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Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 59

I'm feeling kinda sorry for Bay and Marcie...lmao!! This kid is going to be hanging from the rafters by the time he's 1! With both genes in that bloodline, he's going to be one beautiful, talented, funny bundle of constant energy. 



Author's Response: Lmao I know! He's going to be like Landon times a billion...we all know how Brian is...and Nick...phew. What a dynamo! Gorgeous dynamo, but still...

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 58

oh this is the sweetest chapter ever love everyone in it I know their alot of ppl to write but I miss Pey :( but Landon he cool too really smart for his age.

only two chapters left and not much bad can happen with them well here hoping right lol .

They is soooo something going on with Jasper if theres is im happy i know i was team Trev but if she cant be with him would lov her be with Jasper, i now dont think the sercet him being gay oh well we find out soon right :)

I am going miss Kay :(



Author's Response: That's what happens when Pey gets to go on a trip to D.C on her sister's graduati on :p Hmmm I think you're on to something with the Jasper business :) Glad to know you might be moving on from Team Trev lol

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 06:41 am Title: Chapter 58

Ooooh. Sych a wonderfully fun way to end a chapter! Yay!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: I think everyone needed some fun!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 06:36 am Title: Chapter 57

Awwww. So bittersweet - I hate that taste in my mouth - lol.

~Lenni~



Author's Response: I hate that taste too lol

Reviewer: Amber Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1

You're stories are amazing! :) I've been reading since the very first one. :) Can't wait to read the finish of this one & the rest of Brooke's story. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm so glad everyone enjoys to read them as much as I love to write them :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 05:38 am Title: Chapter 58

I respect Kayleigh's way of dealing with the baby thing. It's nice to see that it was a decision that weighs on her mind, but in her heart she knows she did the right thing from all of them. What love that young lady has! Love her!

Author's Response: My kay-d bugs growing up ::sniffle:: She's come so far since chapter 1....::sigh::

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 03:51 am Title: Chapter 58

Oh Jen... seriously! I can't cry anymore!
LANDON!!!

"TWINNIES!" Landon said happily. He looked at me.
"Where's your baby?" he asked.
Everyone got quiet. I looked at Noah. Noah twirled his fork around.
"He lives with his mommy and daddy," I said.
"But your the mommy."
I smiled. "I carried him in my tummy, but it takes more than that to be a mommy."
Landon looked confused. He seemed to really have to think about that.
"Like putting band-aids on boo-boos?" he guessed. I smiled and nodded.
"Yup. Noah and I are still in school so we can't do all that stuff like your mommy can."
Landon nodded. "Being a mommy is a busy job."
Liv smiled and ruffled his hair.
"But it's worth it kiddo."
She kissed his messy cheek. He made a priceless face.
"MOOOOO-OOOMMMMMMM!"
---JESUS!!! Landon seams a kid, but he's so smart. These kids....
I WANT A LANDON FOR ME!

Jesus.... yes, be a Littrell open doors...
Oh poor Noah... isn't easy for him have to see the twins every single day!
Brody IS a Carter! Period!
JEEEENNNNNN!!!! NEXT! It's ending.... JESUS!

Author's Response: LoL yeah I want a Landon too :p I can just see him with his shaggy brown hair really trying to wrap his mind around such a heavy subject

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 03:48 am Title: Chapter 58

Amazing can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 02:54 am Title: Chapter 57

''Liv made a beeline for Brody. "Hey handsome," she cooed. She undid the straps and picked him up. His little legs started to kick.
I almost could feel the same phantom kick in my tummy.
I missed it.''
---JESUS!

''He held my hand tightly as we walked back inside. The laughter I heard felt as good as the gentle breeze from outside. I knew the smiles would be replaced by tears when Marcie and Baylee took Brody on that plane later tonight.
It was bittersweet. I was happy for them, I was sad for us...
I was growing up without even realizing it.''
---JESUS!

Jen... I'm at my girlie days... cramps... hormonal... I AM CRYING!
AGAIN! Till the end of this I... *faint*
I know that Marcie and Bay will be THE perfect parents, but KAy and Noah ARE the parents.. this is so hard for them!
JEsus... KAy is bigger than me.

Author's Response: We can be hormonal together lol. I needed to cry while writing chapters! These came at the perfect time I guess....Marcie and Bay will spoil him rotten..and Kay and Noah will always have him close in their hearts

Reviewer: BiancaRJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/10 02:26 am Title: Chapter 57

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwww!! I can't stop awing LOL! AWESOME chapter!

Author's Response: LoL lots of aww-worthy moments in this chapter!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 57

Omg one of the best chapters. U had tears is my eyes. Amzing job I so cant wait for more.

Author's Response: aww thanks :) I love these last sentimental chapters

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 57

Our Noah and Kay all growin up :( they did something that ppl alot older then them can not do so the hardest part is yet to come



Author's Response: You've got that right! Huge step towards maturity right there...

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 57

"Today I stand in front of you with everything I could have dreamed of and I have you to thank. I'm so happy that I'm part of this beautiful family. I will never be able to thank you enough for what you've done. You always tell me I'm the calm one...the strong one. But that's what you are. Kayleigh, I love you so much from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for the miracles."

Before I could digest the amazingness of it all, she walked over and hugged me tightly. She had my brother...she had my son...

She had us all.

Another round of tears!!! BEAUTIFUL!

Author's Response: LoL I guess it's just that kind of day. :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, but they'll be so many more stories to come!

I look forward to that!!! LOL

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 56

''Now I knew exactly what she meant.''
---Now you know Kay d-bug! Oh boy... Jen, you will KILL me by the end of this weekend..


''I smiled. "If you're going to be changing diapers, the first step is holding him," I said lightly. Inside my heart was being hit by a hammer.''
---Oh Boy... dying inside...


"He's got the Littrell nose!" Nick said. He tapped it gently.
"Noah's eyes," Liv whispered. "Look at those gorgeous lady-killer eyes."
"This bald head will be blonde in no time," mom said when it was her turn to hold him. She rocked him lovingly in her arms.
My dad was the one to break the sweetness. I, for one, was glad he did. My hormones didn't need much of a push to get me to cry. But dad...dad as always made me laugh.
"So this is what would happen if Nick and I had a baby," dad said lightly. "Not bad, Nick." Everyone laughed.
"We should clone him, grow him up fast, and give him to all the Frick-n-Frack ladies," Nick added.
"I think that would probably achieve world peace," dad said in mock-seriousness.
"I love you."
The 'I love you' was a whispered add-on in my ear. I looked up at Noah. He hadn't left me for a second.
"I love you too," I whispered back. He nuzzled my cheek.
"We're doing the right thing," he said. "It hurts...but...it's right."
--Oh Lord.. give Brody to the LADIES! hahha Only Nick and Brian!
Oh Noah, you're a gentleman!


''Marcie and I sat between Brody's carseat. The faces he made were so funny. Some of them I had seen my dad do; others I had seen Nick and Noah do. He worked his little mouth twenty four hours a day.''
--awww this baby is THE lill guy...


"I love you bunches lil' dude," I said. I took his mittened hand and kissed it a million times. "Even though you liked to kick. Didn't you?"
As if in answer, his legs kicked out again. A huge blob of drool fell out of his mouth. His eyes unfocused and crossed like he was trying to look at it. Marcie was on it with a cloth.''
---awwww I love Brody!!
Jesus.. see him go will be.... DEATH!

Author's Response: LoL ah Nick and Brian...always with the good ideas :) schleping their grandchild off in the name of world peace...haha. I already heart <3 Brody. These WILL be hard chapters...