Date: 10/12/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh boy.. I smell trouble... I smell Carter!
Loved!!!
Carter knows his genes..... GO BROOKE!
I love how Carters interact with each other, Nick's such a great dad!
And Nate.. oh BOY!
"Breakfast tomorrow, huh?"
I turned. Dad was leaning against the wall, his arms crossed.
"You were listening?"
"I just caught the end of the conversation," dad said lightly. He stood up and began walking towards the exit.
"He's eighteen, BooBoo," dad called out behind him. I made a face.
Leave it to dad to insinuate that my harmless conversation was anything more.
As if!''
Oh Carters....
NEXT!
Author's Response: LoL 'Carters' sums it up about right. :)
Date: 10/12/10 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooooooh Nate is 18! That is sooooo old! Nick calm down he is only 2 years older than Brooke. You're acting like he's 28. Go for it Brooke! Dark hair and green eyes reminds me of Kevin. Damn hotttt! Lol!
Author's Response: LoL yeah I know, 18 is so ancient. I think that would entice me more. And you're right...dark hair green eyes. Young Kevin look-a-like. Fi-one with me!
Date: 10/12/10 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
"He's eighteen, BooBoo," dad called out behind him. I made a face.
Oh Daddy true and true!!! Great start! I have to say that I almost think of Hannah Montana a little, with the Lola clothing person! Not that they are anyways otherwise alike...just made me giggle!
Author's Response: LoL see this is what happens when I'm writing and hubby's watching Hannah Montana (yeah, we're dorks). I needed a name and so bam, LoLa. haha. I figured a couple of you would get that reference!
Date: 10/12/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh lord he is hot. However TEAM TREVOR!!!!!!!!! I just had to get that out. Nate sounds like a good guy but I wonder who she will choose? Excellent start but then I always love what you write.
Marguerite
P.S. Is the one on the right Trevor?
Author's Response: LoL the one on the right is Trevor...he's got more of the 'Nick' look to him. Not identical because that would be Noah (hence Noah's hot factor, lol). Nate's on the left. Who will she choose indeed? :)
Date: 10/12/10 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww a boy who knows she isn't a party girl! Nick is a small party pooper, he should keep an eye on them but still not take it to the AJ extreme. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Oh Nick won't take the AJ extreme...lol but a little warning every now and then doesn't hurt :p
Date: 10/12/10 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lmao! That's 'cause your Dad KNOWS you Brooke! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL of course he does...that's because he knows himself and a female version of a Carter can't be THAT different! :)
Date: 10/12/10 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cant wait for more :) get to know this Nate but deep down would lov for her to end up with Trevor but we so with with this Nate :)
lookin forward reading more
Author's Response: LoL I know my team Trevor girls are going to hop on over here! Staaay tuned. :)
Date: 10/12/10 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
--"Well, they don't call August the dog days of summer for nothing," dad pointed out.
"Dad, it's too hot for dogs out here," I complained.-- heheheh
--I whirled around. A dark haired guy with amazing green eyes and perfect teeth was smiling at me. He had a camera around his neck and a huge bag slung over his shoulder.
He was gorgeous. And he had caught me at the exact moment that I had gotten a butt blister.
Perfect.-- of course she'd fall for the cameraman :) She is her daddy's daughter :) Don'tcha just luv the guys timing? :)
--I unscrewed the water and took a drink. A big line dribbled down my chin.
So attractive.-- gotta luv the dribble :)
-- Of course sam 'broke' his leg ;)
--"Alright," I said. "Be prepared to cut these pants off me when I get off the stage. If they don't melt first."-- Damn, leather? What was she thinking... oh, right, they make her butt look great... ROTFLMAO!
--"Because of you guys, this song just recently made it to number one. This song is very special to me. You see, my brother wrote it. It's called Chaotic."-- woohoo, gotta give credit where credit is due :)
--From superstar to nobody in ten minutes.-- yeah, right... i doubt you'll ever truly be a 'nobody' BooBoo.
--"He's eighteen, BooBoo," dad called out behind him. I made a face.
Leave it to dad to insinuate that my harmless conversation was anything more.
As if!-- He's daddy... it's his job :)
Author's Response: She totally is her daddy's daughter. I love when guys have bad timing...it makes that first meeting unforgettable. And leather in a hundred degree heat...the girl's nuts even if she does look good! Glad you enjoyed the first chapter. :)
Date: 10/12/10 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh and i was the first to review. go me haha
Author's Response: LoL being first is nice isn't it? :)
Date: 10/12/10 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loving this already!!! I'm sensing our little booboo is going to get herself into a bit of a mess haha.
Still, its nice seeing her being more outspoken and less shy.
Cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: I think what happened to Kay is making her reevaluate herself. They were two extremes and I think she's inching more towards the middle now. :) BooBoo is a Carter - Carter's live for messes, haha.
