Date: 11/02/10 02:00 pm Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed that! Thank god it was just a story though, hehehe.
I imagine Nick does have quite an imagination after seeing his film The Pendant :)
Author's Response: LoL he did say entering his mind was going to be scary! :)
Date: 10/31/10 06:49 am Title: Epilogue
That was good I enjoyed that. Happy Halloween :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Thanks!
Date: 10/31/10 06:44 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh no wow, I knew once I started to read that she probably going to kill him.
Date: 10/30/10 10:32 pm Title: Epilogue
BRAVO Jen! great Story!!!! loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/30/10 10:32 pm Title: Epilogue
See i knew you were faking that you were done. I like the twist ending. I hope you have another story in mind for next halloween lol sorry i like to thin way ahead.
Author's Response: Yeah I was 'faking it' haha. Glad you liked the twist! Don't think I haven't thought about NEXT Halloween...it's AJ's turn this time :)
Date: 10/30/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
"Good bye," she whispered. "You lost the game."
My eyes widened.
"Wait, I--"
The knife sliced through the air right towards my heart.
My own blood-curdling scream was the last thing I heard.
What a great ending........psycho chick!
Author's Response: LoL got to love Nick Carter's twisted mind...
Date: 10/30/10 03:25 pm Title: Epilogue
hahaha I love this ending,glad there was a Epilogue. LOL @ Lauren getting mad at Nick for not including her in the story,nice to read a humorous ending to a scary story,It never clued into me that it would be a story considering the other story of a dream being with in a dream.lol Great Job,I read all the way through but wanted to leave a comment at the end.
Author's Response: LoL I try not to play the same storyline twice if I can help it :) I'm glad you enjoyed that it was really a story. Wasn't sure how everyone would react to the epilogue. :)
Date: 10/30/10 07:43 am Title: Epilogue
Bravo! I can't wait for the next story! That was a great ending!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 10/30/10 07:34 am Title: Epilogue
Loved the story telling idea! SO cool! (I apologize if don't make any sense)
Yay Nicky!!! You had me fooled! I was going with the dream idea 0 hahahahahaha!
Fantastical!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I loved that NO one mentioned that possibility this whole time. It made me proud that you guys didn't outsmart me (for once!)
Date: 10/30/10 06:39 am Title: Epilogue
Oh Boy... I gave screams indeed... my man was on charge.... first 1 is a sad number.. almost cried! Now this! Jen.. you have a brilliant, beautiful but weird mind. LOVE IT!
Comments:
"And where was I?"
I looked to my right. Lauren was staring at me. She didn't look so happy. An unhappy Lauren usually led to an unhappy Nick.
Uh oh.
---Brilliant Carter! Thanks Lauren!
"I didn't want you killed," I said sweetly.
"No, he didn't want to include you in the house so that he could pop the cherry of his imaginary hottie," AJ said with a grin.
I glared at him.
---I loooove my man!
"No, that's not it. My story had a moral!"
"What in the world could the moral of that story be?" Brian asked. He looked down at his ring.
"My ring isn't that big," he muttered. Leighanne kissed his cheek.
"No it's not Husband," she whispered.
--Awww poor Bri... everyone will look at their lives, as Carters sees them..
"The moral," I said loudly. "Was that you shouldn't judge a book by its cover."
"You mean a book like the one you had the killer stuff in my mouth?" Leigh asked. Howie wrapped his arm around her.
"At least you weren't decapitated," he said.
--Point taken.
"I think that story's going to scar me for life," Rochelle said. I looked over at her.
"It was that scary?" I asked hopefully.
"No, but having to listen to you describing yourself having sex was traumatizing," she said with a grin.
I grunted.
---HAHAHHAHAH LOVED RORO!!! She haves a Mclean side indeed!
"I still want to know why you slept with that girl even though you mentioned that you were dating me," Lauren said.
"Don't you remember? He was her very own Make-a-Wish Foundation," AJ said.
Everyone laughed.
----AJ you are the man! Brilliant! Brought my fav line!
"I'm sorry," I said. "Next time I tell a murder story, I'll make sure you're in it."
"And he'll kill you off first!" Rochelle added.
---MCLEAN! hahhah
Oh Boy... perfect! Congrats, again, Jen! Thank GOD the kids are safe AND with parents....
Author's Response: Ro better have a McLean side! She's going to be one soon! :) All's well that ends well!
Date: 10/30/10 04:19 am Title: Epilogue
wow oh wow ... great halloween story and i'm glad they didn't really die!!
Author's Response: Me too! :) I have a hard time killing off our boys...
Date: 10/30/10 02:01 am Title: Epilogue
Girl you are so lucky we can't get a hold of you. How dare you kill of our men like that! lol. But that WAS a great story and Nick does love Halloween. That was out of your norm by totally awesome. Happy Halloween to you too and dont do anything I wouldn't do (that includes messing around with Nick :-p)
Author's Response: Are you saying you wouldn't mess around with Nick? I don't believe it. :p I had fun with this one. I knew by the time I killed off Nickers that this better just be a story he was telling or I was going to have a lot of pissed off people!
Date: 10/29/10 10:55 pm Title: Epilogue
A STORY! I hadn't thought about that one! And hahaha I knew there would be an epilogue! But I laughed a lot at this one. The other people's reactions were too funny. Lauren should be glad she wasn't involved. Or maybe she could've been the superhero, kill Kacey and save Nick lol. I think Nick would've scored more kisses if he did that. xD Poor Lauren had to hear how he "de-virginized" (great great word) a murderous psycho fan.
Fantastic ending. Fantastic story. Thanks for writing & sharing!! And happy Halloween to you too. ;)
Author's Response: You're right! There was an epilogue :) I figured the best way to end a story with dismembered heads and sawed off fingers was with a little humor :) Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/29/10 10:29 pm Title: Epilogue
AHA!!!! I KNEW it wasnt the last chapter....awesome story, I love it! I love how Lauren was mad she wasn't in the story ha ha. Guess who is sleeping on the couch tonight?
Author's Response: You guys were right. I always love to mark that 'completed' checkbox! Nick is SO sleeping on the couch tonight!
Date: 10/29/10 10:29 pm Title: Epilogue
You think you're SO clever, don't you Jen? ;) Great twist and ending. LMAO at Brian: "My ring's not that big." :p Great job, loved it! Happy Halloween! :D
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed thw twist! haha I love Brian's line. He's all worried about his ring, lol.
