Date: 12/30/10 02:59 am Title: Chapter 6
LMAO oh the Carter clan; they always make things interesting. I was cracking up in the scene where Kevin was passed out, and Jane was like, "If he dies, does medical choices deflect to family?" and Brian's crying, "HEAL HIM!" LMFAO It's like a circus! Kevin talking out loud and getting odd looks from people is hilarious too. "No one is man handling your balls." Hahaha! And Pancake! Love. This story is great! :)
Author's Response: lmao When isn't it like a circus around BSB? Pancake's indigo hair made me LOL when Jen wrote it too! and yeah, the Carter Clan is a recipe for trouble... Ty for reading!! :) <3Pengi
Date: 12/30/10 12:17 am Title: Chapter 5
Kevin is going crazy with Nick, haha. I really hope things get better and I hope Nick didn't disappear from Kevin sight!
Date: 12/30/10 12:10 am Title: Chapter 4
At least Nick have a week! I hope he wake up. Nick is kinda annoying Kevin, lol <3
Date: 12/30/10 12:03 am Title: Chapter 5
an amazing chapter..thumbs up..
i feel so sorry for nick,though he's driving kev out of his mind..lool
Date: 12/29/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
OK....where did Nick go?
Date: 12/29/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
I doubt it, Kevin. 'Nick' is probably just upset by what you said. Can't wait for more.
Date: 12/29/10 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this is heartbreaking...and somehow funny at the same time. I totally LOL'd at the Mountain Dew comment. And I crack up everytime I read "mirage" Nick as well. Poor Brian. I can only imagine what he's feeling and not having any control. And I can totally see Nick's parents fighting in the room over this. And I can't wait to find out what happened to Nick at the end.
Date: 12/29/10 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh Kevin. And they're giving Nick a week...on to the next chapter.
Date: 12/29/10 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great job with this chap, ladies! Love how Kevin keeps going back and forth with believing in Nick's "ghost." I love the Dirty Dancing reference. And how annoying Nick was at the beginning. LOL!
Date: 12/29/10 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
No. You've scared the shit outta him Kevin. Just HELP him & I am SURE real Nick will come back to life! Damn it all to Hell! JUST HELP NICK!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL ::nudges Kev with the point sticks:: Listen to Lenni! - Jen
Date: 12/29/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
Roflmao! Gotta love Nick!
~Lenni~
Date: 12/29/10 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
where did "Mirage Nick" go this is getting interesting....
Date: 12/29/10 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love how Kevin calls Nick "mirage Nick" LOL. Nick's family is insane, poor guy. I would love to kick Aaron, like he is any better than Nick. Ugh lol. Great chapter and I'm sure Kevin is not rid of mirage Nick any time soon.
Date: 12/29/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
I just wanted to slap the shit out of Jane. The only reason she wants control is so she can pull the plug & get his money. Greedy bitch. Not sure if I agree with pulling the plug or not. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Nick's WHOLE family is insane. Why do you think Kevin's Nick's benefactor? He doesn't trust his own flesh and blood...
Date: 12/29/10 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nick is hilarious and poor Kev. He's in a very awkward position. Loving this so far