Date: 12/07/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 44
Awwwww....Miss Brooke.....has a girl ever had to work so hard? Have to admit that Jasper is a man of honor!!! :)
Love it~
Date: 12/07/10 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 44
Leave it to Kay to ruin things. AGAIN!. I swear she has a sixth sense about these things. I like her with Jasper however I am positive Nick would lose that infamous Carter temper if he found out they were sleeping together & Jasper was letting her drink. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Any news on Liv & her babies????
Author's Response: She does have a total sixth sense. Where was Brooke interrupting her and Noah in the pool? Eh, it's over, right?
Date: 12/07/10 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 44
Hehe. Way to ruin a moment Kay - though, that may be a good thing - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 12/07/10 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 43
Tsk, tsk. Letting her drink is wrong Jasper....lol.
~Lenni~
Date: 12/07/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 42
Sometimes you only get one moment, one chance, to do things right. And sometimes you fuck that moment up; but things will always get better - maybe not before they get worse, but they will get better.
~Lenni~
Date: 12/07/10 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 44
Yey!!!! Jasper kept his promise(kinda!), despite temptations!!! Lol. He's my hero!!!
Let's how long they can hold themselves!!!
Author's Response: I gave Jasper MAJOR credit!
Date: 12/07/10 04:54 am Title: Chapter 43
Oh god !!! Why did it have to stop at this point!!! Can't you see we've been as desperate as Brooke for this night !!!! Lol!
I just have one request, that Brooke has a night that makes her forget about the other two!!! She deserves it. And she needs to tell him she loves him
Date: 12/07/10 04:38 am Title: Chapter 43
Oh man...this cannot be good or end well...thanks for all of the updates today. lol :)
Date: 12/07/10 04:33 am Title: Chapter 43
"I'm going to cash in the party come graduation"
Dad winked. "Deal."
Mom laughed. "That was such a Dorough wink."
"Shut up!"
---I love those winks.. shhhh
''And then we were going to spend the night at the Porofino Bay Hotel. That was the part we had the most problem with. Who knew dad could be so untrusting?''
--Oh HOW? HOW! HOW Carter could be soooo evil...
''Jasper had been smart to come early. After getting a rundown of 'rules,' meeting the twins, talking sports with dad and Noah, and explaining to Landon why we weren't taking him to Disney World, we were ready to go.''
--Jasper is a saint. Period.
"It's your birthday. Force yourself." I grabbed the spoon and dug in. "I could take a bath in this fudge," I declared.
Jasper's eyes darkened.
"Go on."
I kicked him under the table. "Shut up!"
---She is sooo evil. THIS is a Carter thing too. I will so make a book "The Carter Things. By Gabriele".
''I could tell that Jas was doubting his own sanity. He sat down on the ground as I held out the pile of playing cards I had found in my search of freebies throughout the room.
"It's on," I said. I sat across from him.
"That," he said. "is what I'm worried about."
--I AM doubting his own sanity! For Lord's love!
That man CAN'T be the Will Power in Person....
Bring the game ON!
NEXT!
Date: 12/07/10 04:26 am Title: Chapter 43
awwww i just love them together. hope there is more from there hotel night together. cant wait for more
Date: 12/07/10 04:17 am Title: Chapter 43
There's no way in HELL they are making it to her 18th birthday.........
Author's Response: Why ever not? What could possibly happen from an innocent game of drunken strip poker in a hotel room?
Date: 12/07/10 04:13 am Title: Chapter 43
I think something is going to happen between the two of them. At least she's having a good birthday. Can't wait to see what's going to happen with the strip poker.
Author's Response: So much for that comment about Brooke maturing, right? ::grin::
Date: 12/07/10 02:22 am Title: Chapter 42
Brooke is really maturing. It's great to see her becoming a woman.
Date: 12/07/10 02:00 am Title: Chapter 42
"Thank you for checking on me," mom said. I leaned against her. "It's okay," I said. "I hate to hear them cry."
Mom smiled. "Spoken like a great future mom."
"In the far, far distant future," I said.
"It better be," mom said. She smiled down at Megan.''
---BooBoo is good with babies. PEASE, WAIT!
''Ten minutes later, the officer had my autograph and I cruised into the school parking lot. I felt a little guilty that I had pulled the celebrity card, but it was better than telling mom and dad I was being reckless.
Then again, I was a Carter.''
--Yeah.. it comes with the genes, indeed.
And what was Jas talking those dirty things! PEOPLE! And they are counting the months.. hahaha
"I'm going to make a good women out of you yet."
"If I remember correctly you said I was pretty good when I had my mouth on your--"
"Your mouth on what?"
I looked up. Noah was hovering in my doorway grinning. I panicked and hung up on Jasper.
--and yes.. it comes with the genes this too... what a timing Carters.. what a 100%Horny state! hahah Her mouth on... we know where...
"The little dude deserves more," Noah said. I saw how much it hurt him. I suddenly felt bad for chucking my shoe at him.
"NoNo, I'm sorry..." I whispered. My phone began to ring. Noah backed up.
"Later," he said.
I wished I could fix things. I wanted to go back in time, stop Kay and Noah from getting down and dirty. I wanted to take back sleeping with Nate and Trevor.
I wanted my first time back. I wanted to give it to Jasper.
But it was gone.''
--yes, that's why we must think....
Poor Noah and Kay.
NEXT!
Date: 12/07/10 01:36 am Title: Chapter 42
Oh Brooke life just sucks sometimes. Can't wait for more
