa versa.
Date: 10/08/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 48
THANK GOD!
i cannot wait to read more! i checked in yesterday about 600 times
Author's Response: LoL was that why my chapter count was so high? haha j/k
Date: 10/08/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 48
Mom looked pained. I think she was hoping that I wouldn't notice his absent. "He took a cab to the airport."
WHAT THE HELL?
Your life is like a soap opera, do you know that?"
LOVE IT!!!
I needed my best friend back.
seriously Jen, your one line, did me in...I'm sitting her trying to hold in the tears!!!!
Author's Response: Well, it is like a soap opera! Frick-n-Frack have some dramatic girls on their hands. But I love that Brooke is too concerned about Kay to worry about her own drama with Trevor right now.
Date: 10/08/10 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 48
Wow Trevor should have stuck around for Brooke. But he does have his own demons to battle. I hope Brooke can Talk to kay and they can patch up their Friendship.
Date: 10/08/10 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 47
DON'T LET ME READ WHAT I THINK THAT HAPPENED TO KAY IN THE NEXT UPDATE!!! AHHHH!!! *freaks out* (Btw, good job on pulling the fire alarm, Noah)
Author's Response: I love that Noah pulled the fire alarm...it WAS smart...but it was also warm fuzzies from when Liv accidentally pulled that fire alarm at the club. That's her boy!
Date: 10/08/10 07:06 am Title: Chapter 47
Holy fuck! She totally tried to commit suicide! I just KNOW IT!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL I swear I've seen more exclamation points in my reviews this chapter than ever before...haha
Date: 10/08/10 05:24 am Title: Chapter 47
Don't you start with the 'maybe the ending' JEN!
Date: 10/08/10 02:43 am Title: Chapter 47
OMG!!!! I hope Kayleigh didn't do anything stupid. I hope she's okay. This might be her chance to get her life straightened. It could be a blessing in disguise. I just hope she's ok.
What a cliffhanger!!!! Very very exciting chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Would Kayleigh do anything stupid? Wait...
Date: 10/08/10 01:42 am Title: Chapter 47
I can see Noah wants to help Kay but hiding things won't help. I think it would be better if her parents knew.
Now however they may find out. Lord I hope she is ok, Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I don't think Noah wants her to hide everything, but he certaintly doesn't want them to know he just got busy with her daughter. There's that awkward level---Mason and Shelby already lived through it.
Date: 10/08/10 01:38 am Title: Chapter 47
--I didn't have a chance to finish the sentence. Even though I was sure his fingers hurt, Noah still had the insight to turn around and yank the fire alarm.-- I'm so glad Noah stopped her from telling... She would most definately regret it
--"Is it raining?" he asked drowsily.-- Landon, so cute :)
"I NEED A BOAT!" I heard Brenna scream nearby.-- And then there's miss Brenna.... :)
--"Kay's hurting, Brooke," he said softly. "I want to help her."
"You can't," I said. "She's going to hurt you. She will never love you like you love her."
"I don't care. It's my choice to make. You broke her freakin' heart up there Brooke," Noah said.-- I knew NoNo would be Kay's knight in shining armor. :)
Uncle Brian started to smile, but then he caught a look at my dad's face. He tried (and failed) to adopt a stern posture. He started to laugh. Aunt LeighLeigh covered her mouth but I saw her smile. My eyes widened.-- Just be thankful "Bride-zilla wasn't there... oh, i could only imagine the fire works....
--"She wasn't feeling well, so she went up to my room to lay down," I said. I swore I saw Noah's shoulders relax.
"No," Trevor said.
Everyone looked at him in surprise, but before he could say anything else, I saw a couple firefighters come out. One was talking loudly on a walkie.
"No fire, all clear, but we need an ambulance on the third floor. Teenage female. Nonresponsive."
Our whole group turned towards the firefighters. I looked around wildly. I didn't see Kayleigh anywhere. I was sure there weren't many teenage females on the third floor.-- OMG OMG OMG! NO! NO NO NO NO! Not Kay! Oh hellz... i don't think Brooke will forgive herself for this, feeling like she (in part) drove Kay to attempt suicide...
Author's Response: I think Brenna's 'I Need a Boat' is my favorite line. And You're right...Claw-dia wouldn't appreciate that fire stunt. As for Kay...well, stay tuned
