Date: 09/06/12 05:37 am Title: Day 25
Brian's less douchey here LOL. I love Nick's POV. I know I've said that but I really do, he's so entertaining the way you write him. It's also realistic at the same time. I used to wonder why he stayed in Tampa when there's really nothing there for him. Unlike the others there's just nothing for him to go back to, and sadly they may not understand that fully.
Author's Response: I always sorta wondered why he stayed in Tampa too, so I tried to dig into his brain a little bit. I'm glad you enjoy his POV and think I write him well :)
Date: 07/05/12 06:01 am Title: Day 25
Yay, an update! Poor Howie, stewing over lying to Nick... he should probably just lie again and act like they didn't find out about AJ until after he and Nick got to LA. Too bad he didn't get the chance to tell him anything; I'm curious for Nick's reaction. I liked in Nick's part when he was explaining why he hates being at home, because of his dysfunctional family. I'm such a homebody, it's hard to relate, but it does make sense when you look at it that way. I enjoyed Kevin's thoughts on Carson Daly and TRL LOL. And I also enjoyed Brian's commentary while he was listening to Kevin's interview. Looking forward to more soon! I hope your lunch break writing streak continues!
Author's Response: I know right, Howie may as well just keep lying while he's at it, no reason to tell Nick when they found out about it. And then Nick left in such a rush and of course instead of stopping him, Howie just let him leave because he didn't want to have to tell Nick the truth. I couldn't really think of anything for Nick's part, honestly, so I just started rambling inside his head! So I'm glad you thought it worked. Thanks for all the compliments, Julie! :) I'm going to try to write again at lunch today, hopefully it works!
Date: 07/05/12 03:20 am Title: Day 25
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: :) I try lol
Date: 07/05/12 01:21 am Title: Day 25
Uh oh now the whole world knows about the tour being delayed and Nick doesn't I see a confirtation coming up! How funny would it be if Nick saw TLR when out in LA and just decides to confront Kevin, haha!
Author's Response: I know right, the whole rest of the world knows before Nick does LOL. I thought about having him see TRL randomly, but then I figured out of all the guys, Nick would be the least likely to watch TRL. Thanks for the review :)
Date: 07/05/12 12:49 am Title: Day 25
Wow, you updated! Go you!! I could understand why Howie would wuss out! If I were him I would just act like I found out right before he did. Why bother letting him know he knew before they left? I mean if you're going to lie, you might as well LIE, right? lmao Carson Daly is a tool! Like I mentioned in Why! I hate how he was so fake to the guys faces all the time but then would make fun of them. It's like twitter. He had to realize that he's wasn't invisible when he did stuff like that? I loved Howie's mention of Nick putting his shoes on without untying the laces and how that bugged him. It's the little things like that I love most about this story. It makes it seem so real! Nicely done, Steph. I hope this is the beginning of a writing streak for you! Stop making banners for things and keep writing on this!! LOL
Author's Response: I know, I can't believe I updated! I tried something new and used my lunch break at work to write (since I spent all day at work in the writing zone) and it actually worked out really well! So I think I'm going to keep doing that :) I know right, what's the point in telling Nick he'd known all along? It'd only piss him off. Poor Howie, he sucks at lying haha. And I hate Carson Daly too! He's definitely a tool, and I hated how fake he was too. So dumb. Thanks so much for your compliments on the little things, I enjoy adding commentary like that :) It's the nice thing about writing it in first person! I hope it's the beginning of an update streak for me too! LMAO I love you and your hatred of banners! Thanks for the lengthy review! :)
Date: 07/05/12 12:36 am Title: Day 25
*sighs* oh Howie. I really hope he does tell Nick because I can picture him on the next flight back to Tampa when he finds out. As for Kevin, I agree about Carson - he really is a pompous ass. Excited to see an update for this again and looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I know right? Nick will be so pissed. And now the rest of the world knows before he does! And I always hated Carson too... and I only watched TRL like, twice haha. Thanks so much for the review, Tracy! You're always so speedy :)
