Date: 12/21/10 02:19 am Title: Chapter Three
Yes her mom is a bitch but in a way I can see where she is coming from. I think they whole family is nuts & could use time with Dr, Hazelton. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Go Legend of the Bone Ranger
Date: 12/21/10 01:30 am Title: Chapter Two
I laughed and laughed all this chapter, LOL. I kinda like how they fight each other, they make me laugh.
"Where's your front door?"
He stared at me a moment. Obviously weighing the smartass remark he wanted to make and the actual answer. Finally, he got it out of his system. "On the front," he said.
LOL. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I can SO picture him saying that... and the look on his face when he did. LOL...Y'know when he says something naughty and his eyes sparkle and he kinda grins out of the side of his mouth? Yup. LOL
Date: 12/21/10 01:23 am Title: Chapter Two
Ok...I actually SNORTED when I got to this part: "You won this on The Price is Right?" The Marco Polo thing has me giggling too.
Man, something right THERE shoulda told Nick to run and HIDE from this lunatic! She's clearly a few fries short of a happy meal.
I'm lovin this so far!
Author's Response: lmfao.. Confession: the Price is Right line was a result of me falling asleep writing the other day while writing the trial for Fix, and finding a bunch of random shit that had nothing to do with the story typed when I woke up. Apparently, I dreamt that line. LOL But hell, it works GREAT here!! LOL
Date: 12/21/10 01:20 am Title: Chapter Two
Oh yeah they were meant for each other. I wonder if they would have made it if she lived. I still feel sorry for her. Keep up the excellent work.'
MArguerite
Date: 12/21/10 12:42 am Title: Chapter One
Haha, Nick thinks she is crazy. I loved how the chapter ended.
I’d been laying there maybe a minute and a half when the singing started once more.
LOL. Can't wait for more :D
Date: 12/21/10 12:34 am Title: Prologue
I liked the start! Some reporters were really hard on her. I hope things get better!
Date: 12/21/10 12:14 am Title: Prologue
I hate most female characters in BSB fanfiction. I feel i might like this one. Keep it up.
Author's Response: :) I hope you do like Krystal... She's gonna be an interesting one to write, I'm pretty excited.
Date: 12/20/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter One
So they meet. What a way to meet. She is nuts but I feel for her. She needs help. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/20/10 10:34 pm Title: Prologue
Veeeeeery interesting start. I'm so happy you burst out of the gate with this and didn't make us wait! EEEK!! As always, can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: LOL I have today off, so... Lots of writing got done today :)
Date: 12/20/10 10:32 pm Title: Prologue
SO she is human after all. I knew she wasn't that bad just very messed up. Even knowing how it ends I want o read her story. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
