Date: 10/15/10 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay I just got caught up again! I wasn't getting the emails that you updated :( ok I don't think that Ivanka is the killer, it would be too predictable. Especially cause Nick has had it out for her all along. I can't wait to see the end of this but at the same time I hate that its ending, its a really fabulous story. Awesome job again!
Author's Response: Ugh AC hates me sometimes - I'm sure of it. :) Just check back every Friday on this one. I would love to theorize with you about the killer but it would totally ruin the ending, haha. So just stay tuned. Only a couple more chapters left!
Date: 10/10/10 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
so good!!!!! This story is great can't wait till the end!!!! Im thinking nick is dreaming of something.....
Author's Response: I don't think this would be a dream...more like a nightmare! Glad you're enjoying it! :)
Date: 10/09/10 06:42 am Title: Chapter 7
wow good update, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Tune in next Friday for the next installment. :)
Date: 10/09/10 04:47 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow...this is bizarre. What a story. I just read all seven chapters and this is so creepy. I'm impressed, well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Did I mention I love Halloween? haha I love the bizarre. But it doesn't seem to have the same effect, say around Valentine's day. :p
Date: 10/09/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter 7
Holy shit! First off, I love that AJ is still alive. Thank you :) Please don't kill off my man! lol. And damn...quick thinking, Nick. I hope they get the hell out of there.
Author's Response: LoL I was trying to protect myself from all you AJ girls by keeping him alive! Okay I take back doofus part...but just a little!
Date: 10/09/10 03:44 am Title: Chapter 6
Damn! This is some crazy, disturbing shit. Love it! This part was totally LOL: At least I was pretty sure you had to have a head to live.
I was cracking up!! But damn, the rest of it is hella scary.
Author's Response: Oh Nick, sometime I love making him the doofus just because it provides just the perfect comic relief. Actually that was the reason I had Howie wear the Wookie head in the first place. Better moment to see his real head lying under the fake one, haha
Date: 10/09/10 03:39 am Title: Chapter 5
LMFAO at Leighanne defriending Nick because he said fuck. That part was hilarious!
Author's Response: LoL that'll teach hm to have a potty mouth!
Date: 10/08/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
LMAO JEN~~~
I'm not dragging on dismemberment and rotting corpses for 60 chapters. :p
Author's Response: LoL well, for those of you who know how long my stories get, I just wanted to clarify!
Date: 10/08/10 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
Is AJ going to be like Johnny is the shinning, normal, but the one who went nuts and killed everyone?
What a great chapter and story!
Author's Response: I don't know...is he? I love theories! :) Heeerrreeee's AJ!
Date: 10/08/10 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oye vey in a half shell. This has GOT to be either a dream, or they were extremely good wax figurines that they knew Nick wouldn't look at too closely! There can NOT be a freakin' Backstreet killer! *prepares for battle with my sticks*
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL oh Lenni. I think you forget Nick tripped over Alyssa on the stairs. There's a difference between tripping over wax and tripping over flesh. Just saying! Not that I have any experience...lol.
Date: 10/08/10 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
ok Aj is alive, but i really hope they get out ok, poor Ro and Leigh. I really don't want this story to end but at the same time i want more lol.
Author's Response: LoL well this is a short story for sure. I'm not dragging on dismemberment and rotting corpses for 60 chapters. :p
Date: 10/08/10 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ohhh AJ. :(
Nick! Stop thinking it's Ivanka! It might be someone or someTHING that's much closer to you!! (*cough*Desiree*cough* *cough*or a friggin ghost!*cough*) Pleaaase don't let Nick and AJ die!! (As an AJ-girl I was really happy to know he's not dead) I wonder if Justin and Jen are dead too?
Author's Response: LoL I knew there were tons of AJ girls. I figured you'd all love that he was still alive. And you guys are killing me with the questions. I should never have finished this story weeks ago. ::chants:: I will not cave in. I promised myself that this was going to end around Halloween and it will haha. Anyhow, Desiree wouldn't be obvious in Nick's frame of mind would she? Has he just buddied up with...a murderer?
Date: 10/08/10 05:22 am Title: Chapter 7
''I hoisted the board up in the air. I looked around. If she was gone...that meant whoever the killer was (cough, cough Ivanka) was around here some place.''
---Jen and Justing must be dead too.. the first to go, since they see everything...
''I hesitated. How did you tell a guy his fiancee was murdered?''
---you just do.
MY MAN IS ALIVE!! GOOD FOR YOU, JEN!! You love to kill... JESUS! I'm having a thing over here.... GOD! Leigh and Ro.... Leighanne, Brian, Howie..... OMG even Alyssa! Carter was there.. oh LORD!
My poor Alex... GO CARTER!
LORD!
Poor James and Baylee!! OMG!
Author's Response: LoL yup your man is alive! Even if Nick had to clonk him on the head to keep him that way! :) I don't want to ruin anything, but I think you'll learn about Jen and Justin in the next chapter. Are they dead? Are they tied up? Are they trying to figure out why equipment isn't working? so many possibilities...
Date: 10/05/10 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
I haven't been reviewing because for some odd reason I couldn't log in. :/ But now, after ages or so, I can finally review!! I have no idea why I couldn't log in, must've been my internet. Anyway, I read through the reviews of others and here's what I think: 1. I don't think AJ's the murderer.. unless he's posessed by some evil force that's haunting the building 2. I don't think it's Ivanka either, because that would be way too predictable 3. I'm not sure if it's the strawberry girl that loves Brian.. I mean, why kill off the guy you have a crush on? Unless she's gone cuckoo. 4. Either there are murderous ghosts or whatever doing this or it's all one joke and the girls know about it, just to scare Nick. But I love supernatural stuff so I hope it's something haunted! On the other hand, I hope it's a prank 'cause I don't want Howie, Brian and Leighanne dead! Ahhh.. I'll just wait 3 long days before I get to know more... but I'm sure it'll be worth the wait! (:
Author's Response: I was wondering what had happened! Glad you were able to log in. AC is doing some STRANGE stuff lately. :/ I love reading through all of your reasonings. I'd like to contribute to your deductions, but that would kind of eliminate the need for finishing the story, haha. I can't wait until Friday. I've never finished a whole story before posting it...and it's really hard to wait even from an author's standpoint. :)
Date: 10/04/10 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh this is getting good. for the game play i was thinking AJ was the murderer but for the real thing i think it's Ivanka. I'm wondering what happend to Jen and Justin?
Author's Response: You'll find out! I'm horrible at waiting, but I'm going to keep my promise to myself to hold updates until each Friday. That way I can drag out the suspense like a good Halloween fic should!
