Date: 07/20/11 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
Well I like the story and the idea but for me it ended too quick and was too short. I did enjoy reading it...I will leave comments on the forum too. Awesome job!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked. It was quite short, but I was imagining it as an episode of Supernatural and therefore didn't want to drag it on for loads more chapters. You should definitely watch Supernatural!
Date: 07/20/11 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
I totally had a WTF moment with this chapter, I am a bit lost I guess since I know nothing about Supernatural. I am still enjoying it!
Author's Response:
At the time of writing this, I'd only watched a few episodes of Supernatural and was so impressed with it, I had to write about it.
Date: 07/20/11 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Lol at Sam and dean talking about boybands and asking if people would miss Nick. Uh oh AJ got hit with an axe!!! I like how you used humor to break up the drama.
Author's Response:
I don't see Dean and Sam as the boyband loving type, lol. Glad you liked the chapter.
Date: 07/20/11 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow....I loved all the blood and gore. I wish it was a bit more descriptive but as for the writing it is well written and interesting.
Author's Response:
Love a bit of blood and gore too. Glad you think it's well written even if it's not descriptive enough for you.
Date: 07/20/11 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
The game is cursed and Nick is covered in bruises! Wtf lol. Awesome chapter...I am hooked!
Author's Response:
It's not a game I'd like to play, lol
Date: 07/20/11 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
Witchcraft, eh? Sounds like whatever it is it isn't a creature. Liking this a lot....moving on
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying!
Date: 07/20/11 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well I made it through 5 chapters and I really like it so far. I am gonna leave a critique on the forum in a bit!
Author's Response:
Glad you are liking so far!
Date: 07/20/11 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Uh oh Nick and AJ are in trouble with that game! I am really getting into this story and wondering what creature is killing people. Awesome so far!
Author's Response:
I wouldn't want to play that game, lol! Thanks Tracy :)
Date: 07/20/11 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
It seems to me that whatever killed Jacob took the game with them. Very interesting, I also like Sam and Dean's interactions too. I have never watched Supernatural but this story is well formed.
Author's Response:
I love Dean and Sam!
Date: 07/20/11 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ohhh now I'm intrigued. I think the game being possessed is a awesome idea!!! Reading on!
Author's Response:
I wouldn't want to be playing that game, lol.
Date: 07/20/11 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like that you included the soundcheck, had the guys happy and joking around. It kind of makes me want to read more considering the summary and banner. Like the calm before the storm.
Author's Response:
I quite liked the soundcheck part. Never been to one, so have no idea if it was accurate, but in my mind that's how they are.
Date: 11/26/10 07:47 am Title: Chapter 11
So sorry for the late review... but I had to let you know I loved the ending. Glad AJ didn't get killed! You did wonderful job... loved this kinda sad I read it so fast. :)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed it. I loved writing this one :)
Date: 11/20/10 05:15 am Title: Chapter 11
aww bravo Steph!! Great ending and i'm so glad they both managed to live. I have to admit, I thought you were going to kill one of them. I'm so glad you tried this genre and hope to see more of these from you! IN the meantime...Rewind is waiting! :O)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review Mare :) I must admit, I was going to kill AJ off, but then decided against it after killing him in the game. I'm glad I tried this genre too, it's been fun to write, but now it's over, I'll get back to Rewind and try and get that one updated soon.
Date: 11/20/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter 11
Aww I'm glad AJ and Nick got out alive! Good thing Sam and Dean were able to find them. I really liked this story, Steph! It was very well written and very suspenseful. Also you're making me want to watch more Supernatural now! Great job with this one :)
Author's Response: Thanks Steph, I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) I was going to kill AJ off, but decided against it in the end. I want to watch more Supernatural too, I'm up to Series 2 episode 4 now, still a long way to go before I'm up to date!
Date: 11/19/10 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
Is there going to be a sequel to this, it was so good you had me going the whole time.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it. There won't be a sequel though, but I might write another Supernatural one some day!
