Date: 12/07/10 01:29 am Title: Chapter 42
:( Sad ending. I liked the beginning with Brooke helping Liv, that was a cute moment. And I liked Brooke's "I won't tell if you won't." ;) Great update.
Date: 12/07/10 01:07 am Title: Chapter 41
Spoiling a baby is the best part!!!!!!!!!! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 12/07/10 01:03 am Title: Chapter 40
Awww. Jasper's sweet.
~Lenni~
Date: 12/06/10 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 41
''Tension had built up while I was gone; I was almost homesick for my bus.''
-- I so know what she's homesicking....
''The only good part of February was Valentine's Day. Even though Jasper was in Jersey, we managed a nice, long video chat. He had sent me an edible mood candle as a gift; I returned the favor by giving him a little 'dripping wax' show. I know I should have learned my lesson about technology and body parts, but the look on Jasper's face kinda trumped common sense.''
--MY face was o.0.... she IS a Carter.. wow!
Jasper is THE will power in person..
"Da babies are coming!" Landon said. I watched as he poked a finger into Kay's belly. She smiled down at him.
--awww I remember this day.. oohh LanLan...
"Boys have hoses!" Landon said proudly. "Girls have tacos!"
"LANDON!"
Noah snickered; I didn't have to guess where Landon had heard that theory.
---hahha bringing back MASON!!! But now with tacos....
"Hey BooBoo," dad said. He sounded excited.
"How's mom?" I asked.
"Amazing. Perfect. I can't think of any other adverbs right now."
"Adjectives," I corrected. Dad laughed.
"Thanks smartie. Has everyone eaten?"
---hahah Oh Carter....
''I let out an excited giggle. "We can come up?" I asked. "All of us?"
"Everyone single one of you. We'll be waiting."
---awww so cute!!
''They were so tiny. And pink. A little finger poked out. A little face squished up and yawned.
I was in love.''
-- I AM in love!
"What a different sixteen years makes," dad said. I looked up. He was looking at me with love. "You couldn't look at your brother without screaming. And now..."
--what a difference TIME makes...
''Landon beamed at his big brother.
"This one's Taryn," he said.
"And this one's Megan!" He clapped his hands excitedly.
"He can tell them apart better than I can," dad said with a laugh.
"They're identical?" Noah asked.
"Down to the last drop," dad con
---LanLan.... oh boy!
''I didn't like the sound of his voice; it sounded ominous. Kay seemed to know exactly what he was referring to. As Noah handed Megan back to me, I looked down at her tiny face. I knew firsthand how lucky she was; she had a great mom and dad.
She also had a big sister that was going to spoil her and Taryn rotten.''
--sometimes you must do what you HAVE to do....
NEXT!
Author's Response: LoL Brooke's in LOVEEEEE...with babies and a certain Jasper :)
Date: 12/06/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 40
''I wiggled away from his hands and sank to my knees. Slowly I brought his zipper down. His hands got a grip on my hair. And I got a grip on his...''
---Ooohhhh that was... Ooohhh
''Jas walked around the room looking in the bouquets. He finally found the long silver chain in a bouquet over by the couch. He came over and slipped it around my neck; in the process, he just happened to loosen my towel. It floated to my feet.
"Whoops," he said unconvincingly. His fingers brushed down my stomach and around my navel. My breath caught.
"How many more months until you're eighteen?" he asked in a strangled tone.
"Fourteen."
'Fuck' he mouthed silently. He bent down, picked up my towel, and wrapped it back around me.''
--Jas has will power... WOW!
NEXT!
Date: 12/06/10 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 41
Aw. :) The twins! :) And we know that Kay is "right". Can't wait to read about the Carter twin-infant craziness! lol
Date: 12/06/10 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 40
Man, this age thing has gotta be torture for both of them! I just wonder if they'll last long enough until Brooke's 18...what a cool and romantic surprise by Jasper! On to the next update... :)
Date: 12/06/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 41
Awwwwww what a cute family moment can't wait for more.
Date: 12/06/10 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 40
Awww I so love them together hehe Amazing job so can't wait fOr more.
Date: 12/06/10 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 40
Jasper seems like a good man. Willing to wait for her to be 18. I'm betting they don't make it. She deserves some real love after what she has been through. The only thing that would make me livid was when her grandfather bugged her bus. Not cool. Like no one trusts her. Keep up the great work.
MArguerite
Date: 12/06/10 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 40
Jasper is such a romantic. I think they are a good match. Will Jasper actually wait until she's 18? I am curious to see.
Author's Response: Jasper's a good guy. Fourteen months...that's a tough call isn't it?
Date: 12/03/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 39
I do like how they do creative. He is keeping his promise to wait until she is 18. I'm surprised. The last two hurt her & I'm sure she doesn't want that to happen again. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/03/10 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 39
At the start of this story i was trying to see where this was going yes you also know who team i was in from the start. Now on chapter 39 things have change alot some of us a no longer in the teams we started of with. Really love ur writing keep up the good work
I know Brooke stories is almost finish so gonna miss her and her fam :( but lookin forward seein Ally
Just love Jasper now
Date: 12/03/10 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 38
Only one to blame Noah is you not your sister
I love Jasper he so go
Yes Brookelyn bet he so looking forward having the private lessons :p
Date: 12/03/10 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 37
So that how he got busted lol all b/c his sis could not sleep yep Noah diff not ready for a baby. Poor Nick givng him heartattack like that hehe bet he wish is was the babies. I would of loved to see Noah face when he seen his dad it will be picture perfect
It is gr8 seein it all from Brooke side, yes i am now really happy that they give him to Baylee
