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Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/11 11:50 pm Title: Day 15

Another great chap! I think it's realistic that Kevin would worry about Nick, but I love how it took Howie saying somehow to him. They all just seem to be preoccupied. I live how none of them have anything ready for the record company...something tells me they'll end up with that greatest hits album. Lol. Nick needs to get it together and at least call people back! Wonder if he'll show up. Hope you update soon :)

Author's Response: Thanks Sel! I think that Kevin would worry about Nick as well. You never know about the greatest hits... lol ;) Nick really needs to get his ass in gear! The other guys are kind of counting on him after all. I'll try to update soon - I have most of the next chapter written so it shouldn't be too long. Thanks again!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 05:44 pm Title: Day 15

I thought it was funny that Howie was the one worried about Nick, and Kevin wasn't... until Howie called, and now Kevin's panicking too. I loved where Kevin thought, "Isn't Howie supposed to be the one who keeps us all calm?" LOL I also loved him thinking of how Brian always told his mom everything, even if it would get him in trouble. I can believe it; Brian's such a mama's boy. That's so cute, though! I could still sense Brian's frustration and almost desperation in his scene, still trying to write songs with no inspiration. And ohhh Nick... LOL I guess they have reason to be worried. I laughed when he was thinking about what Kevin would say if he showed up and caught Nick smoking pot. I imagined him going "Drugs are bad, mmkay?" like Mr. Mackey on South Park. Another great chapter, Steph!

Author's Response: Thanks, Julie! I thought it would only be natural for Kevin to worry about Nick as soon as someone mentioned it to him. Brian is adorable. :) I just pictured him as a little kid crying to his mom about something he and his brother had done, lol. They definitely have reasons to be worried about poor Nick :( He is going down a dark path, and I guess he feels like he has no one to turn to and that the guys are just out to get him and ruin his fun. LOL at the South Park comment! I could totally picture Kevin saying it like that! Thanks again for the review! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 02:06 pm Title: Day 15

I loved the conversation between Howie and Kevin and that it ended with Howie panicking Kevin lol I can see that happening. Also the fact that no one has anything to show the record company and they feel like it's all on Nick's shoulders and  in the meantime he's being a pothead. lol Once again, you created a very realistic picture of things, in my mind anyway. Nicely done, Steph!



Author's Response: Thanks Mare! I originally wasn't going to have Kevin worry about Nick afterwards, but I figured of course he would as soon as Howie planted the seed of doubt lol. I'm really glad you liked this one and found it realistic :) Thanks again!

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 07:13 am Title: Day 15

Nick must talk with the guys! He is acting so weird... Thanks for the update!



Author's Response: I hope Nick talks with the guys soon too! Poor guy is so lost :( Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 05:19 am Title: Day 15

Great update. I feel like Nick is being selfish. He should answer Howie's calls, some calls are important. The guys are really stressing about the upcoming meeting with Jive. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I think Nick is being really selfiish too, he should try and keep in contact with the guys a little better. He probably doesn't realize how much he's worrying them. I'll try to update soon!