See I knew Kay would ruin things. (joke) Jasper has more sense than Brooke sometimes. I can see wanting to do it but the way she has been treated in the past waiting might not be such a bad thing. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

47 chapters makes big differents how some ppl was in team Nate and others where in team Trevor but after 47 chapters things little different not one person in the teams any more.  I am really surpise how this story turn out i thought she was gonna end up with one of the chimps lol but i happy that the away it turns out and also like Jasper is really nice :)

what do u mean about Pey and Ally story may not be  rom-coms? its so sad that Brooke story coming to the end :( gonna miss the crazy Carters but lookin forward to Ally story

Amazing job

Haha, I love how Jasper's will has to be enough for the both of them. lol I love the lunch scene when Noah freaks out. I'm sad that this is nearing the end. :( lol

''I forgot about murdering her for a second. "Really? You're okay with that? Wouldn't he think you're his aunt?"
Kay shifted. She plucked a blueberry out of the bowl and tossed it in her mouth. "I trust Bay and Marcie. Marcie's a psychologist. If there's anyone that can make a little kid understand a crazy family tree, it's her."
"How does Noah feel about it?"
"He's relieved. Hell, BooBoo, I'm relieved. I can't do this. I feel like a penguin that has to take a giant crap."
I groaned. "That's eloquent, Kay."
---Oh Kay... you can grow but the essence... Oh BooBoo... breath woman.


"Do I smell rum?"
Crap. I hopped up.
"Gotta go!"
--Kay is fast... Gotta Go was cute!


''I gave him the date. "Can you come?"
"I can totally come."
My mind went right into the gutter. I let out a little gasp.
"Brooklyn."
Even though he couldn't see me, I blushed. "What?"
"We have eleven months and twenty seven days. We can do this."
He was back in resolve mode. My resolve had crumbled irreparably.
"I'm weak," I admitted. "I want you. I'm a nymphomaniac."
"You are not. Believe me, I know once I get a taste that I'm not going to be able to stop," he said huskily.
The temperature in the room spiked. I fanned myself.
"I'll be strong for the both of us," he continued. "Let me know what color your dress is going to be, alright?"
I smiled. "Will do. Love you."
"Love you too, beautiful."
---My mind was at gutter too! And he's counting even the seconds, isn't he? She is a Carter, not a nympho!
Jas be strong for both of them? this guy is a super hero... Carters has super-sperm... Jas has super willpower!


Oh lill BT....


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Author's Response: LoL I think super willpower is safer than super-swimmers. :) I love having my mind in the gutter...but for almost a year! Poor Brooke :S

Awwwwww there morning got interrupted :( amazing job. Yay yay they love each other. So can't wait for more.

''Maybe it was because I was getting really fuzzy around the edges, but I could totally see the whole 'angel/devil on the shoulder' thing taking place. Jas ran a hand down his face. He turned his back on me and walked over to the bar. He hesitated for a second before he picked up a bottle.''
---This young man deserves some break... just saying.


''His tongue lapping against my skin was all it took. He sucked greedily. His mouth paused and all I felt was the fire from his breath. He made slow circles around my navel. He had every last drop sucked in seconds. I let out a soft moan and ran my hands through his hair. He looked at me and I knew.
I knew I was breaking every last stone of willpower.
Sober Brooke might have given him a break. Drunk Brooke? Not so much. I hooked my thumbs under my panties and shimmied them down.''
---A drunk Carter is dangerous. A Carter young woman is even more dangerous. Poor Jas... he loved her mouth to.. wow Drowning moment here...



"If you still want to in the morning," he said. "If you still love me in the morning, when you're sober, then it will happen."
"I'm not love drunk," I whispered. I closed my eyes; I knew I wasn't going to win the battle. My hands pressed against his. He kept kissing my neck and it felt nice...so nice. I knew I could get used to sleeping like this.
I probably wouldn't enjoy sleeping alone ever again.''
---Oh love.. love changes everything. Oh BooBoo... 12 more months? HELL NO! hahaha




''I scratched my fingers lightly along his back. He let out a sigh.
"It's morning," I whispered.
"Mm-hmm," he said. I wanted to see those beautiful brown eyes...
"I still love you," I said. I pressed my forehead to his.
He looked at me. He pressed me a little closer. My heart pounded happily.
"I love you too," he said.
He kissed my forehead and rolled out of bed. My mouth opened in protest.
"You smell like Crest," he said. "You can't smell like Crest and me smell like vodka and rum. It's not cool."
---Jas, my dear, willpower my socks, isn't!


Now I know how more sweet the scene at Kay's labor were. They love each other.... and Jas.. oh dear.


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I so thought it was going to happen. LOL! The right time will come.