Date: 10/12/10 06:54 am Title: Day 2
I love how well you capture everything. The mood of the guys, their ways of coping, how it's dividing them even though they're trying to stand together.
Author's Response: Thanks Rose! I am always second guessing myself and thinking that the tone or mood isn't right so I'm glad you think it's coming off well :)
Date: 10/11/10 08:17 pm Title: Day 2
I love the way you do one scene from each of their perspectives in each chapter. It's a good way to move the story along and see it from all sides. I'm enjoying seeing the different ways they're dealing with everything. I liked Kevin and Howie discussing their eggs like a couple of old men - and "no one screams for them anyway." LOL Also liked Brian surfing LD and the mention of Nick's fake accounts LOL. Loving this story; keep 'em coming! :)
Author's Response: The whole perspectives thing was part of the reason I started writing the story. I remembered doing one of the forum challenges where we had to write from different POVs, and that one was a lot of fun so I wanted to try it in a longer story. I'm glad you liked the Kevin and Howie scene haha Howie is so hard for me to write! And of course I had to mention LD - LOL. Thanks again Julie! :)
Date: 10/11/10 10:45 am Title: Day 2
Aww I can just imagine them sitting reading the posts on LiveDaily to see what the fans were thinking of AJ in rehab. Must've been a tough time on all of them, not knowing if there was a future for the band, etc.
Author's Response: I hope that the support of the fans helped them get through that tough time. It would have to be really scary just having to stop the tour like that, especially when they were always so gung ho about pleasing the fans. Thanks for the review, Steph :)
Date: 10/10/10 11:15 pm Title: Day 2
Thanks for another update.
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/10/10 10:54 pm Title: Day 2
Great chapter. Loved the awkward conversation at the beginning with Kevin and Howie and all of their concern for Nick. Looking forward to the next chapter. :O)
Author's Response: Thanks again, Mare! :) The awkward conversation was fun to write, I imagine it would be hard for them to know the approptiate things to say at a time like this. There will be another chapter soon!
Date: 10/10/10 10:35 pm Title: Day 2
God I feel so bad for Nick, I think this is probably where his drinking problem started honestly. Still love Kevin, although I am a Nick girl I love Kevin being parental in fanfics. Howie was good too. Its cute that Brian reads Live Daily, I never went on there myself so I don't know what it was like. I just thought it was funny to see Brian reading message boards. Awesome chapter again!
Author's Response: I agree with you about Nick's drinking problem starting around the time and because of all this. I'm also a Nick girl but I'm growing fonder of writing about Kevin :) I never went to LD really either, sometimes I'd read threads when there was big news but that's about it. Thanks for the review Tracy!
Date: 10/10/10 08:39 pm Title: Day 2
Another great chap! Poor Nick...he is not doing well. I love how you describe the awkwardness between Kevin and Howie. I can imagine that they don't know what to say. And I love the part with Nick's disguise and how the no one yells for Howie and Kevin. LOL. Also, gotta love the LD reference. I know Nick used to lurk there and fill the guys in! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Poor Kevin and Howie..they are so awkward and no one ever screams for them haha. I had to throw LD in there... I couldn't resist! I never used to post there but I did lurk from time to time. Thanks so much for your review, Sel :) There will be a new chapter on Wednesday!
