Date: 06/10/11 07:42 am Title: Chapter 50
It be interesting to see what happens next to Brooke and Jasper...
Date: 12/12/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 50
aaawh it's the end.....
Thanks for keeping me occupied during my boring train rides to work haha. This was a really romantic story. To me is she, Brooke seems a little young to find true love, marry him evetually, life in the house that Jasper bought but well when he's one...you never know. They could live happily ever after.
Good luck with writting Pieces of me!
X
Author's Response: LoL I got all my 'true love' stories out of the way early on...my first three Coaster Girls are just lucky like that :) Now the last half of our girls are a little more worried about life than love :p
Date: 12/11/10 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 50
nice ending i am happy she found the one :) i always thought and hoped it was Trev but Jasper is the gr8 and just come out of no where and everyone fell in love with him not only Brooke we did too.
It is so sad we would not be hearing form the Carter for while gonna miss them but lookin forward for Ally story :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked the ending...I loved the Team Trevor / Team Nate fight going on for awhile, lol
Date: 12/11/10 03:00 am Title: Chapter 50
aaww nice end to BoBo! Thanks for another awesome story! can't wait for Ally's!
Date: 12/10/10 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 50
Awe... nice ending. Are you going start on Ally's story now? Just asking.
Author's Response: LoL I have some 'real life' stuff to take care of....this upcoming week is finals week at school. After that you guys are going to get bombarded with 3 straight weeks of updates!
Date: 12/10/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 50
Awwwww. Such a nice way to end the story. I'm gonna miss al ltheir craziness though. And I'm all ready missing Noah & Kayleigh quite a bit - lol.
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL wellll Kayleigh and Noah are easy to miss. I miss 'em too. Not to sound like a broken record, but you'll see them again when I get done with Ally and Stefie. Peyton's a Carter, remember. :)
Date: 12/10/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 49
You want it all, but you don't always get it all - lol.
~Lenni~
Date: 12/10/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 50
''I was eighteen years (and one day) old. You could have cut the sexual tension with a knife during my birthday party the night before. I was totally okay with going at it in a closet...or a car...or anywhere else. Jasper wouldn't hear of it.
His honor system had still been firmly in place.''
---Oh Jas... you are the one in command here. Brooke is like her father.
"This," Jasper said quietly. "Will someday be where I build our house."
I looked at him in surprise. "Our house."
He grinned. "Yup."
I stepped back and made my way around the cabana. There was nothing. Just tons of land.
"Are we trespassing?" I finally asked. He laughed.
"I bought the land a couple months ago. The house will have to come later. I need a few more paychecks," he teased.
I stopped a couple feet from him. "You bought all this land?" I asked increduously.
"If I eventually marry a superstar, we're going to need privacy," he said seriously.
---He bought a AND and he made a cabana??? WOWOW!!!! I love Jasper!
''There is a definite difference between making love and having sex. With Nate and Trev, it had been all about having sex. There was a high level of recklessness and spontaniety; the end result was only gratification. As Jasper and I made love, I realized that there was so much more than just pleasure from action. We were giving something to each other; something so much more.
It was like I was breaking my heart in half and giving it to Jasper, and visa versa. Our job was to cherish, nuture. In essense, we were heartbreakers...
Our two hearts were becoming one.''
--Beautiful way to explain Heartbreaker.
LOVELY!
I already miss this and tiny Landon!
BEAUTIFUL!
Date: 12/10/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 50
Now that was a beautiful ending to a wonderful story. Thanks soo much . it's great to read such a beautiful love story as this.
Author's Response: I'm a sucker for a good love story :)
Date: 12/10/10 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 49
''I kicked off my flip-flops and wiggled my toes. Just the mention of Jasper had me feeling all warm and tingly. I loved being in love. "I don't think he minds," I said lightly. Kay flipped over onto her stomach. She slid her suit straps down.
I closed my eyes and soaked up the sun. Jasper's gorgeous face floated behind my eyelids. I was leaving for Europe right after Kay's birthday. The Backstreet Boys had twelve sold out shows. Their opening act (aka me) couldn't have been more excited.
The Brits loved my dad; I hoped they would learn to love me.''
--Life is great...
''They were watching mom enjoy some 'mat' time with the twins. Landon's little hands pressed onto mom's back.
"Our babies are getting big!" he announced happily. He let out a shriek as dad scooped him up.
"Those are my babies Lan-do!" Dad said.''
---I think this is one of the best lines ever. LanLan was so cute!
''I felt like I was slowly filling the pages of that blank book the governor was talking about. I had plans; big plans. I wanted success; I wanted love...
I wanted it all.''
---Yes, you can have it all!
Author's Response: I love AJ's Have it All! :) Silly question to ask if YOU do :p
Date: 12/10/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 50
Awwww I so want a Jasper. Amazing job so well written. So can't wait for the next persons stories. Loved it.
Author's Response: I want a Jasper too! Love in a cabana? Heck yeah!
Date: 12/10/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 50
AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! What a sweet ending! How romantic of Jasper!!!!!!! I loved this story, there were so many twists and turns and questions to be answered. I am wholly satisfied with how this turned out, a happy ending of course. :) Amazing job as always, Jen. :D Can't wait for Ally and Peyton's stories.
Author's Response: I love Jasper. Brooke certainly had a crazy couple of years, but I think she found the best guy after all :)
Date: 12/10/10 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 49
Aw, this family...they're so cute. On to the last chapter... *sniff* :(
Date: 12/10/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 49
Awwww awesome chapter
Date: 12/10/10 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 50
Oh man what a sweet ending. Defiantly not who I thought she would end up with but who was very right for her. I still say you are one of the best writers out there. I will miss this but I am looking forward to your other stories. Please never stop writing.
Marguerite
