Date: 09/06/12 05:53 am Title: Day 29
Oh Nick...the little whore. I like to forget how big of a whore he was pre-Lauren lmao. I really enjoy how you write Kevin and Kristen, she really is my favorite wife. She supports without being all up in it...like say, Leighanne. Who I tolerate a lot better than I used to but still. Speaking of, I can't even imagine Brian trying to do swing LOL.
Author's Response: Nick was suuuuch a whore. I'm willing to bet he's still kind of a whore. Kristen is my favourite wife too! She's so pretty and she just hangs back and lets Kevin do his thing, which is awesome. LOL like you said, unlike some people! Haha the image of Brian trying to do swing is a funny one, isn't it? He's so whipped! haha.
Date: 07/30/12 05:30 am Title: Day 29
I could see what I was saying in my last review about Brian and Kevin needing that time off to start their families in the Kevin part at the beginning of this chapter. I definitely see both of them being homebodies to an extend and enjoying that time at home. The part with Brian and Leighanne going swing dancing was really cute! I liked his whole reaction to it - typical guy! LOL And Nick... this line just says it all: "But at least I was a hot pig." That is so Nick LOL. Disgustingly hot. I'm eager to read about Kevin visiting AJ before he goes to Kentucky. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: LMAO Yep, Nick is disgustingly hot. I think out of the whole group Kevin and Brian are definitely the biggest homebodies, so I'm glad you thought I portrayed that well. I really enjoyed writing Brian and Leighanne swing dancing, I don't know why but I could totally picture them doing that haha. Thanks for the reviews, Julie! Glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: 07/29/12 10:00 pm Title: Day 29
I like how you show the contrast of everyone's feelings and how they're all dealing with their time off. I can't wait for Kevin to visit AJ.
Author's Response: Thanks much, I'm glad you like it! :) I already wrote the Kevin visiting AJ part I just need to finish the other 3 POVs for the next chapter... hopefully it won't be too long of a wait!
Date: 07/29/12 08:18 pm Title: Day 29
Awwww. All the guys are happy with their wives but LOL at Nick thinking he's god's gift to women. He had such a cocky attitude at this point, I'm secretly glad that girl slapped him to be honest. Loved the update :)
Author's Response: Nick only thinks that about himself because it's true! LOL jk. I had a lot of fun writing his part and him getting slapped, actually. Which is funny because in real life I hate cocky jerks like him haha. Thanks for the review, Tracy! :)
Date: 07/29/12 04:54 pm Title: Day 29
I like how you described the two Kevin's in this one. The family guy and the music guy. It must be hard to find that balance. Nick with his chick thoughts lol I am so glad he's not that guy anymore. The naive, sunshine & rainbows me hopes maybe he was never that bad to begin with lol Brian swinging. I can actually see that happening! Even though this felt like a filler chapter, the really important thing is how well they are all adjusting to life not on the road, except for Nick who seems to really need it to occupy his time. Great job bringing that out! Yay!! Thanks for the update, Steph! :)
Author's Response: It was a bit of a filler chapter, yeah, but I sort of wanted to take this opportunity to showcase how each of the guys handles their relationships with women. I'm happy you liked the bit about the two Kevins! I just randomly came up with that while I was pounding out words and it seemed to make a lot of sense. And yeah Nick is a total wad in this chapter, and at this point in his life as a whole. And naive me used to think he would be the perfect, sweet innocent boyfriend, hah! Thanks for the review, Mare! :) Glad you liked it!
