Date: 12/24/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
This story is great. I love how you capture younger Nick and Brian, especially Nick. There are parts of this that crack me up, like Nick pranking and his "little brother" jealousy. A threesome! That was hillarious! I like the added drama of '98 as well with Brian and how you're presenting it. Look forward to reading the rest.
Author's Response: Thanks! We decided to kick it old school. Nick's usually immature in fanfics, but making him 18 makes it a million times better! -- Jen
Date: 12/23/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
I can't believe Nick did that... I mean, I know he is all overprotective with Brian, but it was too much what he did. I can't wait for more!
Date: 12/23/10 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
*waves pointy sticks threateningly* Nickolas Gene Carter!!! Does NO ONE ELSE give a flying FUCK about Brian's heart here!?!?!?!? Leighane actually fucking CARES about Brian's well being! All YOU fucking want Carter, is a side-kick to help you party & get boned. QUIT THINKING WITH YOUR FUCKING DICK, YOU PEA-BRAINED IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Ha! I knew I'd see the pointy stick. Nick's self-centeredness is going to back fire I tell ya! - Jen
Date: 12/23/10 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
Nick is an asshole lol. A loveable adorable and sexy asshole. Poor Brian, he's going to regret everything! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah you can't take the sexy out of that boy ::sigh:: -- Jen
Date: 12/23/10 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 14
i like this story a lot :)
well nick got his wish so what is he going to do now...
Date: 12/23/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 14
So Nick got what he wanted and he's not so happy about it, serves him right. Can't wait for more.
Date: 12/23/10 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yeah Nick you should feel like shit now. She is actually good for him and unlike some people wants the best for him. He needs to have that surgery and is in denial. At least she wants what is best for him unlike his best friend. I still say you two are FF gold. Keep up the excellent work and collaborate again please.
Marguerite
Date: 12/23/10 06:09 am Title: Chapter 13
Nick, you're such a prick. Brian has a BAD HEART - did you NOT hear that fucknig part!?!?!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Is Nick gonna get your pointy stick? I was kinda hoping for that moment, lol. - Jen
Date: 12/22/10 04:20 am Title: Chapter 13
I ironically enough read this while I was AT taco bell. Made me laugh when he was ordering, he sounds like my customers. Un-supreme LOL. The whole thing made me laugh and on top of that he ordered a diet soda. However...Taco Bell serves Pepsi, not Coke...just thought I would point it out. Other than that, epic chapter and loving the word Chalupalicious
Author's Response: LOL I was wondering the Pepsi/Coke thing because of their Baja MtDew - pengi
Date: 12/21/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG; Carter is so evil, and I love it, haha.
Date: 12/21/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
Nick! What are you doing? Leighanne asked you to look after Brian! Ugh!
Date: 12/21/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh lord this made me crack up. Especially when he asked her if she like Llamas. And The Carter Cobra??? Lord only Nick. And his plan with the phone I can't wait to see how this turns out. She really does care for Brian. I wonder how long it will take Nick to realize that? Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Y'know you want some Cobra Marguerite :) lmfao...Nick's so freakin' nuts. Gotta love him
Date: 12/21/10 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 13
"I had another plan! Mwhahahahahahaha!"
This sounds like the evil laughter... Oh Nick!
Date: 12/21/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol Nick is so devious
Date: 12/17/10 06:28 am Title: Chapter 12
Another great update, Nick is SO immature and annoying. lol
Author's Response: My favorite Nick to write! :)
