Date: 12/29/10 12:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Aaw, it was so cute what happened there!
Date: 12/28/10 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Aww he is so sweet to her. He is probably the first person to ever treat her like a human being. She deserves it. Deep down she is a decent person. She just wasn't strong enough to outlive her demons. Excellent work as always.
Marguerite
Date: 12/28/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Oh lord to wake up like that with Nick on top of me holding a bottle of chocolate syrup. What? A woman can dream can't she? They really are good together. Keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: IRK ;) mmm, mm, mmm!
Date: 12/28/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Oh trust me honey he does give a damn about you. More than anyone else. does. Too bad she never stays away from the drugs. She is a good person just very troubled. Please update soon.
Marguerite
Date: 12/28/10 09:45 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Oh I hope she is ok. And the image of Nick being on stage in a Burlesque hall is priceless, That is so something Nick would do. Sad thing about this story is he really does love her. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/28/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
See he does love her. He worry about her & I bet her worthless piece of shit mother doesn't care at all. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/28/10 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Please tell me her mother gets hurt in some horribly painful way. And suffers a lot. She is the worst influence on Krystal ever. Excellent work keep it up.
MArguerite
Date: 12/28/10 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Ok I would have punched Peggy the nasty cunt in the face. Bitch deserves it. As for Kevin yeah he does treat Nick like a 3 year old but sometimes he deserves it. He just cares about him. Keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/28/10 09:29 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
See I agree with what Krystal said about the press. Fuck what they think. Not worth it. I you have to like her for taking the blame over stealing the boat. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/28/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Oh my lord does she have some serious issues. She is very beautiful in his eye. And I suspect always will be. Maybe you could find a pic of her. I hope no jail time for borrowing the boat. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I see her as a cross between Pink and Katy Perry in my head... these are the 3 pix I kinda have to inspire her looks:
Picture 1 (Pink)
Picture 2 (Katy Perry)
Picture 3 (Katy Perry)
Date: 12/28/10 09:19 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Man what an adventure life was with these two. If they had sobered up and stayed that way I think they might have made it. Keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/28/10 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Well life with her was never boring was it. Nick & drugs not a good mix. I feel sorry for her. It seems like she was doomed from the start.
Marguerite
Date: 12/28/10 09:08 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Aww they really are cute together. In a weird dysfunctional way. I still wonder if they would have stayed together if she had lived. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/28/10 08:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Does she have money to do that? She not gonna steal it right? hmm interesting. Keep up the good work. The story needs more reviews!
Date: 12/28/10 02:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Aaaw, Nick is so nice to her! And I think Krystal is finally giving a chance with him. Continue please :)
