Date: 09/20/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good stuff, Sel! Love the interaction between Brian and Kevin. Spot on. And LMAO @ hippie Kev. He totally is. lol
Author's Response: Thank you so much Kel :) LOL at hippie Kev. It is true. I wanted to incorporate the breastfeeding stuff but it was hard to come from his perspective, so I thought that might work. That's the biggest challenge with this story. Writing it in my job but with a man.
Date: 09/20/10 11:37 pm Title: Prologue
Yay Sel! I was so excited to see a longer length story posted by you. Great work on the prologue. I can already tell that Kevin was a good choice for this role. Can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! When I read the challenge, the only person I can see in this position was Kevin. Plus writing from first person, I thought I can relate to him more :)
Date: 09/20/10 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Great job. I like this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chap is done and will probably be up in a few days.
Date: 09/20/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I am loving this Sel, this is great! I find all of the responses to this challenge to be interesting and insightful into different professions. :) Can't wait to read about what a normal work day is like for you, I definitely can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I agree about all these stories...very interesting to look at what people do. Next chap will be more work stuff. I just wanted to set the stage a bit and give him a background.
Date: 09/16/10 10:42 pm Title: Prologue
Good start. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll probably be posting chapter one this weekend.
Date: 09/16/10 02:35 pm Title: Prologue
I am so interested in this story. Really good start hun :) Can't wait to read more and woot it's a Kevin story holla!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Vickers! I seem to relate to Kevin the most. And I can see writing him in this position with some of my feelings.
Date: 09/16/10 01:34 pm Title: Prologue
This is interesting cant wait for another update :)
I cant stand how some abuse the system it makes people like myself look bad. I have stopped using WIC a few years ago after i was done breastfeeding. Only this year have they actually started putting healthy food besides non sugar cereal and dried beans on the vouchers.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, WIC has been criticized for awhile for their food choices. Last October they added whole wheat bread or brown rice and the cash voucher for fresh fruits and vegetables. I'll probably add chapter one tonight.
Date: 09/16/10 07:25 am Title: Prologue
Wow Sel, great start! I've always been into the medical field and whatnot so I'm definitely intrigued as to how this will go. I'm very interested to maybe gain some insight into your job and I guess I kind of already have. lol Poor people who abuse the system, sigh. Can't wait for more and I'm very proud to be your second reviewer. :D
Author's Response: Thank you, MA. You'll definitely get some insight about what I see. And yes, some people do abuse the system. But there are also a slew of people that need it :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 09/16/10 07:00 am Title: Prologue
Great start, what an interesting job. You must see all sorts.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, I see some crazy stuff. I'll incorporate some of my favorite scenarios. Thanks for reading!
