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Reviewer: sofdlovesbsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/10 02:31 am Title: Chapter 2

I don't like Chelsea because Leighanne already has a daughter that looks like her.lol I feel bad for Kay,her Knight and shinging Armor is Noah and Hopefully she sees it sooner rather than later. you so need to hook them up. Please.lol She has to learn to value herself,I hope that is part of her journey and I think Brian and Leighanne need to open their eyes and pay more attention to their other child.
Love it! Keep it up.

Author's Response: Yeah Leighanne doesn't need Claudia as a mini-me...that should be Brooke's job. :( Valuing herself is going to be a MAJOR part of her story...she's got a LONG road ahead of her...

Reviewer: CarterFanUs Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow Brian n Leighanne in the dark they so right on with this wedding hope they see it soon that they hav two kids not one. I am not gonna comment on Claudia just yet.

I am both happy and sad u stated this story bc happy we find out litlle more about Kay and sad that the series is almost at the end bc after kay its only Ally and Pey

Author's Response: Oh well I'm sure there's more stories to come. Just not in the 'Coaster' realm. :) I have quite a few ideas still left in my crazy mind!

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

LOVING this story so far! Really intrigued to read more about her story. The fact she thinks Noah is too good for her is sweet. Obv she wants the bad boys for some reason... but i have a feeling at the end of it all Noah will be perfect for her!

Btw I'm having the same problems you are when updating. I've emailed the mods.

Author's Response: oh no I'm spreading the update disease! j/k Julilly hasn't been able to figure it out yet through the EFiction Forums...I'm keeping my fingers crossed. I'm outlining the story and I'm so excited about what's to come. I think everyone is on team Noah!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

I don't think I like Claudia, she seems self centered. I know it's her wedding and all but Kayeligh's birthday is important too!
Um, Kay. Hello? NOAH CARTER= your knight in shining armor, duh.

Author's Response: LoL no one likes Claudia :) I do love your little Noah equation, haha

Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

What the hell. Why is Leighanne doing all the planning with this snotty fake anyways, doesn't Claudia have her own mother to take over & overlord the wedding? Most mothers of the bride LIVE for that ish! But I can imagine if Leighanne takes charge, it's hard to take her powers away. LOL

Author's Response: LoL Leighanne was born to party...I'm just saying. You'll meet Claudia's mother soon. It will be special, lol. :)

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

Poor Kay ok at the moment Claudia i do not like her but is early days yet. Maybe Kay was right about Baylee.

Kay has got her prince but she does not giv him a time or day bc he to young for her

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad everyone loves these sticks! *waves them proudly* But I'm sure the people who're getting beaten with them don't - lol.

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Yeah the people you've beat are hiding now...or I've killed them off...or they're in prison...lol you have a good track record!

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

noah = knight in shining armor. more please!

Author's Response: LoL you think so?

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

Poor Kay :( I hope she finds her night in shining armor. Amazing job.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

Poor Kayleigh. I mean, how can they not care about her anymore? So Baylee's getting married....yes, it's a big deal, but c'mon! You can't just forget your daughter & her 16th birthday!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: :( It's sad and depressing isn't it? The big question is...DID they forget her birthday?

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

Claudia is irritating me already, something about her seems fake... Poor Kayleigh, what happened to her makes me so sad. Can't wait for more, I am loving this already, I know it's going to be such a great story just like all of the others!

Author's Response: LoL Claudia is irritating...Liv was a bridezilla, but nowhere near as bad as what the Littrell clan is doing. I'm glad you're enjoying it...lots more to come!

Reviewer: SweetDsPixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

Seriously crying over a pair of shoes? wow lol
I am another person who doesnt like Claudia just something about her. Even her name to me screams not nice.
Poor Kay I don't want her to ever hurt again to.

Author's Response: LoL yup talk about your overly dramatic women. I'll remind everyone that most people were wrong about Trevor, so I'll keep monitoring your Claudia judgements. Is she good or is she bad? hmmm

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh I want to slap Leighanne. She is ignoring her own daughter in favor of an implant fake Christian. Uggg. Please etell me Kayleigh gets a real birthday. Like Brooke's. Not some damn oops sorry honey we forgot thing. She really should tell someone what happened. Keeping that kind of thing inside can kill you. Please update soon.
Marguerite

Author's Response: If I told you that would ruin the suspense...I think I mentioned that before, lol. I'm guessing just by the first few comments that everyone's not going to be a fan of Claudia, right?

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh I feel so sorry for her. And I am begging to hate her parents & brother. It's like she doesn't even exist. If they forget her 16th birthday they will do way more damage than can be repaired. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

I don't think they have forgotten about her birthday, but i think it's typical for girls so insecure as Kay to think that nobody cares or remember things that are importent to them..
Maybe once the "perfect" wedding is over, and Baylee have gotten himself some, then Bri and Leigh can see that someting is wrong with Kay and take her to see someone about it. She needs to talk to someone that dosn't know her, and who woun't judge, just help..
And you hit the nail on the head with the botox comment, sometimes Leigh's face looks younger now than it did ten years ago :)

Author's Response: 'and Baylee had gotten himself self' lmao...Kay does need to talk to someone but she's too young and immature to see that at the moment. and I love the comments regarding my Botox line. I agree she does look younger sometimes and I know it can't just be makeup that does it. :)