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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/12 12:34 pm Title: Day 24

Aww how frustrating for them to have to further postpone the tour. I am glad they decided to keep it from Nick though. Should be interesting to see his reaction when he finds out about it. Okay, all caught up now do I expect some new updates soon!! :-)



Author's Response: Yup, Nick's reaction should be interesting and fun to write! It was necessary though, he was a mess down in Florida all by himself :( I'll try my best to update soon! Thanks Mare! :)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/12 08:43 pm Title: Day 24

I was glad to see an update on this yesterday! I was cracking up at the start of this chapter, when Nick was talking about how he never does laundry and the whole story about Kevin buying him a toothbrush and giving him a lecture on hygiene LMAO. If he wasn't so hot, I don't think we'd find the real life versions of these stories sort of endearing, rather than downright disgusting LOL. Well played on the other guys' part to not tell Nick the tour is postponed until they get him to LA... can't wait to read his reaction and the ramifications of that decision! Hope you can get back on an updating roll with this one!

Author's Response: Nick is so gross. It's so weird how I find him so hot and yet, I'm so disgusted by him at the same time hahaha. I was definitely cracking up at the mental image of Kevin watching Nick brush his teeth while I was writing this! It was definitely a good move on their part to not let Nick know what was going on until he got to LA, but he's obviously going to be pissed when he finds out. Thanks for the review, Julie! I'm glad you liked it and I'll try to update more often! I'm going to aim to have it finished for when we discuss it in September so we'll see how that goes lol

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/12 11:20 am Title: Day 23

Yay! I'm glad that Nick decided to go to LA and to get away from slimey Chris. I wonder if real life Nick still associates with that loser? I was just thinking about that the other day. Now that the tour is getting closer, it'll be nice seeing them all together again. I'm one chapter away from being caught up but I'm taking my time because I don't want have to wait ten years for the next update! lol and yes, I read these two chapters at around 6 am. I am an early reader lol 



Author's Response: I think he does, actually. He mentions him on twitter sometimes. But maybe he's gotten better, who knows. Yay for you getting caught up! It's always nice to have a backlog to sit and read :) I hope it won't be ten years until the next update lol! I'll try to keep them coming quicker - as I told Julie I want to have it completed by the time we discuss it :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/12 11:04 am Title: Day 22

*sigh* this is why i'm not a big Brian fan. You captured his holier than thou attitude rather well in this chapter. I love Kevin and of course you know how I feel about Nick & Kevin's relationship. Tough love is a great description. Can't wait to see what happens next and the beauty of catching up is I don't have to lol 



Author's Response: Thanks Mare! :) His holier than thou attitude is definitely one of the big reasons he's one of my least favourites in the group. I'm glad you thought I captured it well. Nick and Kevin have a really interesting dynamic and I definitely enjoy writing about them, especially at this point in BSB history.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/12 07:26 am Title: Day 24

Something tells me shit is gonna go down when Howie brings Nick to LA. I don't see Nick being exactly cordial about this whole thing. So happy you're still writing this story and looking forward to the next update, Steph!

Author's Response: Oh, he definitely won't be! Not with the way he's been acting so far lol. Thanks Tracy, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/12 06:54 am Title: Day 24

Nice to read an update, please keep them coming! Yeah I don't think Nick is going to see it as omitting a fact but rather just them lying.  Can't wait to read the blow up that is sure to happen between Kevin and Nick now!



Author's Response: Nick will probably not be able to see the bigger picture, that's for sure! There will definitely be consequences to Howie and Kevin's actions. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/12 03:29 am Title: Day 21

Great chapter. I loved Brian's thoughts in this one. His hesitation and doubt and wanting to run away. Also enjoyed reading Kevin's guilt and finally getting to hear from AJ. Of course I loved the Howie & Nick bonding as well. 



Author's Response: I struggled a little writing Brian in this chapter, I'm used to writing him so angsty, so I'm glad you liked his part! Thanks Mare! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/12 12:45 am Title: Day 24

Everybody (except Nick, really) could use more time off. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: I agree, they definitely could! Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/12 12:34 am Title: Day 23

I didn't realize that I was a chapter behind your latest update! I'm gonna have to keep a closer watch on this one. lol Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm trying to get back into the groove of updating it regularly - we'll see what happens lol

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/12 11:55 pm Title: Day 20

Whoa! Seems like I am further behind on this story than I thought I was. I'm going to try to play catch up the next few days. I love Howie so much in this chapter. I really think you captured him beautifully! I also lol'd at Nick and his whole awesome pizza scene. Most importantly, thanks for having Howie smoke weed lol I'm sure they have all done it & wouldn't be so quick to knock it out of Nicks hands. 



Author's Response: Aw thanks Mare! I don't think Howie (or any of the guys really) are super clean cut, so I'm glad you appreciated that he ended up smoking weed with Nick. I agree with you, I'm sure they've all done it at some point! That whole pizza scene was really fun to write :)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/12 02:14 am Title: Day 23

Yay, I'm glad Howie convinced Nick to come back to LA with him. At least Nick can tell what a tool Chris is when he's sober. I hope they'll all patch things up before tour. You do such a great job capturing the ups and downs of their relationships with each other, Steph. Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: I hope they are able to patch things up before the tour too! And yeah, Nick does have at least some common sense while he's sober. But only some :P Thanks for the compliment, I try to balance things out with their relationships! Even though they're all kinda at odds with each other, they're still brothers and support one another. Thanks for the reviews, Julie! I'll try to update soon! :)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/12 02:08 am Title: Day 22

Ooh, I didn't realize I was two chapters behind on this - sorry about that! Catching up now. There's still so much tension between the boys, even after visiting AJ... seems like it's really Nick they're worried about now, and for good reason. I loved Nick eavesdropping on Howie's conversation with Kevin, and Howie being totally oblivious to his "stealth" hints LOL. Poor Brian - I would want a break from all that, too, but they need to get it together if they're going back on tour in a week! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yay for you catching up! I know, just as AJ is starting to do better, Nick starts acting totally screwed up. I think they've all just spent so much time together and have been so busy for so long that at this point they need a detox period from the industry and each other. Thanks Julie!

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/12 09:49 pm Title: Day 23

Hmmm so just as Kevin is glad not to be seeing Nick till tour because he will take out his frustration with Brian on him, Nick iis going to LA with Howie.  Do I see a lecture or blow up occuring in the future?

 

I really am enjoying this story and how u are portraying the wide range of emotions the guys probably went through during this period.



Author's Response: We'll see what happens with Kevin once Nick gets to LA, I would say it's not too far-fetched an assumption that there might be a blow up considering what's been going on between them over the course of the break! Thanks for your compliments, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/12 11:36 pm Title: Day 23

I'm glad Howie is starting to get Nick to cooperate and that his advice is sinking through a bit because Chris is really a toolbag. As for Kevin, seems like he is starting to think about how he feels about the group (maybe the beginnings of him quitting). I'm seeing so much right now. Great update again, hope to see more soon Steph!

Author's Response: LOL yes Chris is definitely a toolbag! Ha! Howie went about it the right way with Nick I think, sympathizing with his situation rather than just lecturing him. I think you're right about Kevin, he's starting to look at the bigger picture a little more. Thanks for the review Tracy! Glad you're still enjoying it :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/12 05:30 pm Title: Day 22

I agree with both Kevin and Brian. Nick does need tough love but he's also an adult. That's what AJ needed to go to rehab. Thanks for another chapter.

Author's Response: I guess the key is finding that balance. They've got to be there for him, but they've also got to let him find his own way. Thanks for reading!