Date: 11/24/10 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aw man this was so sad. At least she wants the baby but I have to wonder if she really is happy? Keep up the excellent work.
MArguerite
Date: 11/24/10 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aww man I was hoping for them to get back together. Maybe in the future. He realizes what a mistake he made so he won't make it again. Keep up the excellent work.
MArguerite
Date: 11/19/10 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love it!! Felt so sad for Nick in this chapter. He's realising just what he's lost by acting foolish that one time. More!!!
Author's Response:
TY. :) I do feel a bit sorry for Nick myself in this chapter. Probably no updates today, I won't be home tonight, but I will be trying to get a couple chapters ahead of myself on this one. Maybe an update tomorrow night when I get home? ;)
Date: 11/18/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great writing! I love a good Nick story, especially when he screws up and has to work at retribution :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :) Great Nick stories are my absolute fave!
Date: 11/18/10 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh man I knew she still loved Nick. Hurt doesn't cancel 4 years of love. And you should know how determined Nick is when he wants something. I hope he can get Laney to leave whats his name. Who should realize he does not stand a snowballs chance in hell oh winning against Nick. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Date: 11/18/10 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh shit Nick you thought with your other head and lost her. Now to get her back. I really hope you do. With that last text message I do not believe she is happy with that guy she married. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank you Marguerite! :) This whole idea popped into my head yesterday while I was walking home from work listening to my iPod... We'll see what comes of it! :)
Date: 11/18/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start Amber! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)