Date: 05/03/11 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Read this story in one day, absolutely loved it. At first I wasn't a big Kayleigh fan but that quickly changed. I will miss reading about Kayleigh, Brooke and Noah.
Date: 11/18/10 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 60
I finished reading this two days ago or so but my internet was acting up again and so I couldn't log in on AC for a while again. :/ I so hate it when that happens! And it's not just AC, it's my internet or something. I had this with another website as well. I just get an error with "can't load the page" or something (it's in Dutch so I'm not sure what the English message is). Okay, enough complaining.. on to the actual review! I really enjoyed this story. In the beginning I didn't like Kay that much but once I got to actual understand her deeds and how she changed little by little, she became one of my fav story characters. :) Having her as a friend would never get boring! The last chapter was a perfect last chapter. Now we'll only hear some about Kay in Heartbreaker but after that... *sigh* I will miss her (and Brooke). Hey, weren't you considering a story for Peyton as well? And Ally? *eyebrow wiggle* So we'll get a little Kay and Brooke in either of those as well? Anyway, thanks for writing & sharing! Now I will quickly go and review HB.
End of uber long review lol.
Author's Response: LoL I love uber long reviews! I'm doing a story for Ally, Steffie, and Peyton. After that well....we'll see. That's a lot of writing left to do for my Coaster Girls. You guys might get tired of it by then :) I love that everyone really saw the character development in Kay. I think she's my most fleshed out character to date, hands down. Glad you're 'back'!
Date: 11/14/10 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 60
So many chapters to catch up on, tought you said you were taking a break?? =p And let me tell you, reading this chapters after being up 40 hours traveling was not a smart thing. I was crying like a baby :)
Now on the the rewievs:
Kay giving Brody up for adoption to Bay and Macie was the right thing to do. I admire people who make that choice because they see for themself that they can't give the baby what he needs or deserve.. Some say that adoption or abortion is a selfish thing to do, but I think in some cases it's what needs to be done.. So proud of Kay and Noah. And with Brody staying with the family they done have to wonder about how is his, or what kinda people adopted him.. Great choice!
Love that you made the Carter twins girls.. Can't wait to read more about them in Brooke and Peyton's story.. Hope the turn out like Brooke and Landon! I also can't wait to see what happens between Brooke and Jasper, and what's going to happen in Europe..
And lucky Kay and Noah for going to NY, just spent a week there, and I miss the city already.. Went to DC for a day too, and I just have to say that you have a beautiful capital :)
Author's Response: I TRIED to take a break! It just didn't work out so well :) I'm glad you enjoyed catching up. There's a ton more fanfics rolling around in my mind. Oh, and welcome back! I've never been to DC, but I've heard it's beautiful. I love New York though :) NYC is nice, but the backcountry is even better.
Date: 11/14/10 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 60
Thank you for the great story!
I hope you'll keep on writing in the future!
Date: 11/14/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 60
Omg!! I can't believe how much it hurts it's over!!! lol
It was so great from start to finish, and like I always said, this story was more deja vu than fiction for me at times, which made me love it even more! Awesome work!
And it was so great you used my "bittersweet" remark a few chapters ago!! Lol! loved it!
I'm very looking forward for what's next and kind of keep up a little bit with Kay!!
Author's Response: I'm sad it's over. I really loved Kay's story, but she's at a good place and that makes me happy :)
Date: 11/14/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 60
And they lived happily ever after.....
What a sweet ending. Sad that it's over now but I'm excited to read more of your work in the future.
This was a great story, well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 11/14/10 08:00 am Title: Chapter 60
I love it. Sad that it's finished though.
Date: 11/14/10 06:12 am Title: Chapter 60
Just caught up and finished. I'm kind of sad to see Kayleigh's story end. I really liked her character, she was strong and likable!
Great job with this one! :)
Author's Response: I really liked her character too...but I know she's going to be okay. Plus, you'll be seeing her again...in future stories. ::grin::
Date: 11/14/10 06:09 am Title: Chapter 60
Yay!! Congrats on finishing yet another story. I loved it...and what a happy ending :) Can't wait to read the others.
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Date: 11/14/10 05:13 am Title: Chapter 60
Btw yes, life IS what you made her of.
'It seemed ridiculous to remembered how I had been so convinced no one cared about me. Every person in the room had been a pillar of support to me at some time in the past year. I was loved more than I had ever realized. Noah wrapped an arm around my shoulder and I sighed.'
LORD! TRUE!
Flying high Ms Littrell.... DONT GO!!
Date: 11/14/10 05:12 am Title: Chapter 60
OMG! *crying like a baby* JEN!
Awww m Landon holding Brody...
Kay made Lill B smile,and the ring... he WILL be ALWAYS Kay and Noah's baby boy..
Ohhhhh JEN!
DONT GO KAY AND NOAH!!!!!!
Author's Response: :) I'm going to take all the exclamations as a good ending, haha
Date: 11/14/10 05:05 am Title: Chapter 59
"Good. I got the Mirena put in. Not that Noah and I are planning on putting it's effectiveness to the test for awhile," I said.
"You'd be surprised how creative you can get when you're abstinent," Brooke said.
"You and Jasper haven't?" I asked. Brooke shook her head.
"Nope."
"He's pretty hot."
Brooke smiled. "Tell me about it. I'm not saying I haven't seen the whole thing, but..."
"I think you're stronger than I am," I said seriously. Brooke's eyes fluttered closed.
"You have no idea how much you getting pregnant affected me," Brooke said softly. "And trust me. You're much stronger than I am. I couldn't have done what you did."
---Ooohhhh Ms Carter... you might be a Carter, but your mind is LIV's all the way!
Landon's little hands pressed onto Liv's back.
"Our babies are getting big!" he announced happily. He let out a shriek as Nick scooped him up.
"Those are my babies Lan-do!" Nick said. Landon playfully punched his chest before he threw his arms around Nick's neck and gave him a kiss. Nick's eyes lit up happily. I saw Noah watching Nick with pure admiration in his eyes.
---TEARING EYES!!! I looooove Nick, Liv with Landon! I LOVE THIS BOY! Oh Kay...
If Brody turned out anything like Landon, Baylee and Marcie were going to have their work cut out for them.
Dad was hyper. Nick was hyper.
Their grandchild was bound to bounce off the walls.
---JESUS YES! And we don't want it ANY other way!
Author's Response: LoL we don't want it any other way...that's for SURE!
Date: 11/14/10 04:40 am Title: Chapter 60
Omg! I just got caught up on about 13 chapters! There was a website maintenance so haven't gone on this site in a long time and I was supprised that this story is finished. Good story. I never would have thought that they would give the baby up. Like everyone says...I glad Brody is with Marcie and Baylee.
Author's Response: Wow, 13 chapters! You were on a reading frenzy! Glad you enjoyed it. I knew if I was going to keep that plotlne that it had to end differently than Shelby's. But I think it still ended without too much melancholy.
Date: 11/14/10 03:20 am Title: Chapter 60
aaaawwww!! I'm sad it's over! it was an amazing story girl!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 11/14/10 02:53 am Title: Chapter 60
LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing job, Jen. :)
Any possibility of a sequel set some years down the road? ;)
The end of this makes me excited for Ally's story. Can't WAIT for that one! But I'm sure you'll finish Heartbreaker first, it's all good. :)
Author's Response: I'm finishing Heartbreaker first. Got to pick up Great Divide too. So many people have asked about a sequel....I've got SOME notes but I'm not making any promises :p
