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Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/11 03:16 am Title: Day 19

Thanks for the update, can't wait to read about them visiting AJ.

Author's Response: Hopefully I will get that chapter up soon. Thanks :)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/11 07:55 pm Title: Day 18

Hey Steph, I'm sorry I'm so late on reviewing this chapter! I finally got caught up, and I loved it! As usual, you seem to have such a good read on the guys and their feelings, both about their careers and each other. Even though I'm a Brian girl, I remember thinking that Brian was probably going to be the first to leave the group, to spend more time with his family, so the Brian part really made sense to me. I liked Nick's part, with him stomping on koopas and pretending they're Kevin LMAO. He is such a douche right now in this story, but I always find his parts entertaining, the skewed way he sees things. I think Kevin's take on Brian's and Nick's friendship was dead on... It's sad, but true; the whole Frick & Frack thing is so adorable, but they really did turn out to be two completely different people. Reading this story makes me appreciate so much the way things are now, compared to then. I feel like all the guys have grown up and settled down and are really enjoying what they do now, whereas that didn't seem to be the case for all of them back in this era. Keep up the great work, Steph!

Author's Response: Yay for you being caught up! :) I always thought Brian would be the first to leave the group as well, so he could spend more time with Baylee and Leighanne. I'm glad you thought the Nick part was funny, I thought about taking the koopa part out since I felt it might be too much, but it made me laugh so I left it in. I try my best to rationalize things the way Nick would be seeing them, so I'm glad you hear you like his parts, even if he is a major douche LOL I find Brian and Nick's friendship so interesting since they have been through a lot and they have changed so much. It's definitely a weird contrast to be writing this angsty story with them not wanting to continue, when they all seem to be genuinely happy now. But I try and work that in as much as I can. Thanks so much for the review, Julie! Hopefully it won't be too long until the next update :)

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/11 01:50 pm Title: Day 18

I don't like Nick's attitude. I hope he can change his mind about Kevin. Thanks for the update!



Author's Response: I hope he changes his mind about Kevin too. Thanks for the reviews Victoria :)

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/11 01:02 pm Title: Day 17

I'm so pissed of with Nick lol



Author's Response: Me too, lol!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/11 06:14 am Title: Day 18

Aw, this is sad. I'm kind of mad at Nick but I can see that he's really struggling. Love the contrast between how Kevin and Howie deal with him. I'm sure Kevin is just tired and frustrated, and I really hope that he doesn't go down the same path as AJ did. I'm pretty surprised that he decided not to go to the meeting, but at the same time...very realistic.

I'm sad that he doesn't want to see AJ. I'm very interested to see what the visit will be like. Hope you update again soon!

Author's Response: Thanks Sel! Nick is definitely struggling, and I think that the other guys just want to help him. I'm glad you think it's realistic that Nick decided not to go to the meeting, I was a little worried about that part. I'm sad Nick doesn't want to see AJ as well :( There will be more about that in the next couple of chapters, and I should have an update soon. Thanks again!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 07:55 am Title: Day 18

Wow I hope Nick comes to his senses soon, but it doesn't look like he will. The guys are only looking out for him and he is being pigheaded. Loving the story still, sorry for my lack of reviewing lately.

Author's Response: Thanks Tracy :) I hope Nick comes to his senses soon too! The guys just don't want him to go down the same path AJ did :( I'm glad to hear you're still loving it!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/11 05:58 am Title: Day 18

Thanks for the update, can't wait to read about the meeting.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I'll try to have the next chapter up soon!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/11 12:43 pm Title: Day 17

Lol, I had to laugh at Nick telling her he'd missed her and having to spend another night there just to get his phone back. Chris is a little shit though, leaving him there like that. I can understand Kevin's frustration with it all, especially when Nick appears to not give a damn about the group.

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: LOL yeah, Nick would do anything to avoid the lecture from Kevin, too bad it didn't really work this time! I think Kevin is in the right though, Nick really needed to hear that stuff, even if he's acting like a brat and not listening to it. Hopefully it will sink in for him soon. Thanks Steph!!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/11 05:58 pm Title: Day 17

Loved this chapter!! Nick is such a moron LOL. I'm glad Kevin laid into him like that; he needs to hear it. Hopefully he'll still show up for the meeting. Can't wait to see how that and the visit with AJ goes!

Author's Response: Thanks, Julie! Nick is acting completely ridiculous, and he needed a good lecture from Kevin. I don't think it seemed to help much, but we'll see what happens. Maybe he needs some time for it to sink in. I didn't really intend for it to go down like that to be honest, but Nick and Kevin sort of took over while I was writing that scene. It was difficult to do. Hopefully you won't have to wait long for updates because I think I'll have a lot of time to write this week. Thanks again :)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/11 08:50 am Title: Day 17

I absolutely love this story and I love when we get an update! Just thought I should let you know that :) I love how Nick didn't even think about that chick having the other guys' numbers. LOL. And I'm glad he finally picked up the phone but very sad that things are really starting to fall apart now. The conversation between Nick and Kevin made really made me sad. VERY interested to see whether he'll decide to show and to see what the visit with AJ will be like. Thanks for updating.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Sel! It means a lot :) I work really hard on each chapter of this story trying to make a good balance between drama and reality so it makes me so happy to know you like it so much! Nick is such an idiot LOL Yeah, the part between him and Kevin was kind of hard to write, I felt it was sort of a turning point where things really start to go downhill for the group. I really hope Nick shapes up and comes to the meeting too :( He is being such a wad. Thanks again for the review!!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/11 02:05 am Title: Day 17

Thanks for the update. Man, Nick is an idiot. lol I can't wait to read about this meeting with Jive and of course the Boys going to see AJ.

Author's Response: Nick is a total idiot lol. Their meeting with Jive should be interesting, I'm looking forward to writing that and their visit with AJ. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/11 01:55 pm Title: Day 16

Well Steph, I've really enjoyed having a couple of chapters to catch up on all in one go! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading.

That poor fan is going to be waiting a long time for a call! I keep saying this, but I really love the way you have written them, it's as if you knew exactly what they were doing in that time off. Can't wait for more! Wonder what the meeting will bring.

Author's Response: Thanks! No worries - I know that real life sometimes gets in the way of fan fic life. I'm happy you were able to get caught up! That fan is going to be waiting a very long time lol Nick is such a douche. Thank you so much for the compliment! It means a lot to me because I'm trying to make things as realistic as possible. I feel like it can get boring at times so it's nice to know I'm still on the right track. Thanks for the review, Steph! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 01:35 am Title: Day 16

I hope the guys can be together again. Nick is such an asshole! He must act like an adult. Thanks for the update!



Author's Response: I hope so too. Nick really needs to get his act together! Thanks for the reivew, Victoria!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 12:53 am Title: Day 16

Loved this chapter! I felt sorry for Brian, watching Diary and thinking back to how the 100 hours tour was kind of the beginning of the end. This really was a dark time in BSB history. Howie is lucky to have someone as supportive as Leigh in his life; I'm enjoying the way you're showing their relationship blossoming. I laughed at Nick waking up in the fan's room and seeing his face plastered all over her walls. I was afraid she was going to turn out to be young enough to still live with her parents, and they'd walk in on him or something LOL. I laughed at the Kevin part when he was worried about Nick sleeping with a crazy fan who recognized his voice. Hopefully Nick goes back for his phone so they can finally get in touch. Thanks for the update; I enjoyed it! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I went back and watched that Diary episode when I was writing this, and there are a lot of moments in there that just seem awkward now that we know so much of the behind the scenes stuff. It was kind of hard to watch. I'm glad you like the Howie stuff because I still find it a little awkward to write him, especially with Leigh. LOL Ohh Nick, I tried to make it seem like she would be old enough. And how creepy would it be to wake up in a place where there are a million pictures of you hanging on the wall. Poor Nick lmao. I'm glad you liked the Kevin part, I was laughing while I was writing it. The whole conversation was just so awkward. Thanks again, Julie! I'm so happy you liked it! :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 09:57 pm Title: Day 16

I lovwed the thoughts of I thikn it was Howie in the first part? Where he was watching the MTV Diary and realizing that's when AJ started ot have his problem. Also the insight into how it was for him to watch himself on TV and later he stopped because it felt like work. I sometimes wonder if they watch themselves or not. I'm not sure what i'd do either lol And of course Nick leaving his phone with a random fling and Kevin getting all mad and Kevin like. Great chapter Steph! :O)



Author's Response: Thanks Mare! It was Brian in the first part lol. I got so distracted while I was writing this chapter because I was watching the MTV Diary episode on youtube at the same time. I don't know if I'd want to watch myself on TV if I were as famous as they were. I'd feel so awkward! LOL silly forgetful Nick, and of course Kevin would have to be the one to call his phone and figure out that he left it. Thanks again, Mare! I'm glad you liked it!