Reviews For Just One Kiss
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Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor Kevin...his struggles and Nick is not making his time easy. Great story~

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

LMFAO at Nick singing the Henry VIII song! He is so adorably annoying! I loved his antics while Kevin was on the phone with Brian. I laughed a lot in this chapter, but I do feel bad for Kevin and Brian... Nick too. :( Keep the chapters coming; I love this! :)

Author's Response: I LOVE Henry VIII...I used to sing it at work constantly. Full Brit accent and everything. Pengi did an awesome job describing Nick faux-hanging himself with the phone cord didn't she? :) - Jen

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 4

See even though this is supposed to be serious it is still hilarious. I can really see Nick making life hell for Kevin. Exactly like he did when he was in his body. And oh lord what a body. I really want to read more of this. I think you two should go on a writing binge with this. Excellent work as always.
Marguerite
Any hint on what you two are working on next?

Author's Response: LoL we have no clue what we're working on...I mean besides this. We know we're working on this. :) We went on a writing binge a few nights ago actually! -- Jen

Reviewer: sofdlovesbsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 4

I am enjoying this story even though the life support thing has touched close to home,i am glad your trying to make it light and a funny type thing with the nick mirage if that makes sense. I am glad Kevin believes it's Nick. I can't wait to read more,keep up the great work guys.



Author's Response: I went through it with my Mom - the life support thing... It's a hard subject to address because it IS such a sensitive one... But yeah we're trying to keep it light - the focus is really Nick and his annoying Kevin, not the life support issue. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! Ty for reading & reviewing :) <3Pengi

Reviewer: backstreetsbabyg Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 04:03 am Title: Chapter 3

this is crazy... but i like it!!!
I hope nick lives but knowing you guys we won't know till the end!!

Author's Response: Yeah, Nick better hope we write the last chapter when we're having a GOOD day. - Jen

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 02:34 am Title: Chapter 3

Kevin is so headstrong! He must believe Nick... And I hope he doesn't shut off the machines :( Update soon!

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 01:42 am Title: Chapter 2

Poor Nick! Nobody listen to him... ):

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1

I liked the start! To bad for Nick's accident ): Can't wait to read this story!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 3

What a cool storyline! Poor Kevin...I'd think I was going crazy as well. Can't wait to see where y'all go with this!

Author's Response: I'm TOTALLY in love with the storyline. We've got a lot to work with. -- Jen

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yeah that would probably be my reaction too if a ghost of my best friend appeared to me. Kevin is stronger than I am. Keep up the wonderful work. You two are priceless.
Marguerite

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oye vey. Kevin, you have GOT to believe him! He isn't dead yet! He needs your help with something! Jeez! Quit being such an asshole!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: LoL if it helps, we both agree Kev kinda sounds like an asshole right now. ::smiles:: -- Jen

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is really good so far, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oye vey in a half shell. You'd BETTER keep him on life support Richardson! So that after he finds 'the one' he can go back to his body & live again!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

LMFAO. Are you trying to give Kevin a heart attack?! LMAO at Nick screaming at Brian "for the love of Blonde Brian tell him to check yes" *roll* god I am dying over here. If Nick was laying in a hospital bed, I would be freaked out seeing him as a ghost too. Poor Poor Kevin. Loved this chapter.

Author's Response: I wouldn't mind the ghost of Nick coming to see ME, but then again I'm not picky on how I get me some Nickolas. :) Nick and Kev are like the Odd Couple - you KNOW this is going to be interesting.

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow, only you guys could make me laugh when Nick is on the brink of death LOL. Jen, the way you write his POV is just hilarious! I love the comic relief! And poor Kevin LOL. I loved the description of him as a little kid, too sensible to play pretend (while Brian played cowboy every day... too cute LOL). This is really interesting; still loving it!

Author's Response: Well we COULDN'T write a depressing story of Nick in a coma could we? And shucks, thanks for the Nick compliment. Nick's voice just plays out in my head SO well. And I also laughed out loud at Kev's imaginary play descrption. I love writing with Pengi cause I get sneak previews, tehee.