Date: 07/22/14 12:34 am Title: Epilogue
Terrific job! I loved how you ended this story and explained what he was going through at least where he felt he was to blame. Loved the whole thing!
Author's Response: Aww thank you! Brian isn't to blame but I felt like it's easy to see why he'd feel like he is. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
Date: 07/22/14 12:31 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I hope Nick's right and he is able to move on with Baylee, his parents and his brothers. Kevin finding all of that was great and I hope that helps Brian get a more concrete diagnosis.
Author's Response: Awww stuff like that is hard to deal with. Kevin I think is always the man with a plan. As soon as he learned what was happening of course he'd call someone and try to find out what he could :).
Date: 07/21/14 11:55 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
This situation is heart wrenching. On one hand, everyone's glad he remembers who he is but on the other hand, now he has to remember all the bad things. I hope that having Nick there will help.
Author's Response: I know :(. It's for the best but it's not easy.
Date: 07/21/14 11:25 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I love how you write about Nick and Kevin's relationship; they really are like little brother, older brother. Maybe if Nick follows his advice and talks to Brian he'll start to open up and this whole thing can be straightened out.
Author's Response: Aww thanks! Those two really are one of my fave relationships in the group. Kevin's the youngest Richardson but the oldest BSB while Nick is the eldest Carter but the youngest BSB. I really think that juxtaposition really gets them to understand each other in a sense. Especially now that Nick has matured so much :).
Date: 07/16/14 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Do not give up Nick! Stay until as long as you have to and help Brian figure out who he is and what he's missing at home.
Author's Response: Nick's pretty stubborn so I don't think he will ;)
Date: 07/16/14 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Good for Nick! He knows that there;;s something wrong and, just because nobody believes him, he does want needs to be done!
Author's Response: Well Kevin believes Nick. He just doesn't want to lose another lil brother :)
Date: 07/16/14 10:16 pm Title: Chapter Eight
It's painful but he should try being more honest with Dr. Woo. She's there to help him and she might understand more than he thinks.
Author's Response: I think part of the problem is he's still trying to sort out what's real and what's not. Maybe if he knew he would've been able to share :)
Date: 06/30/14 12:54 am Title: Chapter Seven
I'm so glad to see that Kevin finally eased up and admitted that Nick was right. I know it's hard to acknowledge that something serious was going on but it's better than ignoring it and hoping someone else was going to make it right. I hope that whatever Kevin found is going to give them a direction to go in.
Author's Response: I think it was mainly denial. They didn't want to think Brian got taken or something, and Nick doesn't wanna believe Brian would just go. It's not easy.
Date: 06/30/14 12:43 am Title: Chapter Six
This must be ripping Brian apart. He's lost so much and now can't move past it to heal. I like the flashbacks to times with Leighanne and I hope eventually Dr. Woo can help him remember.
Author's Response: It really is. The pain he's feeling needs to be faced though whether he likes it or not. I'm glad you're enjoying the flashbacks :)
Date: 06/26/14 02:44 am Title: Chapter Five
Poor Baylee! I don't understand why the guys can't understand what Nick's saying. Brian would never just up and leave his son and his brothers for some vacation. They need to start helping Nick look and turn over every leaf they possibly can to bring him home!
Author's Response: I think they're heavy into denial. They don't want to think Brian was kidnapped or something. But Nick's wrong too, he wasn't taken. So...they're both right really. I do feel horrible for Baylee :(
Date: 06/26/14 02:38 am Title: Chapter Four
I love how you started the chapter with him looking through a frame as though he was watching a movie! That's a very creative way for him to have flashbacks and I like how Leighanne came to him and urged him to remember. I hope that he is able to finally bring himself back and move on with his life.
Author's Response: Thanks! I knew I was gonna be using a lot of flashbacks and dream sequences so I wanted them to feel fresh rather than redundant so I'm glad you felt it came across in a creative way. Leighanne I knew from the get go would haunt him. You can't escape that sort of thing forever.
Date: 06/09/14 02:05 am Title: Chapter Three
Poor Brian! Being stuck between the then and now, not knowing which to choose is hard. I hope that he finds himself before it's too late.
Author's Response: I know, it really is a nasty thing to be dealing with. And confusing lol. Shane I like torturing the Boys the way I do :)
Date: 06/04/14 12:46 am Title: Chapter Two
Good for Nick for not backing down and continuing his search for Brian. I hope the guys can follow his lead at some point. I love the comment about Backstreet Dust by the way!
Author's Response: Originally this was only gonna be Brian's pov but I'm glad I included Nick's. Thanks! :)
Date: 05/21/14 01:16 am Title: Chapter One
I have a feeling I know where Brian is. Losing Leighanne must have scarred him badly and the mind always seems to block out what hurts us the most.
Author's Response: Something like that could really destroy someone, very true :).
Date: 05/21/14 01:11 am Title: Prologue
When Mare put out this challenge I looked at all the stories and this chapter reeled me in right away. I feel awful for Brian and I hope he just needed to escape and is not really missing.
Author's Response: Awww thanks! I knew as a Brian fic I was going to need a good hook. Thanks for choosing my story!