Date: 12/28/10 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
i love this story. i am already hooked on it. cant wait for another update. hope kevin doesnt go back and change his answer
Date: 12/28/10 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
Kevin...help poor Nick!!!
Date: 12/28/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, what a decision to make for poor Kevin. This is really good so far. I forgot to mention the part in the last chap with Baylee and the old testament. That totally made me LOL.
Author's Response: I SO loved the part about Baylee. I could really see that happening. Pengi always brings the LOL's - Jen
Date: 12/28/10 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
great story so far!!!! Bad start for Nick, but it's always nice to see Kevin! :)
Author's Response: Totally bad start for Nick. ::mutters:: darn hobos...
Date: 12/28/10 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow...great opening! Can't wait to see what you ladies come up with!
Date: 12/28/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh man, Nick must have a head injury. That's interesting about the whole life support issue with Nick. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 12/28/10 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, interesting new story. My one issue though: it's Kristin, not Kristen. lol Sorry, the grammar/spelling freak in me couldn't help but to point that out. :p Great start on this.
Author's Response: Oops, I'll go in and fix it. Ty :) Hope you enjoy! <3Pengi
Date: 12/28/10 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooh, all you guys have to do is put Nick in peril to get me hooked LOL. I love this so far!! The two points of view, with Nick's out of body experience, makes it even more interesting. Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! ;) There's a lot more peril to come, no worries. LOL <3pengi
Date: 12/28/10 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh lord I can really picture Brian go postal on bob the clown nurse. Kevin being the voice of reason makes sense. And I hope he can keep Nick's greedy family away from him. Keep up the excellent work. You have another winner on your hands.
Marguerite
Date: 12/28/10 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh shit what a beginning. You two are fan fiction gold. Keep up the awesome work. Hell I would read anything you two write with no description.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Imma silver girl myself but thanks! -- Jen haha yeah Hannah and I should write a total dialogue story - no description. THAT would be interesting!
Date: 12/28/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Nick's not looking too good. Glad Kevin showed up and LOL at the image of Brian bugging that nurse. Can't wait for more
Date: 12/28/10 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oye vey in a half shell. What a way to go Carter. No wonder they say no cell phones while driving!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LOL...IKR? ...lol You'll only get this if you've read Fix, but.... ZOE WOULD NOT APPROVE!!! <3Pengi
Date: 12/28/10 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
oooh nicky :S
greta start guys :D am loving it :)
Date: 12/28/10 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love new stories! Keep the updates coming!
Author's Response: I do too! It's like Christmas....again! :) - Jen
Date: 12/28/10 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh snap. This sounds like it will be a good one. Can't wait for more!
