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Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 12:14 pm Title: He Had It Coming

OMG; Howie doing this? Sweet D? LOL. This was so bloody and had some much anger! Great job!



Author's Response: LOL well even Howie would have his limits right? Hehe. Thanks!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 03:11 pm Title: He Had It Coming

Ummmmm wow O.o damn....howie....he, uh...has some issues! Yikes!

Author's Response: LMAO yeah, but Nick brought him to that point

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 09:26 am Title: He Had It Coming

I notice you Howie...after AJ. haha. wow... very nice. I like it in a very twisted sort of way. I might never listen to incomplete the same way. Nice. Am I weird cause I liked this? LOL.

Author's Response: LOL well if you're weird, then I'm weird cause I wrote it! But thank you! lol

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 05:52 am Title: He Had It Coming

Very different but very entertaining

Author's Response: Thanks! I try to be a bit different LOL :) Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 09:12 pm Title: He Had It Coming

Wow Rose, I loved that! I can imagine there's only so much shit a person could take before they reach breaking point, and Nick pushed Howie too far when he shaved his head! I loved how you added those words from Incomplete too :)

Author's Response: Thanks! And there totally is lol. Poor Howie, but at the same time... poor Nick too lmao. Thanks :)

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 06:47 am Title: He Had It Coming

Wow...too many Zombie movies for you girl!! lmao!! I can totally see Howie's Puerto Rican ass goin all apeshit on Blondie..too many years of pent up frustration..lol That was gruesome..but GREAT! Loved it!

Author's Response: LMAO or horror in general. :) See! Howie's been abused too long is all! Thanks Jen! :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 06:40 am Title: He Had It Coming

Wow. Totally NOT something I shoulda read before bed! Been having enough nightmares as it is - lol.

But Howie!?!?!?! Howard!?!? Howard Dwaine Dorough!?!?!? The one I constantly defended all these years & loved, because he was HOWIE. Because he was the SWEET one. Because he'd s nice body & voice. The one whose named I used to shout out when walking down the street in my chant of "I LOVE HOWIE!" HOWIE!?!?!?! The one I took because no one else wanted him & I didn't want him to be left out, becauise I loved him too.

*jaw hits floor in surprise*

Jeez. Keep him away from Brian!!! Or I may hafta come after him! *waves my pointy sticks* And then I'd be rotting in a cell myself - maybe even the one he's in now. Lol. I can just hear me going, "Back away from B-rok!"

~Lenni~

P.S. How DARE Nicky shave Howie's head! I guess he did kinda have it coming.....



Author's Response: LMAO awwww! Yes, even Howie has his limits. Even "Sweet D" can be tempted into rage lmao. Think of all the years of pain Nick inflicted on him. Nick definitely had it coming LMAO.

Reviewer: DragonStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 06:11 am Title: He Had It Coming

I just... wow... That was awesome. Like I said already to you, it was a bit gory at the end, but I suppose it was necessary gore. I'm not sure whether to feel bad for Nick that he got dismembered, or Howie because Nick pushed him over the edge. Nevertheless, you managed to work in one of my favorite musicals so I love this all the way no matter what. :D



Author's Response: Awww thank you Mel lol. It had to be gory, horror without gore just isn't very fun LOL. I think Nick probably deserves the pity since he's the one who got dismembered and mutilated. He's not so pretty now :(. I love Chicago, and I love that song, it's stuck in my head right now lol.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 06:03 am Title: He Had It Coming

Wow Rose...what's going on in your mind lately? Lol! This was pretty hardcore but funny. Lol at the part with Nick's password and leaking the songs. That cracked me up. I can totally imagine Howie with a temper when he gets really pissed. Love how he was whistling to himself when he got caught! Good stuff :)

Author's Response: I'm incredibly twisted lmao. In a good way since it's used purely for writing though. This was Julie's fault! We were joking about my other one, saying Howie should get revenge too...and well... lmao. Thanks Sel!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 05:59 am Title: He Had It Coming

LMFAO you are such a delightfully disturbed Double Rainbow! I love it!! I enjoyed your last short story, but this one is even better! Sawing off Nick's arms with a shard of glass... pocketing his eyeballs... empty spaces filled with holes... You have ruined Incomplete for me, but I'll forgive you because I love your effed up twisted stories! LMAO I guess Nick really did drive Howie crazy! Poor Nick LOL.

Author's Response: LMAO thank you. Howie took me to a happy dark place :). I love that I destroyed Incomplete. Now whenever you hear that line, you'll just see Nick's empty sockets dripping blood along his mutilated face... :) Thanks TR!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 05:58 am Title: He Had It Coming

okay no more Chicago watching for you, young lady! LOL Poor psychotic Howie. I guess I should say poor Nick instead. Of course leave it to the cruise for him to finally lose his mind! Lets hope that doesn't really happen.

Author's Response: LMAO I like psychotic Howie! Poor Nick though, he met a horrible end lmao. I hope it doesn't happen either. :P

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 05:58 am Title: He Had It Coming

what the?? Rose another one like this? LOL

Author's Response: I'd like to think this one is a bit more twisted :)