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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 02:52 am Title: Chapter 60

Noooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *long wail of despair* It can't be over!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This one was my FAVOURITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs* I'm going to miss reading its updates every day!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pouts*

~Lenni~



Author's Response: LoL aww, well hopefully I can give you a new favorite soon!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 02:48 am Title: Chapter 59

Roflmao! Oh, God. Frick 'n' Frack combined? Baylee & Marcie are in for a world of trouble! Lol.

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Lots of prayers and patience go out to those two!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 02:47 am Title: Chapter 59

:) Happy chapter, on to the last one... :(

Author's Response: Happy chapters are needed! :) Especially as I celebrate the end of another story...

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 58

Go Kay, I knew you could make it. Things are getting better and you'll soon be on your way... ;)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 02:35 am Title: Chapter 57

I definitely agree with the ending, it is bittersweet and Kay's growing up so fast...on to the next chapter...

Reviewer: Xhex30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 01:02 am Title: Chapter 60

at first, i just wanna say thankyou for another amazing story!!!! you´re such a wonderful storyteller!!! you make me cry and laugh so many times!!!

i adore noah, as much as his dad... ;o)

the past year (in the story) helped kay to grow. and the matured kay is such an amazing person!!! she was selfless and did the best for her son!! sad... but the best for him!

sad that all these things had to happen, before she realized, that there are so many people who loves her and cares for her, no matter what!!!!

baylee stumbled too... i LOVED the scene, when kayleigh caught them in the act...

but my absolutely favourite funny scene (under so many of it) was, when kay gives birth to brody... when brian says, "So this is what would happen if Nick and I had a baby"

anyway.... I loved each chapter!! can´t wait for another story!!!!!

greetings from austria!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad everyone enjoyed this one! So many people started off really strongly disliking Kay :) I think at that point 'she' hated herself too. I adore Noah, but then again I'm partial to him as my first fanfic 'baby boy' I love that Baylee's perfection was called into question with that scene in the office...and of course Brian got my favorite observation of the whole story in that there would be world peace if every fangirl got a Bri/Nick hybrid. Haha hope to hear from you in future stories!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 12:58 am Title: Chapter 60

Kinda sorry to see this story end..lol! I really loved this story.  Kaye grew up so much from start to finish.

Who's next!?! Ally? Peyton? Are you gonna do a story on Megan and Taryn!?! Pleaaaase!!! Imagine what all would happen before THEY turn 16!  And I'm just DYING to here more about Brody and how he turns out!  



Author's Response: LoL after I finish Brooke's story, Ally will be next. I need a little break from these crazy Carters and Littrells! Jury's stil out on a Megan/Taryn story. We'll see :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 60

"You have my heart around my neck and now you'll have our family on your finger," he said.

I knew the stones well. A garnet for January on the left. A ruby for July on the right. And in the middle, a brillant green emerald for May. Brody's stone.

"He'll always be ours," Noah said firmly. He plucked the ring out and held it out. I slid it on my finger and let out a shaky breath.

Great ending! What a great story Jen! You rock as usual!

Author's Response: Noah's such a poet ::sigh:: what a boy... Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 60

Awwww such an amazing ending to an amazing story.

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 60

What a wonderful story. I have to say it's one of my favorites. I enjoyed watching Kaylee grow and mature in one short year. She learned a lot about herself and the people who truly care about her. I think Kayleigh is one of my favorite characters to read about. Thank you for writing about hard topics. You put a realistic spin and use emotions to make the reader feel what Kayleigh was feeling. At times she annoyed me. Other times I felt sad for her. She is a dynamic character. Thanks for writing a wonderful story.

Author's Response: I'm really proud of this story because I totally agree with you - Kay showed a lot of development over the course of these sixty chapters. I was really able to flesh her and her imperfections out and work at getting her to the place she needed to be. Thanks for reading along! :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 59

Hehe amazing job.

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 60

all good things come to a end love Kay and Noah oh sweet she grown up alot since the first chapter and just grown into loveable and smart woman with gr8 ppl that love her for who she it.  I am happy she got a gr8 man that love her he so lovealble why cant man my age be like that

 

Reviewer: Lynzer4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 60

great ending. Sad to see it end but hopefully we will see a part 2... maybe one writen a few years later as they finish college and create the family they started to soon.

Loved it.



Author's Response: Who knows what you might see from me? loL endless possibilities, right? :) Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: kristylee Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 60

aww kinda sad it ended.

yes we need a nick/olivia story ive missed them.

Author's Response: LoL Nick and Olivia are a boring married couple now :) There kids get to start the drama now! lol

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 59

wow i take a Landon any day then Brody if he turns out anything like his grandads lol. So cant wait for Brooke story to start up so we get to know this Jasper person

Well when u r twin it is importent that you oldest or youngest twins bc somethings twins use that when they want or do not want things done.

Yep Kay is got a good man in Noah it took her long to see it but she got there in the end so sad this story coming to end. 

PS R we gonna see a twin story?



Author's Response: LoL Brian and Nick might not have been far off with cloning Brody..all of us girls would love that combination! :) I know twins love to know whose oldest/youngest...it's great leverage once they get older. As for your PS....the jury is still out :)