Date: 11/22/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 3..Whatever Baylee wants..
i like this!
Date: 11/21/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1...Baylee's Family
Since you were asking for a beta reader, I edited your first chapter for you, but your account has been locked temporarily. Please contact the mods via email.
Date: 11/20/10 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 2 Hi Brian. Im Baylee Thomas Wylee Carter
i was hoping you would update. i love this story so far and cant wait to read more
Date: 11/20/10 10:09 am Title: Chapter 2 Hi Brian. Im Baylee Thomas Wylee Carter
Must be really hard for brian. suddenly he wakes up and dont have family
Date: 10/19/10 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 1...Baylee's Family
This is a sweet story!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 10/16/10 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1...Baylee's Family
Feel free to email me before they get you.
Marguerite
Author's Response: yeah i will deff email you sunday
Date: 10/16/10 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1...Baylee's Family
Hey hun I noticed the "mods" are cracking down on people. I would be more than happy to help you with spell checking or anything else. Here is my email. catseye1769@yahoo.com
I look forward to hearing from you.
Marguerite
Author's Response: omg that would be amazing. yeah cause i have so much going on i cant make sure every little thing is correct.
Date: 10/16/10 04:31 am Title: Chapter 1...Baylee's Family
There are too many things to mention in all honesty but in your summary alone I can give you an idea by using () on all the things that need to change.
Baylee was in a tragic accident with his mother and father (Tho) he came out uninjured. (lieghanne)died on (sence) and Brian came out with head (trama) that put him in to a deep coma. (baylee) was put in to the custody of his (fathers) best friend and his god father where he (whouse?) (hold and under the care of the father and mother he knows now.) (can brian an) his best friend get (threw baylees) decision.?? (could remain. for 9 yrs when brian finally coms out of his coma). (can baylee) go back to his father or will he want to remain in the ????
in total there are
Misspelled words: 13
Run-on sentences: 4
Fragments: 1
Unfinished sentences: 1
Punctuation errors: 7
Capitalization errors: 6
And a few, huh? moments.
Author's Response: I see the big one its where my mouse dragged a sentence in the wrong place cause it mess..
Date: 10/16/10 01:31 am Title: Chapter 1...Baylee's Family
You need to edit your summary and story. In your summary alone, you have a lot of grammatical errors. We are really cracking down on this on the site. We don't mean to come across rude, but I would hope you'd want your story to be at its best before posting it for all to see. You have one month from today to make corrections or this story will be deleted.
Author's Response: if you could let me know whats messed up cause its getting threw my spell check ????
Date: 10/15/10 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1...Baylee's Family
sounds really good!! looking forward to more!
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 10/15/10 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 1...Baylee's Family
i like it so far! :)
Author's Response: thank you
